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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ebonyeyez1 on September 09, 2009
    Another amazing tale. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Liz on August 19, 2009
    I admit, I'm not a frequent reviewer, mainly because most pieces of fanfic don't incite much of a need to say "oh man, that was GREAT!" This one, however, did. I loved it from beginning to end. It was well thought out, clever, and it was paced very well. Nothing felt rushed, nor did it drag on. I loved that the story wasn't just pure plot, that there were little tidbits of everyday life thrown in with the development of H & L's relationship and the mystery of the Veil and the prophecy. Thank you for writing and publishing this -- it was one of the better pieces I've read in a very, very long time, and I very much enjoyed reading it. :)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on July 16, 2009
    Okay, I began to read this story about a year ago, but then around chapter 33 or something I went on vacation and then I started to pack to move from home and begin University. Around Christmas I was settled in and started to read the story again but then I realised that I had forgot a lot, and this being a mystery it
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  • From ANON - liz on June 09, 2009
    this was absolutely amazing!!! but now i;m sad that it is over :( ohh well I suppose I'll just have to find another one of your stories to read. Thanks again for the reading suggestions, they are infinitely more interesting then my summer read of Ulysses.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2009
    still love it!!!1
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  • From ANON - liz on June 08, 2009
    i love your story!!! you answered my question on LJ so I thought I should read one of your stories first since i finally have some time! This is my first time on aff so it took me a coupe of chapters to notice the review button. can't wait to read the rest of the story.
    liz
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  • From smmz79 on April 28, 2009
    ha ha i love it lucius is soo funny with his sarcasm.... great chap the cow licking him was hysterical.. i am definitely looking forward to the rest
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  • From smmz79 on April 26, 2009
    nice first two chaps i like that lucius was unsure as to who she was... so the veil spit them out some where that they are unsure of.... i like that lucius is still lucius but he is also very gentlemanly it makes me all warm....
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  • From Missy85 on April 21, 2009
    Wow! What a ride. Thanks La Bib, this is an awesome story and I loved re-reading. I think I actually enjoyed it more this time because I could read it from start to finish, and I have to say congrats on a really well thought out and executed storyline. Im looking forward to your next story :)
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  • From Cyrielle on April 07, 2009
    That... was... AMAZING!!! You, my dear, have convinced me that the Lucius/Hermione pairing is as good as the Severus/Hermione one! Maybe it is better... I haven't decided yet. I'll put them even for now.
    I am SO going to check your other stories! ;)
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  • From cathyhester on March 23, 2009
    Just found and read Beyond the Veil. I like completed stories as too many just stop and the story stays there open and unended which pisses me off!
    This was an interesting story and well written.
    I've always been especially susceptible to my men when they have water running off them so especially enjoyed the bath scene
    What got me to this story was your statement somewhere that you always finish your stories. I was so happy to read that!
    I think stories years old and uncompleted should be deleted. If the author isn't going to finish then why leave them out there?
    Thanks for writing.

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  • From crysta656 on March 19, 2009
    Wonderful story! I started reading it a while ago, but got so busy that I wasn't able to finish. Well, I sat down this morning and read the rest. I loved it! Great job!
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  • From ANON - TashRose on March 11, 2009
    Very Awesome story. I spent ALL day reading all 50 chapters of this in one settting. Whew. I was so glad to see it completely posted, and I was eager to read it. It was well worth every minute, hour, and the entire day. ROFL!! Original plot, great characterizations, lovely humor, definitely hot and erotic, and I loved the intrigue.

    P.S. if you want to contact me at all you can go to www.grangerenchanted.com/enchant/ and look for author TashaRose. I don't like my email openly posted, and since I'm not registered with AFF here, I'm not sure how it will post my address if I put it in the email section.
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  • From Lyndie578 on February 18, 2009
    This is a fantastically generous Lucius/Hermoine story. There are not enough of them out there. I greatly enjoyed the plot/porn mix. I'm so glad you found a way to make it work for them. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - lilashannah on February 14, 2009
    I wasn't going to read this story at first..But last night at 10:30 I decided what the hey.I had to call in to work today as I was up untill 5:30am reading your story.Holy,you got me hooked by the end of the first chappy.
    I was sorry to see it end.I can't wait to see what you come up with next
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