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Reviews for Folie a Deux

By : SalonKitty
  • From temitope on September 03, 2010
    loving it continue
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  • From MissStephanie on September 01, 2010
    Ah! Bravo! This story is so REAL. I love it! You do such a wonderful job of describing the process of deteriorating relationships, and Hermione's unintentional attraction to Harry is poignant and so feasible. I love what you have done with Harry. He has always seemed like such a dominant personality. The boy has such a wild temper, he's got to be a bit aggressive in the bedroom. But I must say, his plastic antics with Mrs. Malfoy completely blind-sided me. Wonderful! I love being blind-sided. I know how you feel about that ferret, so I completely busted out laughing when I read your description of Harry fucking his mother's brains out. Nice!

    I really enjoyed the scene with Hermione and Ron. You did an incredible job of revealing Hermione's views of her husband, both sexually and his physical appearance. At the same time, your description of her ongoing thoughts of Harry as they shagged was brilliant. And again, so realistic. The fact that she was so guilty the next morning also provided the view that Hermione is not a vindictive person. She cannot help these feelings and urges, and I like how she constantly tries to justify them. That is something we all tend to do. Her painstaking wait for Harry's phone call was a scene everyone can relate to, as well. We have all been there before. Although it wasn't Harry Potter's call we were waiting on. Damn, I wish. Just your description of his intense gaze got me all excited!

    I cannot wait to read more, and I absolutely love this story. Your writing style is so comfortable and steady, I get to the end wishing there was more!
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  • From RavenTiger on August 25, 2010
    Sent here by Soft.
    I LOVE this. You write the characters so well, and the plot is so realistic. Great work.
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  • From Pete91888 on August 25, 2010
    Awsome new story. I can honestly say I never would have guessed harry was getting it on with Narciss. ANyway it is well written as all of your stories are. Also its a breath of fresh air to read a well written fic that dosen't bash the characters especially the Weasly's.
    My only question to you is this soley going to be Harry/Hermione or will Harry be with multiple women?
    Thanks
    Pete
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  • From AnonymousAndrogyny on August 25, 2010
    What a well written story! The entire premise is believable, interesting, and downright entertaining...Hermione's crisis with her family and life are extremely detailed and easy to relate to, even if one has not gone through such an experience. I like that there is room to explain exactly what is going on, as well as hwo the story is written, that it can go either way from here. Everyone's personalities are suitable and in-line with canon, and I can't wait for the next chapter in this gem.
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  • From Daye on August 25, 2010
    Wow! Now that was interesting some nice Hermione stuff and at the end, really quite shocking. I'd really never expected to see Narcissa Malfoy making an appearance here. From the blue eyes, blonde hair bit I'd been expecting it to be Luna. Harry's into MILFs now? :D

    Looking forward to seeing how this turns out.
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  • From acky on August 06, 2010
    Oi, Get updating, I need something good to read :) Ya know i love ya :p
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  • From magentasouth on July 03, 2010
    well its promising.. when does the really interesting stuff that you sold in the blurb start?
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  • From theimpacientone on June 26, 2010
    so it begins, I wonder what will happen now (the title it's a good clue though)
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  • From xtp10279 on June 20, 2010
    First off, how do you make that hungry throat noise with text. Is it 'uhmmmm' or 'hmmmmm'? Neither of those sounds quite right. Oh well.

    *hungry throat noise*

    This is tasty. I love this slow, soft buildup. Hermione's character is strongly established. Great use of hook at the beginning. I like Harry's guilt, too, and his sense of failure as things with Ginny destabilise. By far the most arresting feature is Hermione's own musings, as she speculates about what's been happening in Harry and Ginny's bedroom.

    Love it.

    Favourite line:

    --My nerves surged just thinking about it, the feeling like rain pattering along my skin. Just what was he like with her when no one was looking?--

    Beautiful description followed by a wonderful question.

    Please keep building this up. I love it already.
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  • From Scarybearhair on June 16, 2010
    Excellent beginning! I think you
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  • From Darkrivertempest on June 15, 2010
    WOO HOO! I found this story by way of SoftObsidian, so thank her for steering me towards it. I have always been a HUGE fan of Harry/Hermione, and this is just... mmmm delicious so far! It's extremely well-written and I can't wait to see what's next. Eagerly awaiting chapter 2. :D
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on June 14, 2010
    I'm so excited about this! You always get Hermione's voice down just perfect, and I can tell from this first chapter that this story is no different. I love the premise and the characterizations and interactions seem frightfully realistic. So far I feel bad for everyone, but I'm hoping to see just h how wild Harry is in bed, and if that is indeed the problem with him and Ginny. :D Bravo for getting me pumped up for a promising Harry/Hermione BDSM fic. We need more of them!
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  • From MissStephanie on June 13, 2010
    Oh, Goodness! I love this fic...absolutely wonderful. You have done a terrific job of painting such a vivid picture of the trio's back round, and you've made everything feel so realistic. Hermione's postpartum depression is so in depth and believable, and something I could actually see Hermione going through. I like that Ron came through for her, he can be a prig, but he usually comes through in the end. And I was so happy to hear your description of Ginny's strained relationship with the trio. I always thought that Ginny must feel like somewhat of an outsider. Harry's characterization is great as well, you did an amazing job of dropping little intriguing tid-bits about Harry's strong and dominant tendencies, as well. One little point I would like to make...the Dementors. Seeing as how they abandoned Azkaban once already, I do not see the Ministry trusting them to take control once again. Especially not with Harry situated in the government. And also, although I absolutely love Guinness (Seriously, it one of my favorite beers) I would expect Harry and Ron to drink a Wizard drink. Like an aged Goblin Mead. Even Butterbeer is slightly alcoholic. Just a thought, Harry and Ron are both familiar with Muggles, so it isn't entirely far fetched that they would be drinking a Muggle beer.

    Well, anyway, I really, very much enjoyed this fic, and I can not wait for you to continue. Kudos!

    -Miss Stephanie
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  • From Daye on June 13, 2010
    Gyah. Plot! Complicated plot! The first person perspective works very well for this chapter at least. Seriously good going getting inside Hermione's head.

    A couple of Betary notes: Dirk Cresswell was killed off in DH.(Reported Via Potterwatch along with the deaths of Ted Tonks and Gornuk the goblin) and Hippogriff takes an I not a y.

    Very intrigued to see where this is going. When you said you were doing a H/HR piece I didn't quite expect it to be so far along the timeline. The kids are going to present a lot of added complications to this.I liked the lines regarding Harry's kids names all being his idea and the weirdness of him using 'Severus' as one of his Kid's names.
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