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Reviews for Vampire Bites

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  • From oogies4u on September 21, 2012
    oh goodness... hope you still update this story.. please will you let me know when you update again .. puuuurty please. Love the line of the story. can not wait for more :)

    DragZ
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  • From bloodshound on August 22, 2012
    most interesting. So a possible Edge and Sev huh? cool.
    Is har's development going to speed up a bit now that he's getting real blood?
    Why did Har dodge Siri's shoulder? Was Remi's influence very strong there or something?
    I can understand why Remi's wolf would be restless, Godson or not, his mate is feeding a Vamp.
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on August 21, 2012
    great story! Can't wait for more!
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  • From TalisRuadair on August 20, 2012
    The wolf is waiting for Harry to find his mate, isn't it? The wolf fears that the new vampire is interested in it's own mate, Sirius, however I'm guessing that Severus is Harry's mate. What would happen if Harry drank from Snape's neck? I look forward to your next update and cannot wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Leania07 on July 21, 2012
    Oh this is getting interesting; I'm guessing a vampire form of a compulsion? Keep up the good work, hope to read more soon!

    Leania
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  • From bloodshound on July 18, 2012
    it happens to the best of us. When the plot bunnies bite it's best to go with the flow in case the rabid little buggers decide to chew bits out of us for ignoring them.

    well, that's interesting. Edge now has Siri on side. I wonder what that 'magic touch' is going to do to dear Sevie. *insert evil cackle here.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2012
    This is really good so far. I can't wait for Harry to start feeding from Snape. Please update soon!
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  • From wlkellogg on June 18, 2012
    I will admit, I was skeptical at first. Not anymore. Please, please! write more!!!! I like the description you gave of exactly what it was that Harry turned into. Very nice. Thanks :)
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on June 13, 2012
    Definitely a chapter worth the wait. Please update soon! :D I truly love this story.

    xoxo,
    kiktat
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  • From bloodshound on June 13, 2012
    sigh, the light side never really did get har did they. for all dumbles goes on about the power of love, he hasn't seemed to pick up just how lonely har is. If Edge is desperate for companionship, i imagine har is equally so. I hope har remembers that siri and remi love him still.
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  • From bloodshound on May 15, 2012
    most interesting indeed. I'm glad remi and siri can handle har, but it remains to be seen if sev can. V's rather stabbing himself in the hand here. Is 'gini still one of his horcrux? If so, why doesn't old splintered soul trust her? or is he to paranoid to trust anyone? What does Edge plan for har should he manage to call him back?
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on May 14, 2012
    I am really untested in this story and I am bookmarking it so I can always check up on it!
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  • From HeartStar on May 14, 2012
    I love how this is turning out I am also reading the orginal. *S* I liked how you had harry's first feeding and run in compared to the other version.
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  • From elvenwolfprincess on April 26, 2012
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE
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  • From bloodshound on March 20, 2012
    i got lotsa questions. if Edge and others of his kind knew who har was, wouldn't they also know that taking/turning har would result in serious repercussions? Also, why did Edge drain har as opposed to nipping and running? That is, since they don't need to kill.
    Will we be hearing from Edge again? i wouldn't think Edge would be comfortable with just cut and running on his new fledgling, especially since he didn't really give har a choice
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