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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - joniskpelare on May 26, 2011
    Very nice and intresting to see how Lucius and Hermione could get together.
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  • From ANON - Sonusai on April 14, 2011
    I had a long review all set up, but then I thought about it. The simplest way I can put this is I preferred your version over canon. This was a pleasure to read, fantastic, well written, well edited. An all around joy. Unfortunately I seem to catch all of your stories after they have been finished, so I don't get to see them as they progress. But you now have a devoted reader.
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  • From purefaith91 on November 08, 2010
    ch.50: Very enjoyable reading. The only part that was even vaguely off for me was Filch. Don't you love it, I can buy Merlin in a giant arch, but not Filch as anything other than smarmy and creepy. Really liked the way you tied everything up at the end although I would have loved to know what Alexis was brewing for her Dad (unless I missed that somewhere along the line). Anyway, loved it, put it on my favorite list in my computer along with all of your others read so far. Thanks for sharing your stories. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 08, 2010
    ch.49: Excellent, but then I have not read anything of yours that was not. This story is so original and has a premise that I have not read anywhere. That Hermione started showing Lucius how much she loved him AND that he felt comfortable to tell her how much he loved her were favorites for me. I know that I am a siss where feelings are concerned, but have never been able to control that part of me so am especially happy when it occurs with characters that I come to care about, which is easy to do when an author makes them so real through their stories. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 08, 2010
    I certainly feel better now. It did not bother me for Hermione to cry as she does that often enough; however, when you had Lucius weep, it was too sad to be unaffected. And he had no way of knowing where he was in his life and what awaited his future.
    This chapter makes it all better though. It is great that he knows that she visited him and loved him throughout his incarceration. Loved it! p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 08, 2010
    ch.46: Clyt? Lucius may think that the shortened version is enough to go through with naming their child. It may even make him think of how to better choose a boy's name. I think this was my favorite chapter overall. Waiting for them to finally fess up to their love for each other makes the story. Love it. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 08, 2010
    ch.45: Sorry I keep forgetting to add the chapter numbers-I guess I keep airing out. Poor Lucius could have avoided all of the suffering if he had told Hermione when she asked although she was not being particularly helpful to him and was pretty hurtful (and may have used that info against him) so it may not have had the same outcome as it did in the end. Lucius speaks as though he would still be a death eater. It would be difficult to get out from under his father so he may still be forced, but maybe not. It would suck if they had to live that again. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 07, 2010
    Go me! I knew it was "gus". Hermione needs to learn to do away with the bad guys sometimes though. Maybe Lucius will take him for a little trip to the forest and then remove his wand while leaving Hermione's hex in place so that he cannot use his power to get out. ;) I was wondering why Hermione did not call for the elves to help her when she found him there. Did they go and get Lucius? If so, he will have much less trouble treating them kindly, huh? Excellent chapter. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 07, 2010
    Ch.38: Great chapter. So sweet to see her beginning to give him his due AND the way he responds is even better. I had to laugh at your comments at the bottom...Mob boss? I was thinking Field Grade Officer (USMC type) as my experience has been that there is no ego to rival theirs. I had to laugh at the comment that where there is a disagreement on something, his opinion rules. Reminded me of the, "I want you to make the decisions unless I want to make them" with no idea when that would be. Except that he is always there, it is eerie how his attitude matches what I grew up with and then married. ;) p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 07, 2010
    Ch.37: I'm betting that Gus has something to do with the remaining movement against squibs via blackmail. That would have been a way to hide the money and he would have been in a position to know who should be paid a bribe. hmmmmm. Your story brings up so many thoughts (I don't know if that is a good thing or a bad thing for someone who overthinks everything like I do). I also keep waiting for Lucius or Hermione to blurt out that they love the other at some point. Well time will tell. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 07, 2010
    Ch.24: Lucius may have turned over a new leaf, but it comes from the same tree... and would we really like it any other way? He doesn't stand a chance and hasn't even realized it yet, but I have a feeling he will. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 07, 2010
    Ch.35: The neatest part of the endeavor is the way Lucius has embraced a segment of his society that during his own time were treated as outcasts. And what a testament to his change that he seeks help from Hermione. (that had to go a long way in her feeling that he no longer sees her as less than...). Even so, he retains his inner Lucius. Thank the Lord!!! Love it. p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 06, 2010
    OH MY LORD!!!! p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 06, 2010
    Dear Lucius may have turned over a new leaf, but it is still from the same tree (lucky for Hermione). So glad he is taking his time or he would have ended up with a wife that was not anxious to give freely to him, I don't think. And I am so glad that you have her correcting/explaining when he thinks that what she says is a slur to him, when it is, in reality, compliment. Well, have to hurry to next chapter now ;). p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 06, 2010
    So Hermione could be decended from Squibs, decended from Squibs, etc. and therefore be pureblood herself? Ha to the naysayers! wouldn't that be great? p
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