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Reviews for Vampire Bites

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  • From JesterJester on January 31, 2013
    So yummy! A jealous Harry - I cant wait so find out what he will do when Severus spills it and how he will react to Harrys possesiveness
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 30, 2013
    This chapter was so good! And yeah!...Harry & Severus are talking, well sort of... Did we get told who Silver is? If not (because can't remember reading it) I vote for Draco. Severus would talk to him like that and Draco would love to be a trusted friend. Now that was a surprise action from Harry. Wonder what that was about & how Severus will handle it, much less how Harry will respond.
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  • From elvenwolfprincess on January 27, 2013
    write more soon its a favorite
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  • From JesterJester on January 14, 2013
    I dont think Ron was OOC He too can say something decent once in a while grin.
    And I feel for Harry! Hope Sev regrets it a great deal. As always: Very nice!
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  • From bloodshound on January 07, 2013
    sigggggh. looks like gryff impetuousness and vamp abilities don't blend very well. har's gonna get his fool self killed rushing in like that... again.
    i know har's instincts are all heywire and screaming to protect his sev but sev could have taken the beasty out easily enough if har had had the control to let him do it. those instincts are most troublesome.
    well... that's one way to get them more comfortable with feeding... not recommended though i'd think.
    oopsie, there go those instincts again... still, it's not like sev was fighting him. they're not going to be able to deny the mating urges much longer i think.
    good thing papa edge was there to tidy up after.

    yah, you can tell it's a bit forced but it's still okay. don't stress about getting your updates up. sometimes, if it won't flow, it won't flow. while, i do prefer you update regular like, sometimes you need to take a brake and then get back into it. you're the author here, you don't owe us zip. we're the lucky ones getting to read your offerings so just get them to us when you can neh?
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on January 06, 2013
    Liked loved and can't wait for more that was delicious with out being over sweet!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 05, 2013
    OK Maybe I'm slow but is Severus a vampire or animalus or whatever now? I just reread the whole thing to refresh what it was about reading the 10th chapt. Enjoyed it all over again. My favorite pairings are Harry/Sev & Harry/Draco. Don't care much about "reliving Remus/Serius at Hogwarts" but really enjoy how much they love each other & always have. Snape is so masterful, smart & when he shows his love & caring for Harry I melt like it was real.
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  • From JesterJester on December 19, 2012
    Another Chapter! Thank you very much
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  • From bloodshound on December 12, 2012
    well, that was rather less dire fall out wise than i figured it would be. we tend to forget that har is still pretty much a baby vamp. his control is still going to be a little wobbly, especially when faced in an intimate feeding spot. (last ones on the inner thigh yeah.)
    i'm interested to know who white is and oopsie i guess har instincts took over again there. still, at least sev sort of forgave him.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 11, 2012
    So who is silver? Did I miss something or is he just coming into the story? Maybe I need to read the last few chapts again. So is Severus coming to see Harry as something more than a nuisance?
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  • From bloodshound on November 10, 2012
    oopsie, looks like har's instincts got away from him a bit there. it's going to take time for har to face up to that and for sev over look that... which is going to make feeding interesting for a while.
    i'm glad dumbles and edge have reached an accommodation. that will make things a bit easier on har.
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  • From ANON - JesterCat on November 07, 2012
    Oh my - so yummy! Really I am lucky I browsed trough the Harry/Snape section today!
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  • From Polfso on November 06, 2012
    def really enjoying this story!!!! Vamps and magic hell yes!!!! Im sure other people complain about this but i like how the chapters are medium length not too short but not too long. And I love how harry has the vamp side that kinda takes over and does as it likes!!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 05, 2012
    Great 8 chapters! Fun idea. I thought Harry was falling for Edge then along comes Snape (one of my two favorite partners for him). Then I thought Oh Oh a threesome which I hate because I am too possessive & jealous to even want to read about it. But I read your authors' note & now I'm loving it & looking forward to more Snape/Harry & find out who Edge will end up with.







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  • From ANON - unneeded on September 22, 2012
    hmmm, that revelation went pretty well. And considering ron and mio are pseudo family to har it think Edge may accept them as well and they him. All theses interesting little plot points. animalis and mooney allowing har to feed (though it's understandable why he'd want his mates neck to himself). Snape being a willing feeder too. I look forward to seeing where they lead.
    oh good, maybe now Edge can find a ready source of blood and a safe place to hole up at night. I'm sure har would appricate having him around more too.
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