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Reviews for Smell of Submission

By : dweek
  • From DarkFlamingPhoenix on May 24, 2014
    Oh my...that's perfect. "Getting all the parts of me you want, and none that you don't." And eventually, Hermione can sit back and enjoy seeing her Master enjoying himself by using others for the things that she doesn't want to do with him. Lucky Treasure. ;)
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  • From ANON - red demon on May 15, 2014
    Glad to see an update. No smut this time, but the plot moved forward. Harry almost has Hermione convinced and he had Ron almost as well. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From CU_Spacecowboy on May 15, 2014
    Could do without the nicknames, its hard to follow who is who when you then change their name to "whip" etc., it would be better as a title but calling them by their name especially Hermoine, calling her pet, love or even kitten is one thing, popular pet names, but "treasure" is just horrible, again she can be his treasure but don't have him actually calling her treasure though
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  • From Matt01 on May 15, 2014
    This is a really good chapter. The only bad thing I would have to say is that it's a bit rough around the edges and just needs to be polished a bit more. In saying that, this is a good chaper to extend the story, without the sex. Just in idea, but can you start a fresh side story (not just one chapter to fill in the gaps of the main story, but a full fledged story) about Ron and Luna please??
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  • From ANON - Emmiey on May 15, 2014
    I hope Hermione comes to her senses! It won't be the same without her. I can sense a chapter a bit further along full of punishment for her though ;) The plot line of this is very interesting as well. I'm looking forward to how you develop it.
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  • From doubledamn on May 15, 2014
    This is just fantastic. And I'm not only talking about the smut. Everything is just brilliant, and you've woven in the smut and more depraved writings seamlessly into the core of the story. Well done. I look forward to more and really, REALLY wish this site had an update alert.
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  • From ANON - Maria on April 06, 2014
    I get the whole dom/sub thing it's great. But where are the dom women in hogwarts that would love to join the group. And yeah love hermione she is logical and passionate and strong. She should give as good as she gets let him stew after she has him break the contract. See how he likes yearning a bit. I like jealous potter. Keep up the if it's good and keeps me riveted.

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  • From Chrryb on March 28, 2014
    I can't wait for the next chapter :3
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  • From ANON - Emmiey on March 18, 2014
    Awesome chapter like always! Can't wait for the next one. I hope Hermione finally starts to finds herself.
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  • From ANON - red demon on March 18, 2014
    Great update Harry turned things around with Hermione. I loved the way he was with his girls. Daphne is a good enforcer, anything to please Harry. I wonder just what are the limits she has. What Harry could order her to do before she hesitates.
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  • From ANON - Wolfenstein on March 11, 2014
    I like the general concept of the story, but the problem I have is that Harry deceived and took advantage of Hermione's trust & friendship way back in Chapter 4, when he manipulated her mind while she was in a trance. In fact, he has lied to her repeatedly since. Without trust, you can't truly submit, otherwise it's just abuse.
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  • From ANON - x2alyx2 on March 05, 2014
    nonono! why isn't this finished?! It's so good!
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  • From Chrryb on March 05, 2014
    I love this story! I finished it so fast! I can't Wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Aranel on February 24, 2014
    Aww!! I have been missing this story! So glad to see an update. Oh Hermione, you silly girl. Hope she learns her place soon.
    Smart Harry, having a figure head. He would make a powerful leader.
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  • From ANON - red demon on February 23, 2014
    All right an update. I was hoping for one. I just love the way Harry treated Tracy, like she's not there. I also loved the orgasm denial Harry put her through, maybe he should forbid her to cum without his express permission. Now I really want to see Hermione's punishment. I can't but help wonder what Harry is going to do to her. Personally I hope it involves heels and a French maid uniform:).
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