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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From zephyr1975 on February 04, 2009
    Well i've finally finished it and it took me 3 days of near constant reading aside from the regular interruptions of a wife and mother... Any way I really enjoyed this story thank you for a wonderful read and a truly believable plot to get Hermione and Lucius together.
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  • From ANON - Liz on February 02, 2009
    Honestly,the thought of Lucius looking less than immaculate still makes me laugh... Oh,what *did* Hermione call him behind his back? hehehe This is fun...I think His Loftiness makes a great historical character... Something out of a Georgette Heyer novel...
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  • From ANON - Liz on February 01, 2009
    Well,I hope they get some breakfast soon before they get any crankier... *giggle*
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  • From ANON - Liz on January 30, 2009
    Hmm...stepping in 'bovine excrement' would certainly make their day... I wonder where they are...can't wait to find out... Lucius is such a gentleman,but only he could manage to be immaculately dressed under such circumstances...
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  • From ANON - Liz on January 30, 2009
    This promises to be really thrilling...it makes a change to see Lucius portrayed as a warrior rather than a politician/financier...
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  • From mlui on January 25, 2009
    Wow, I come back from my self-imposed break to focus on school and it's completed! =) I was wondering if they were going to go back to their time and they did. I'm a little surprised they went eight years ahead in the future, but I guess it makes sense. I find it a bit amusing that Astoria is comparing herself to Hermione and self-conscious about her looking older than Hermione. I was slightly surprised that Hermione is pregnant again...that is a lot of kids...but as long as they like it...great work and can't wait to read your next fic. =)
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on January 15, 2009
    By the way, I just had to tell you--I love the avatar you use on here; it just makes me laugh!
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  • From lilbitbord on January 06, 2009
    I was finally able to sit down and finish this wonderfully hot story! I didn't think I would ever finish it. Every time I went to sit down I got called away and never got back to it. I want to comment on specific things but my brain is a little muddled right now to think of some stuff. Of course I love the kinky sex, is there anything hotter then a riding crop and Lucius or the sexy wizard on all fours giving up control to Hermione?? LOL Great job and I can't wait till your next story, which I will be reading as you post it. I hope :)
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  • From ANON - birdie on January 05, 2009
    i'm a bit behind the curve with this tale -- i've had a couple of weeks off from the grueling horrors that are graduate school, so i'm catching up with my lumione fan fic -- but i just have to say that this story is WONDERFUL. i've read a few of your one-shots, which are also great, but this.... the perfect balance of smut and plot, with an amazing dose of humor as well. you have such a good sense of tone, i do have to say -- lucius and hermione just seem spot-on to me, and i adore reading the banter and exchange between the two. just as a note, though, i love how you utilize the veil and really create a whole universe around it. the time travel, the slightly fantastical elements of the tale... all of these are absolutely perfect, and lend a very literary bent to an excellent story. i read the entire thing in about 2 days, but i have to say, the bits with the cow at the beginning, along with the use of the 'wizard of oz,' were absolutely priceless moments. brava, and i look forward (quite eagerly!) to the next tale.
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  • From dynonugget on January 03, 2009
    This was simply splendid. The imagery you painted was both masterful and amazing. I felt, as I have so much in this story, that I've been right there in the room with them. Brilliant!
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  • From ANON - LadyofEros on December 25, 2008
    Just as an FYI, in the Regency Era tobacco 'snuff' was snorted amongst the wealthy, not cigars which became more common in Edwardian times.
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  • From ANON - RogueVampire on December 19, 2008
    Whew got through all fifty chapters in about two days. Brilliantly done. Nice mix of smut and plot. I would say that the French maid part was my favorite. Just wanted to show my appreciation!
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  • From tsorg on December 13, 2008
    Oh my goodness, what an amazing story. I absolutely LOVE your stories!!! Your Lucius Malfoy make me simply drool, I have to go fan myself after reading your chapters. I love the fact that you have him sooo, well, so well-endowed and obviously so erotically gifted! It was your story, "The Wedding" that finally inspired me to post a story. I also wanted to thank you for your wonderful reviews, especially the spelling/grammar corrections! Thank you, I can't wait for your next story, in your last review you mentioned a chapter 15 having hooks?!!!!

    T
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  • From lilbitbord on December 02, 2008
    I was able to read through chapter 34 before my son woke from his nap. The ball was a great chapter, of course I love balls you've painted a great picture on what its like to be an Alpha Malfoy. LOL. I need to stop reading the lemons when my husband is at work all day, LOL by the time he gets home I'm...you know what I think I might have the advantage in that situation. LOL well I must now tend to my son. More reading later.
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  • From lilbitbord on December 02, 2008
    Ohh I'm back to reading. I got through chapter 30. Very interesting about the Squibs, things are starting to come together, or raise more questions. LOL I couldn't stop laughing at Margaret just kept digging Lucius deeper and deeper into a hole, but he managed to get himself out of it. Chapter 30 was HOT! I love dominate, but still caring, Lucius. I can't for the life of be picture Hermione in a french maid outfit, when I read that he wanted to dress that way I couldn't stop laughing. I can only image what her accent sounded like. Of course the spanking was my favorite part :) Let see if can read some more today.
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