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Reviews for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From dannilawless on November 23, 2008
    Wow!!! I love it!!!
    *throws roses and gives a standing ovation!*

    Well done!! I'd love to see you do a Hermione/Severus fic.

    Any thoughts???
    If ya have a chance....danni@dublin.ie

    xxxxxx
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  • From ANON - sweettiff_14 on November 23, 2008
    Great job, and a wonderful epilogue. I always imagine that labor and delivery is so much easier for witches. Lucky witches! It was a fun and sweet ride and I can't wait to see what you have planned next!

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  • From sheherazade on November 23, 2008
    Nice touch there with Dr Filch. It's good to see him prosper, in a funny way.

    Fabulous ending to a lovely story; I did enjoy Lucius and Hermione's reunion sex veeery much :D.

    I should bloody well think Snape recovered the use of his right arm; I'd find him a bit dull to write about without it, heh.

    Thanks for a pleasurable fifty chapters and power to your elbow for fifty more in the next story.
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  • From ANON - doodle on November 23, 2008
    You are truly a story teller. Weaving the threads without the reader being overly aware. I am in awe of your talent. Were St. Merlin & the Veil the same thing? You refered the Veil as a "he". Thank you for making many of my Sunday mornings joyous!
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  • From ANON - Rini on November 23, 2008
    I went on and saw
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  • From ladyravenna on November 23, 2008
    Wonderful story as always. I always enjoy your stories. They're so well written and flow so well from beginning to end. I can't wait for your next story. ^o^
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  • From chickaboo on November 23, 2008
    What a great ending! I loved every second of this story so so so much. Thank you for sharing and I am eagerly awaiting your next one!
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  • From Tenar10r on November 23, 2008
    Wonderful!

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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on November 22, 2008
    WOW, the ending really was surprising - In a good way.

    I really enjoyed this LaBib!
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  • From ANON - Mia on November 22, 2008
    I have absolutely NO complaints about this story. Not real ones anyways. Just the usual, Does it really have to end? Are you sure you don't want a sequel or just one more little sex scene? But truthfully, I don't think I have ever read a story that ended with that just right feeling of being finished like this one. And my pseudo complaints are really just in jest. This was marvelous and I will reread it often. Just a magnificently glorious and original catching story. Thank you so very much. I truly have appreciated reading this. Every bit of it.

    ~Mia
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  • From voraciousreader on November 22, 2008
    Wonderful! I love the idea of the Gaunt cousin now firmly attached to the world that once rejected him, and Filch as Headmaster! You've tied up most of the loose ends I had questions about and kept firmly to the world you created within the book's world. Now I'm going to have to wait for your next effort, I guess.
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  • From ANON - jw on November 22, 2008
    ch 50/epilogue - happy sigh..... you are so good to us. I think you covered EVERYTHING we asked about! Lucius was never his own grandfather (phew!). the Lynx legacy stood strong and flourished. and Snape is happy and wealthy, and has the honor of seeing little Severus Malfoy arriving in a few weeks. all the Malfoy children - goodness, Hermione might need a bunch of nanny-elves for that many kids. Merlin is as inscrutable as ever, but it's nice to think that he's watching over the magical world. again, thank you for sharing your talents with us; your stories are a pleasure to read. brava!!!
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  • From Phreakdom on November 22, 2008
    What a lovely ending to a fabulous story. It was interesting to get a peek into the lives of the others, especially Severus who I happen to have a soft spot for. I have to say that out of all the children Lilah was my favorite, demanding little thing that she was. I'm so glad I took the time to read this and I can't wait to see what you come out with next.
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  • From happybunny on November 22, 2008
    Wonderful conclusion! Poor Astoria! She's actually five years older, physically. And wow, Lucius has still got it, for a 73/65-year-old. But then, wizarding lives are about 50% longer in your fic, I think. The kids are so cute. Overall, I would say that your epilogue is about 7 times better than the DH epilogue, and that's my more conservative estimate...

    I can't wait for your next story. You need to turn Lucius loose on your muse to get her going again. I'm sure he could inspire her ;)
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 22, 2008
    This was an incredible story. I loved the epilogue. I think that all of the changes to their world made everything better.
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