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Reviews for Folie a Deux

By : SalonKitty
  • From magentasouth on May 03, 2011
    aaaaargh!! so brilliant!!! This story is fantastic - I can't wait for more. When I saw a new chapter up i was already rejoicing even before I opened it. And it was even better than I hoped.
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  • From flamingmoth on May 03, 2011
    This is an awesome story -- very complex and adult, and believable insofar as canon is concerned. Great job! Oh, and it's hot, too ;)
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on April 21, 2011
    OMG! This totally exceeded my expectations of their first time. First, I absolutely love the psychological exploration of Harry (and Hermione) here. I love how Hermione tries to keep a distance by acting all analytical but you know she's trying to keep a distance because of her own desires. I love how Harry pushes back and shocks her, and I love how this deepens her interest in him as something more than just the Harry she thinks she knows. Everything he said rang true to his character and experiences. And I've never seen a breast milk sex scene, so I was a little skiddish when I got a whiff that was where you were going, but oh my goodness, that was HOT as hell. Even more hot because it totally took Hermione by surprise too. I love how easily Harry slipped into his Dom role, and how natural it fit him. Hermione's surprise and arousal by it was so believable, and then when he came back for more? *dead* I love this! Such an awesome update.
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  • From chrisguy9017 on April 21, 2011
    WOah that was a very nice chapter. The build up to the was very tense and I half expected Hermione to tell him to back off. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From magentasouth on April 18, 2011
    loving this.
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  • From Kayrox133 on April 18, 2011
    Wow, chapter four. It seems insufficient to say that it was awesome. It blew my socks off. The build up of sexual tension, the curiousity of forbidden fruit, nursing your child on one breast while having the other breast treated in a very different fashion. The descriptive terms used were fantastic. I have two kids so I can vouch for colic, feeling like a cow, and ppd.
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  • From Daye on April 18, 2011
    Woah! That was last scene was intense. Harry really does get into the mother's milk thing. Would be too clich
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 22, 2011
    I'm really glad you had Harry affirm Hermione as a woman in this chapter. And it didn't seem false, he really appreciates her in many ways. She really needed to hear that. And I love how, even though this is written from Hermione's point of view, you're getting deep into both of their psyches. It's reminding and re-establishing just how complex and tight their emotional bond is. It's a great build up and tease for what's to come, and lord knows I can't even imagine now, not after Harry's confession of his possessiveness of Ginny. That was so hot, I hope he gets addicted to Hermione in the same way, but the real question is, just how far/dark can he go. The fact that he's slightly scared of that question himself is kinda scary. I love their conversation, so natural and in character for both of them. And I love how you're treating secondary characters and how Hermione thinks and acts towards them. It really feels like her and that's so rare and refreshing. I had to lol@Hermione trying to find out about Harry's sex life in order to "help him". lol. She's really shoveling it now. I'm glad Harry called her out on it. You show so many sides of him just in conversation, it's like foreplay. :D Can't wait to see where you're going with this. Great update!
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  • From Daye on March 22, 2011
    Hmm. Inviting Harry to your house, all alone and making him unleash? Can see where this is going :P

    Really nice chapter, Hermione's analytical side really comes out in the chapter, at times she almost seems like a professional psychiatrist with the way she poses her quesstions. I really liked Harry blind-siding her and trying to talk about her problems. Even if she quickly deflected him.

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  • From Pete91888 on March 22, 2011
    This was an awsome chapter. I can't wait to see whats next. It would also be interesting to see a lemon where Harry is with Narcissa. Anyway hope to see the other fics updated too.
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  • From soprattitude on October 10, 2010
    I cannot begin to express how much I love this so far. More please?
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  • From mirrorofrapture on October 06, 2010
    Wow, I love this story. Your writing is so great, and I was shocked to see how low the rating was! This story definitely deserves better than +++. I love how your characters are very 3 dimensional and I like the fact that they have their very real flaws and problems. It makes your story very accessible, even to those of us who haven't necessarily had experience with the types of problems presented in your story. I do hope to read more of your story soon! Excellent work!
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  • From WesleyY7 on September 19, 2010
    Firstly, let me say thank you. Thank you for not bashing Ron and making Ginny a total bitch. That happens so often in fanfic, and I love that you've managed to create this tale that will eventually become H/Hr without demonizing their spouses.

    The first two chapters have been fascinating and surprising. This is definitely not a long PWP you often find on this site, but what I feel will be an emotional ride I will be happy to go on. (A ride with sex, I'm sure.) ;)
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  • From newtothis on September 08, 2010
    I like ron, and i belive that with a few changes he could have been a great person, i think he still a great person.


    i hate authors that to get hermoine with either harry or draco, they have ron turn in a wife beater, or cheater. then hermone fall in love with harry or draco in like five second, and then the o my god they are so great in been, that get old fast


    So thank you for the promise of know ron bashing,

    ps richard3542000@yahoo.com if want to talk,
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  • From xtp10279 on September 04, 2010
    Wow. I definitely didn't see that coming. Or 'her', should I say? I suppose even Malfoys deserve personal pronouns. *smirk*

    Also... Hermione owns a g-string? My word. I'm stunned, and oddly turned on by that. Excellent chapter: strong development, well-maintained voice, some great twists and turns. You're obviously setting up for an emotionally hard-hitting story - as you're not taking the easy way out of making Ron and Ginny unlikeable. So the net effect is that this is going to get very painful, in more ways than one, but I admire a story with narrative integrity.

    Keep it up!
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