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Reviews for Folie a Deux

By : SalonKitty
  • From ANON - Gigi on September 29, 2013
    I have fallen into this story. Your character development is beyond impressive as is your Harry. I think that out of all your amazing fics this story really shows your potential as a writer. I'm very curious to see where you are going with this. I know you're not getting paid to write this so no pressure on updating but it would be a shame to not finish it, is all i'm gonna say ;) I could go on forever about all the things I love about your story but I'll just leave it like this.
    Hope all is well and thanks for writing this.
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  • From PrettyDesdemona on May 31, 2013
    Veeeery interesting. I can see that you've decided to abandon this fic but I hope that hasn't meant you've chosen to abandon writing. You really do have quite a talent for it. Your voice is fresh and casual while also being penetrating. I found myself almost able to predict what you were about to say, and not in a bad way. My thought process rolled along with this story fabulously. I'm not sureh ow else to explain it.
    Anyway, keep writing. Even if it's not fanfic. Just keep writing.
    xx
    Desdemona
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  • From ANON - linx on April 27, 2013
    I hope someday soon, I'll come on here and find that this story has finally been updated. We've been on Chapter 9 for a long time now ... please ... soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2013
    That was hot.

    Been brushing up on the archives these last few days and I have to say, out of the 50+ stories I've browsed/read, this is by far one of the best.

    Wish fulfillment and sexy crack is fun/ny, but this is a nice, meaty, organic development from the characters at the end of the series to where you've taken them. It's endlessly fulfilling to be able to read about "real" characters that aren't just placeholders for sexy times. (Nothing wrong with mindless smut)

    I don't have much to say that hasn't been said by others. Voices and characterization are actually spot on (compared to most of the other stories I've read), and the highest compliment I can pay to you is that this really does feel like it could have been a natural progression from the end of the books. It actually feels like we're learning more about the trio, and that they're developing and becoming more complex which is incredibly satisfying. I don't know how much time you've spent planning and reflecting on how their history has impacted who they are (and what they do), but it shows and it works.

    It's dirty, wrong, and instantly arousing. Thanks for giving pleasure to the mind and the more... raunchy side of things.


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  • From ANON - Chang on April 06, 2013
    This is so well written that I actually feel like a pervert for reading it. Their characterisations are so spot-on that it's almost awe inspiring. I can only say that I eagerly look forward to reading more. I mean really... the build up to the sex as been fantastic. The NC-17 rated moments are even better. The fact they've actually got serious real life issues had me reading this fic beginning to the current chapter without stopping.

    The only problem is, I can just see the angst coming on...it's making me nervous, considering that I do like to see H/Hr together.

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  • From DB1 on March 23, 2013
    @9 holy hell!! This story is fucking hot!!! Update soon

    DB
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  • From Daye on March 21, 2013
    OMG, Salon_Kitty! It's so good to see this message. Best of Luck finding time to continue this.
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  • From ANON - Melinda on March 21, 2013
    This such a good story. I like how you have hermione explore more areas of her sexual pleasure because she didnt seem like the type to be adventurous. I like that this might bring her out of her shell that she's had since Rose was born. I LOVE how you describe and write Harry!!! I love that he can be the sAme Harry we all know and love but behind closed doors is a darker Harry. Can't wait for chapter 10!!!
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  • From ANON - Aranel on March 19, 2013
    Lol, I saw the title on the index and I kept saying " whaaaat! Is it my birthday!?! Whaaaat!!!"
    I can't wait for you to come back, this is one of my favorite stories and the Luna/Harry story has been very missed in my life. Hope you and your muse can work everything out soon!
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  • From theimpacientone on March 18, 2013
    okay, thanks for telling us, nothing is more frustrating than an author who doesn't even tell the readers that the story si not going to be finished, so thank you for your hard work
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  • From ANON - Jake on March 18, 2013
    Shame you gave up on this story. It was just getting good.
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  • From Divinit on January 23, 2013
    Are you ever going to finish this dark delicious piece of work?
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  • From ANON - jupi on January 12, 2013
    why haven't you updated?? it has been forever.
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  • From ANON - regen_child on January 04, 2013

    I love this story - the complexity of how you're presenting both Harry and Hermione.

    I'm reading along - and all I'm doing is waiting for the other shoe to drop. There is no way that this all *can't* end in disaster. Harry's getting more reckless - Hermione's getting in too deep with how she's letting Harry treat her... there's a "train wreck" effect at play here.

    I can't wait for the next update on this story.
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  • From ANON - ana on October 25, 2012
    I come in this site just to check,if you've updated or not.and to my dismay,you still haven't.its one of the best eroticas I've read.and it has good complex SL too.everyone is going gaga over 50 shades of grey,only cause they haven't read this one.please update.
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