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FINALLY!! Yay for Harry and Draco finally getting together! That scene was so cute! :) Oh boy, now action is really going to heat up (in more ways than one! ;)) I wonder what Dumbles is going to try now?

God, really? Stupid Ron, Hermione and people! Poor Sirius ;) great chapter, update soon!

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy(weeps like a baby) oh why did you have to bring in the whole potion thing in, how in the name of all that is delicious crispy bacon can they(harry/hermione) reconcile after that lol. Now Ron and GINNY(ginny who I happen to adore but would have thrown her under the bus in favor of Hermione for this fic), those two i could see in this story concocting something. Now i understand that in my past absolutely glorious reviews(takes a minute to fathom how awesome he is) i have denied being some 'pro hermione' nutjob.....but alas that was a lie... I AM a pro Hermione nutjob and damn proud of it( strikes a righteous pose while a massive poster of Hermione materializes behind him). And again as i have said before i love this story and the only reason i continuously pester (sorry) you about her is that i feel it would add quite a bit if she, a Muggleborn stayed friends with harry(and by association form a truce if not respect for malfoy and vice versa) who is a Slytherin now. I was honestly thinking in the back of my mind that you would find a way to somehow have hermione sent to Slytherin as well as it would

A) seperate her from Ron's influence and help rekindle her and Harry's friendship.

B) allow her to see things from the Slytherins perspective a little and redeem them a bit by accepting her despite her blood.

C) go a long way to helping with Malfoy's plan of uniting the houses by showing if a Muggleborn can coexist with them and they can put aside their prejudices then anyone can.

please don't think I am trying to tell you how to write your story, these are just my hopes and dreams(which you would be a souless beast to shatter.....ahem i digress) and as always i intend to read whatever you write and on a side note the feels i got from the Weasley's that still love harry and the 'little bother' comment was sweet.

P.S, also are you writing Salazar in canon(as the jackass who constructed the chamber of secrets and had planned to eradicate Muggleborns from the school through use of a freaking basilisk) or is that action going to be retconned or placed on someone else?

sincerely,

"That Guy" who goes through Adultfanfiction.net and has to make lengthy reviews and nitpick.

nasty little buggers those students are!!!

I loved sirius' reaction to Harry/Draco so much!

Poor Harry. Hope things work out. But I am glad that he and Draco are together now, thanks for the update. MOre to come soon I hope.

only the twisted mind of voldi would think of making dead ppl a chrissy present.
still, at least har and draco have the awkwardness sorted. They're still very new at being together but its very cute.

I love this story!!!!!!!!!

I'm so glad Harry & Draco are together. Harry will need him with all this stuff coming up with Voldie. Remus & Sirius are so cute!! Sirius is like a big kid - a goof. If I knew I've forgotten...is Lucius married? I really like Lucius & Snape together. Blaise is cool. He seems a true & steady friend like Neville...I think of him as good looking, smart & wiley.

Very nice chapter but holy hell i was going through the reviews and i noticed ALOT of hate for Ginny lol granted her attitude in this story is........grating to say the least she hasn't really done anything terribly bad yet beyond obsess over harry....and who wouldn't...i mean look at him he's gorgeous, it doesn't make her bad it makes her smart(stole a little bit of that line from venture brothers btw). While in canon she is a very reasonable and likeable character, now ron on the other hand....now that guy has ALWAYS really rustled my jimmies both in canon and fanon so i don't feel much in the way of pity for him here. In fact from what i have seen harry(and possibly Hermione when she gets her act together and stops being a tool and a couple of other people) are the only non inherently dickish people in this story lol the "protagonists" in this story are at best jerkasses with the occasional softer sides while the antagonists just happen to be much worse. A few designated villains and heroes as well. Harry is just kinda stuck in the middle of it all lol. This is still a very nice story and sorry again if i come off as "that guy" who has to make reviews talking about the moral ambiguity of a story on ADULT fan fiction.net. This is in no way a flame, just simply the opinion of a humble reader.


Waits patiently for next chapter.

Whoooooo!!!! Harry had his revelation!!!! WHOOT!!! I hope they don't beat around the bush and get to being a couple soon before the holiday ends. Please!!! Update again soon cuz, I don't think I can wait. No I KNOW I can't wait. PUH-LEEEEAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE!!!