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Reviews for Folie a Deux

By : SalonKitty
  • From magentasouth on May 23, 2011
    This is the number one 'can't wait for the next chapter' story in my check back list, you know. I love this story. Your style of writing is brilliant, engrossing, hot as hell! MORE!!
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  • From Daye on May 22, 2011
    I really love the characterisation of Hermione in this. The way she has brief flashes of sanity, where she wants to call things off but then lust overtakes her once more and she just dives right in...

    The continued presence of Rose in the background of these scenes, is quite interesting. Sooner or later you'd think one of these fuck sessions is going to get interrupted by her. It'd be interesting to see Harry and Hermione's reactions to that.

    Her priorities are good as well; spanking is a no-no, being eaten out into a delirium is A-OK.
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  • From newtothis on May 22, 2011
    good story well writen, you not sure if hermoine loves harry, or this is just different, or how she feeling.

    you get mad at her for not telling ron, what she wants, and how she feels. would be nice to see ron and hermoine in bed, to see the difference.

    is the end going to be hermoein leave ron for harry. i hope not


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  • From MissStephanie on May 17, 2011
    WOW!!! I am so sorry to have been away from this story for so long, but at the same time, happy to have such scrumptious goodies to whirl my mind. Goodness, Salon-Kitty, your writing is astounding. The detail with which you portray your characters emotions and thought processes put the reader right into their heads. I love it! Harry is so deliciously.... insatiable... Yum! Hermione is just spot on. Her sinking depression and boring self-image, her inability to cope with failure, even the way she tries to justify and reason her obsession with Harry. This is exactly how I could see things playing out within the trio years after the war. Even Ginny is perfectly done, with her self-assured grace and easy elegance. When she dismissed Hermione so nonchalantly...that is a feeling every girl can associate with. We have all been in that exact situation before. And I am so happy with the way you progressed into their heated affair, it is so realistic. Harry and Hermione are caring and weary people, who would not jump blindly into a devastating relationship that was sure to destroy their already cracking lives. But to slip and slide into it as they have, and be trapped by the heated sticky mess that their unadulterated exultation reveals...Awe! You have done a beautiful thing. I just love it and I cannot wait for more. That scene in the drawing room was just...beyond words... At least not any that I can convey that would do your's justice.

    Waiting eagerly for more! :)


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  • From Ladylala04 on May 12, 2011
    And thank you so much for not character bashing. It's a trend that I absolutely loathe in fiction.
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  • From Ladylala04 on May 12, 2011
    In the famous words of a fake Kazakhstani gentleman,
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  • From NarutoCrazy on May 09, 2011
    Well wasn't that mother fucking awesome.
    The sex we've all been waiting for.
    And its only going to get better from here. yay. :)
    I'm so interested in this story its killing me, seriously.
    I can't wait to read more.
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  • From MollysSister on May 09, 2011
    I am surprised that Harry sprouted a conscience there with Hermoine. I would have thought he would be all about getting what he wants. Then again this just give us more angst and suffering. And thats what we all want isnt it?!?
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  • From MollysSister on May 08, 2011
    Oh my! I never thought Narcissa would be Harry's cheat. Well that speaks volumes about he realtionship with Lucius doesnt it?
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  • From MollysSister on May 08, 2011
    Holy crap! I feel like there is something major about to happen with Harry and Hermione after all that build up!! Meeps!
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  • From Daye on May 06, 2011
    First off you're quite welcome and thanks muchly for the acknowledgement. The only downside is I don't have as much cool things to say in reviews without repeating myself. :-D

    So I have to mention that the Weasley men have epic taste in comedy. Though speaking of British Comedy I'm just wondering how well 'Yes, Minister' would fit the operations of the ministry of magic. Remembering the fifth book its a pity the wizarding world aren't familiar with the Hackerism: "Don't believe anything until its been officially denied'

    I really like the non-verbal communication going on between Ginny and Hermione through out the middle two scenes. And the irony in Ginny apparently thinking Hermione was no match for her looks wise.

    I also liked that Ginny accompanied Harry to the brothels. It occurs to me it could have actually worked as a solution if she'd actually joined in, might have got Harry to treated her more as a co-domme than someone to be dominated.

    Finally, Damn was that sex scene visceral. An excellent illustration of Harry's aggressive physicality. Though I kinda liked the description in the draft you sent me, with harry being smeared with juices over merely being coated.

    P.S who dialed the difficulty of the CAPTCHA up to eleven? I better copy this in case it doesn't go through...
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on May 05, 2011
    Wow. I'm literally speechless. I have so many mixed emotions about how this is playing out. I feel really bad for Ron, but I'm also very happy for Hermione. She needs this! And so does Harry. It's obvious that there's something mighty fierce between them that needs to be vetted out. The way Harry avoided her and then warned her only made the anticipation that much higher. the pacing is wonderful and it all feels a little too real. I love how animalistic he seems, but how much he was fighting it. They're both going to have some serious guilt to deal with. I'm dreading the fall out of this, but I want more of what happened towards the end! If this is the beginning, I can only imagine where he's going to take her. It seriously gives me chills and makes me giddy all at once. I'm definitely going to be re-reading this chapter a few more times before you post again.
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  • From chrisguy9017 on May 05, 2011
    Really nice chapter. I really liked how Harry saw through Hermione's BS, when it was obvious to the reader that she was only really fooling herself. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds.
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  • From miafitz on May 05, 2011
    I LOVE this fic. Seriously. You write Hermione so well and I can actually imagine Harry growing up like this. And I love that the sex isn't like some bonus portion that's thrown somewhere in the story, it's weaved into the plot and everything flows so well. Really dark and intriguing, I cannot wait to see how everything resolves itself.
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  • From newtothis on May 03, 2011
    good story, ginny tired and with all she said she really tried.

    Except, perhaps, someone like Ron. Ron, who had coveted a woman like Fleur, who felt that a beauty like that would give him an instant credibility, that men would admire and be jealous of him, a desire that he held buried in his heart. But also a man who
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