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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Lexie on March 02, 2005
    Yay! You updated! Please do so again soon!
    Gread chapter!
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  • From ANON - ignorantbliss on March 01, 2005
    You know, Hermione's life and mine have too much similarities. I was reading your depictions of her feelings, and I was going *Yeah, Yeah, I know exactly how that feels.
    Keep up the wonderful writing.
    I'd give you my e-mail, but my husband has been checking it....

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  • From ANON - Larissa on March 01, 2005
    I love your story!! can you email me at lotrhplovers@yahoo.com when you update. thanks!

    d/g is the BEST!!!

    ~Larissa
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  • From ANON - Sue Bridehead on February 28, 2005
    That was a superb chapter. The plot is sooo interesting and well played out. I loved Snape and Hermione's interaction. (BTW, I recommended this to my Yahoo group (Harry Potter Love Triangle Fics) today.) Outstanding!
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  • From ANON - Sue Bridehead on February 26, 2005
    My God, what a funny chapter! You had me rolling on the floor a couple of times. And Gigilo!Snape was perfect - I loved it! Can't wait to see what his client does... :D
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  • From ANON - Lexie on February 24, 2005
    Please, PLEASE, PLEASSSEEE! UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Sue Bridehead on February 23, 2005
    Great chapter! Hermione was portrayed perfectly. I liked the reference to her department's logo; that was a nice touch! The Ministry description was good too, as was Harry's refusal to be the hero. Excellent!
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  • From ANON - Sue Bridehead on February 23, 2005
    Nice work, Betz. That last sentence shocked me! You don't read too many Bad!Ginny fics (at least, I don't-!). Looks very intriguing.
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  • From ANON - Mynuet on February 21, 2005
    I'd saved the link from when you posted it on the DG list, and finally sat down to read it all. The temptation to wail and beg for instantaneous updates is strong, but I know how irritating that is and so I'll refrain. I'm enjoying the story very much - I can see the characters developing this way in these circumstances, and so it's easy to lose myself in the universe. Ordinarily I dislike adultery in fiction, but you're handling it in a way I can deal with; I think it's because the only reason Ginny didn't leave Harry the instant Draco came back into her life is because she literally can't. Well, that and the obvious mesalliance involved in Ginny being married to anyone but Draco! ;) I'm dying to find out what happens - will the escape plans be moot after Hermione gets the ban lifted? Will Snape and Draco buy an island somewhere near Fiji and convince the reluctant Weasley broodmares to live with them and be their loves? What are Lavender's nefarious plans? Does she want Hermione gone, whether from old resentment or a desire for Hermione's husband? Does she want Hermione, full stop? How long will Hermione be able to maintain her denial? Will she manage to break with Ron before she slides into irresistable temptation?

    I could go on like this for some time, but I think you know all the questions you've raised. In the meantime, do you have some sort of update list? I don't visit aff very often - once in a blue moon would be a fair description - but I don't want to miss out on more chapters. Just for the record, too, I'd consider this to have enough D/G for posting on FIA, since D/G is strongly featured. Anyway, please let me know what my best bet is for getting updates, and thanks for posting the link to this great story (and for writing it, of course).
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  • From ANON - Snapesmistress005 on February 20, 2005
    amazing story,. i love it! i've read so many "happily ever after" stories that frankly, i find them sickening (unless it's a pair that you don't see alot of i.e. blaise/hermione). this is a welcome change. you seem to have the measure of an unhappy marriage. i love the details you put in about snape's life now and it's comparisson to draco's. while i know you posted this on the dracoginnyfanfic group, i can tell it'll primarily be a hermione/snape fic (which if you couldn't tell from my name, i love snape!!). i do love the angst that ginny seems to be in, as she was denied her true love and seemingly forced into an unhappy marriage. while i generally don't like seeing ron or harry portrayed as bad guys, i can under stand why you've made them the way they are here. it's refreshing without them being to much of arse holes! again, great job and keep up the good work. hope to see some more soon!

    much love!
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  • From ANON - Lexie on February 07, 2005
    Fabulous story. I hope you update often!
    This is a really ingenious idea!
    All of the other Ginny/Harry stories and Hermione/Ron stories are all happily ever after.
    I guess that's why you titled it "And they didnt live happily Ever After!" lol.
    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Willow on February 07, 2005
    YUMMY!!!!

    You are now my new god

    *bows down to you*
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  • From ANON - Tourniquette on February 06, 2005
    You are the first author to ever write interesting footnotes. I enjoyed Chapter 12's immensely.

    Normally, I don't read any stories with Draco/Ginny in them, because I am an adamant SS/HG/DM fan. However, your writing is far above average and the plot is too interesting to resist. Also, your real-life wisdom has crept into the story and made it endearing. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Amaris on January 25, 2005
    very good, indepth, well paced, WANT SMUT, it reminds me of the line in the Rocky Horror Picture Show, you have us in ANTICA......................................................PATION. We can't wait for more. : )
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  • From ANON - June W on January 23, 2005
    Ch 15 - this story is so amazing - I can't ever figure out where it's going, which makes it a great mystery. At this point, I'd guess that it was Peter Pettigrew who let in the Death Eaters to Hogwarts, since Pettigrew and the other Marauders made the infamous Marauders' Map and had secret ways to get in and out of school (Shrieking Shack and the Whomping Willow route, and Honeydukes' to Hogwarts route). So it was sort of Harry's fault for the attack, since Harry is the one who released Pettigew back in Book 3. Not sure of Lavender's plans for Hermione; perhaps Lavender is keeping Hermione unhappy so she will gladly accept a job offer with Lavender once Severus leaves. Nah, can't be that easy! THANK YOU for the new chapter!! I do hope Hermione quits nagging Ginny into marriage counseling, if now Harry is making Hermione sick.
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