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By : Nerys
  • From risotto on July 10, 2010
    Ooh good an update :)
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  • From ANON - Fleur K. on July 10, 2010
    A fluffy, sappy Tom scares the hell out of me :) Thank you guys for updating....this chapter was fantastic and I cannot wait to read the next, what a cliffy! Hope the wrist gets better soon, by the way!
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  • From Sommerlee on July 08, 2010
    Finally! Very, very hot. I do prefer a dominant Tom, and I loved this chapter because he does win at the end. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From magentasouth on July 08, 2010
    I had thought this story abandoned. I'm so glad you continued it!! Thoroughly enjoying it! More please!!! The characters are nicely developed, Tom is neither too fluffy or too two dimensional. Hermione is not insipid (as many people seem to find it easier to write her in connection with LV.)
    One point I will make though - I'm confused in all resurrection fics why Lord Voldemort never simply uses a muggle method to kill harry, since magic has failed several times. It would only take a quick slice with a knife and, although curses are the standard form, I find it hard to believe death eaters were entirely unfamiliar with knives or other implements of torture. Then theres poison. he could poison him. Yet... he never does. He always seems to want to 'break him' by fiddling about with his loved ones. That seems rather james-bond-villan, somehow. And in *this* fic he even concretely realises that his more serpentine form was behaving stupidly.
    I suppose its just coyote syndrome. You know.. from the roadrunner cartoons. You start wishing the coyote would one day get to have a satisfying roast roadrunner dinner. In that way I guess i long for the day Lord Voldemort gets his satisfying ending.
    Course if harry were dispatched so easily, it would remove a significant driver of the plot. What else is he motivated by, other than developing and dominating Hermione? Is he mortal now? He has no other horcruxes around anymore. Surely that must be bothering him by now.. When Hermione incapacitated him in his flat he had been concerned about aurors. Wouldnt the idea that a stray hex would kill him start to prey on his mind by now? (shrug) Either way - this fic is absolutely delicious and I cant wait for the next update!!!
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  • From magentasouth on June 22, 2010
    God its frustrating how brilliant you are when considered in conjunction with your apparent fickle inability to stay on task. you have so many highly enjoyable fics that you just tossed out into the snow and never continued. This one i was particularly sad over when i realised it would *never* have a resolution.
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  • From ANON - Fleur K. on June 14, 2010
    Please update? Pretty pretty please? :)
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  • From QueenRuby on March 30, 2010
    I love the story so far and I can't wait to read what happens next. Can we see some more of dominating Hermione. There is just not enough stories out there with her as the dom even if it is only for a couple of inconters. Besides Tom seamed to like it. LOL
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  • From sbrande on March 21, 2010
    Yeah, another wonderful chapter. Gee LV is a sneaky buggar, more power to him I say.

    I am really enjoying reading this, and The Apprentice, so much. Keep up the great work and if you could hold off the cliffies I would be most grateful ;0

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From ANON - Fleur K. on March 21, 2010
    Another lovely chapter. I do love how Tom/Voldemort is characterized in your story.....way more convincing than lovey dovey Tom.
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  • From risotto on March 21, 2010
    Yummy another review.
    And stupid Ron, always hated that twit.
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  • From ANON - cosettex on March 19, 2010

    "Your parents will be fine, Hermione," he said soothingly. "You have my word on that."

    It slipped out of his mouth before he realised what he had said. The moment the sentence left his lips, he wanted to take it back and his breath stuck in his throat. But it was too late. He could already feel the magic swirl through the air, accompanying his promise.
    OMG that made me laugh so hard ha!!his whole plan out the window now lool and all because, could it be, he's growing emotions???!?! Oh it was beautiful! The universe's way of beating him at his own game LOVE!!!
    I also liked how he broke up the golden trio, genius Tom!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on March 18, 2010
    Haha, poor Tom, has to babysit Muggles. Surprised he doesn't start thinking death may not be the worst thing that can happen...
    "Soul-mates" HAHA! Well, at least he has humour ;)
    Oh, I should have known Tom was still planning to take over the world... For some reason I just hadn't thought about that so far... "smartest cookies" - haha, I just love that picture for some reason. Voldemort is of course the smartest cookies... filled with chocolate... so tasty and cleaver... makes me all warm inside... mmmm, Voldemort cookie... Hm.. or maybe a Voldemort cookie is the one that when you eat it, you spend the rest of the night in the bathroom because he was too old and got some none-cookie things inside of him?
    "the nerve of those stupid Muggles for giving birth to his filthy, Muggle father" - I just have to say I think you captures Tom's character very well with comments like this. It just points out how he reasons.
    HAHA! He made a magical promise to take care of her parents! Hehe, guess he didn't see that one coming. He is getting emotional!
    MOHAHAHA! A little train-sex is it now...? Oooh, can't wait to read that. They are so deliciously naughty together!
    Baah, Ron turning into abuser. Why am I not surprised... Ron-bashing!
    Hm.. when Hermione got knocked into the wall I kept thinking "When will they see she isn't wearing any underwear?" but that never happened! Ah, well, good for her modesty I guess ^^ Oooh, Tommy has planted more "evidences" about what Ginny as been through, I see... well, will be interesting so see what happens later...
    Excellent chapter! Take care!
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  • From ANON - sbrande on March 10, 2010
    Oh this story is so good. I truly hope that Lord Voldemort/Seth, destroys Harry, with Hermione's help of course, and rules the wizarding world. Mhawwww!

    Loving this.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on March 07, 2010
    "Son of a bitch" - Yep, that about covers it. Poor Ginny, having to live with the false memory of being raped... I can really see this becoming an issue for her and Harry in the future. Boo...
    Haha, and cup!Hermione is bashing herself. Fun, fun. I wonder what sort of man she has in mind for herself. Although, there is quite a big gape between Ron and Tom... they are on completely different level. Thinking bug and devil. Neither is good to be with, but if you have to take one of them to the bed... ah, well.
    Sorry for the short review. Not feeling so peachy. Great chapter, though! Take care!
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  • From ANON - Fleur K. on March 06, 2010
    Another excellent chapter! :) I read the entire story to date in one sitting. So addicting. Seriously.
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