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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
There is a lot of incorrect grammar throughout all the chapters. Regardless, I love the story. The twins are perfect. They had me cracking up. I can't wait to see how the chemistry between Harry and Draco unfolds.
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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you realized in the first chapter, that you made a few last names mistakes, Parks it's Parkinsons and Grabbe is supposed to be Crabbe. Just saying, if you didn't already know.
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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Awww Harry is slowly (VERY) slowly starting to realize his feelings for Draco! Even if he's confused :) I like the addition of Salazar, I'm very interested in seeing where that goes! Update soon!
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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok so Harry is confused. Understandable, but he better figure it out. Quick. Cuz I'm not that patient. So good update. I'm on the edge of my seat as always. With you updates. I might as well be. BTW do have FB??? could you friend me if possible?
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September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Great chapter! Oh okay, how's about just severely maiming him? Maybe Ron and Hermione too? ;) That ending was hot! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A kiss. Finally, at least hopefully the thought of Draco is in his mind. Hope things move along rather quickly.
And the Dare with Blaise and Snape. Classic. Love it. I'm sure Snape knows and is used to the pranks. Too funny.
And the Dare with Blaise and Snape. Classic. Love it. I'm sure Snape knows and is used to the pranks. Too funny.
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September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wooohoooooooo Go GARIN! you rock little hisser.
heeeee, sev the therapist gets another work out and dumbles suffers epic fail. :P to dumbles.
That was a mean, wicked, horrible dare but at least Blaise got them back and har's second kiss was better than his first.
maybe he'll wake to the fact he likes draco too.
heeeee, sev the therapist gets another work out and dumbles suffers epic fail. :P to dumbles.
That was a mean, wicked, horrible dare but at least Blaise got them back and har's second kiss was better than his first.
maybe he'll wake to the fact he likes draco too.
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September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
winces... never underestimate a plotting dumbles. he tends to be careless with his toys and pawns. Still, har managed to keep the coot out of his head, so yay's to sev and har for swinging that.
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know I am tired of Dumbledore too. Will someone just off him already? Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, it wouldn't let me for some reason. So in response to that, stupid Weasleys and Hermione! I can't for someone to put them in their place! When will Ginny grow up?? Please don't let Sirius die! Make him switch places with Dumbles ;) update soon!
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August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw that is tooo sad. I hope Dummbledore gets what is coming to him. Update again soon please.