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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi
You said in the group that you wanted some sort of con critic, and I'm not very good, but I will try...
This is a good story, with a nice plot and some good detail. The characters are well developed and the story is very well written. Those are the reasons people enjoy it and keep coming back.
Honestly, all you need to work on is two things. Your words get mixed up and spelled off. The other thing is your perspectives. You keep switching them around and it is sort of confusing.
But other than that, it is a very good story.
Shippo-chan
You said in the group that you wanted some sort of con critic, and I'm not very good, but I will try...
This is a good story, with a nice plot and some good detail. The characters are well developed and the story is very well written. Those are the reasons people enjoy it and keep coming back.
Honestly, all you need to work on is two things. Your words get mixed up and spelled off. The other thing is your perspectives. You keep switching them around and it is sort of confusing.
But other than that, it is a very good story.
Shippo-chan
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July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Im a stickler for a sirius/lupin story, and this one is by far the best Ive read!
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July 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! Thank you for a such a nice, romantic puppy-love story! I loved the first kiss part (that would be the reason I came to read it in the first place). And I loved the details from OotP, with Grimmauld Place and everything. It completely flows with canon. Lovely!
~Enchanted
~Enchanted
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July 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Who\'s Wolf? that was so great!!! I love that so much. Great fic!! Thank You So Very Much ;)