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Reviews for Smell of Submission

By : dweek
  • From ANON - red demon on August 31, 2014
    I'm sad to see this end. I'll just have to wait for the sequel. Harry's got Hermione back and he gets to punish her in front of the order.
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  • From Christopher11 on August 31, 2014
    Sorry, but the "Dark without being evil" does not play here. Giving someone pain as a punishment for doing something that you dislike IS evil, period and done with. No one has any right to cause someone pain simply because they do not like what they are doing in their own life.
    Harry hasn't gone totally evil yet.... but his insistence on giving people 'pain' is driving him there at a quick pace in this story.
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  • From ANON - d3mystic on August 31, 2014
    Finally... Can't wait for the sequel (or chapter).. would like to see more of Hermione's punishment.. the punishment she desires...
    would have liked Harry to spill Cormac's blood...
    So basically this fic was 'Hermione realises that there is a bit of submissive in her'.. Then the next fic will be like 'Hermione finds out the extent of her submissive nature'??
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  • From Gandalfs-Beard on August 31, 2014
    Aaaaaaaaaarrrrggghhh!!! NEED MORE STORY NOW!

    I LOVE this story. I see what you're doing with this story. But I hope Harry gets Hermione back and McClaggen dies a horrible drawn out torturous death.

    I don't think your barely darkish Harry is evil at all, contrary to the apparent opinion of others. Yes, It is true that Harry used hypnosis to learn abut Hermione's true nature, and that he gives her a tingle of pleasure when he says "good girl" in the beginning. But he seems to have thought better of it, and through making Hermione his Treasure, Harry has also made himself Hermione's Treasure whether he realises it or not. If that isn't True Love, after a fashion, I don't know what is.

    And Hermione deserves Harry because she gave him the sheath for his birthday.

    Please kill McClaggen.

    Your Harry is very protective of "his" girls, he's straightforward, he doesn't do more than they want or force them to do more than they want, he doesn't abide outright abuse of submissives. I think your Harry is a pretty good guy overall actually.

    I do have one gripe, but it is entirely subjective... and this is your story. Personally, in my opinion, I think Ron is too jealous, unreliable, and unstable, to be quite so cool as your Ron Weasley (I think Ron's canon version could potentially end up more like your version of... damn it... too much pipeweed... I think it was your version of Nott... or worse).

    But what the hell! Like I said... It's your story, and this minor gripe is actually nullified by your excellent portrayal of a Ron Weasley free of his character defects. :D

    Hahahaha! You actually won me over to Ron, at least in the context of your really awesome story. I love your very good, only slightly AU, characterisations for all the rest of the characters. Definitely credible as canon characters reacting to an AU with a completely different set of social rules caused by a single event (the birthday gift) which ripples through the timeline. Brilliant.

    I also really liked your lemons, and that you strove to avoid resorting to either crudeness or hackneyed euphemistic cliches. It worked for me. It's a nice change from too sedate, or too hardcore. The sex scenes, and submission/humiliation scenes are fucking hot.

    Please kill McClaggen...

    Sorry... Can't stop myself!

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  • From ANON - anon on August 26, 2014
    You're really taking it to the wire. I'll be waiting for the 7th (unless you want to post it a little early). I should hope that Hermione makes the choice in her best interest--to at least break free of the collar.
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  • From doubledamn on August 26, 2014
    Great chapter, and thanks for pointing me towards your blog, can't wait for September 7th now. And then...I'll be eagerly anticipating the sequel. I probably won't read the Ginny/Lucius thing you have planned no insult to you, but I've read the canon and fanfics too many times to tolerate Lucius ever being with someone and both of them being happy.

    Fantastic work, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - d3mystic on August 25, 2014
    Hmmm.. The Ravenclaw part of Hermione is back it seems.. Just waiting for the Gryffindor in her to wake up... Nice chapter..
    Is there going to be a sequel or is this a stand alone fic?

    If the story is coming to an end then I don't think you should put the chapter I asked in the story. But if you can, then please write a oneshot someday which shows Hermione's thoughts and emotions because she is the one(left)who needs to have her thoughts sorted out. This oneshot can show a glimpse of the future also...
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  • From ANON - red demon on August 24, 2014
    Great update. Astoria joins Harry and Hermione learns how to free herself. I hope Harry tans her hide in front of the Order for causing such a problem. I hope to see some more of Cho, we haven't seen her in a while.
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  • From ANON - chm01 on August 24, 2014
    so it begins, I hope that after she's freed form cormac, her denial about her own desires vanish or at least starts the process f vanishing.
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  • From ANON - nichole0887 on August 17, 2014
    I just wanted to let you know that i love the story so far! I love the side stories as well especially Snape and Ginny!!!
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  • From doubledamn on August 17, 2014
    Great chapters. I really, REALLY hate that this site doesn't have an update notification feature. I've had to favourite your 'Stories Written' page, and label it as this fic name plus the last date it was updated along with the chapter I'm up to, and check on it once or twice a month.

    Still, fantastic work. I find myself actually enjoying the plot line as opposed to the smut recently with your work. Usually doesn't happen unless the writer is particularly talented. Brilliant job, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - markfl on August 16, 2014
    Love the story so far can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - anon on August 12, 2014
    Just as was suspected. The question now is how Hermione reacts to the little revelation about the necklace. Now you mentioned that it's a "contact", though I'm thinking it's a typo meant to be "contract" since he made her say she was his & to not be alone with Harry. I'm hoping that, next chapter, there's a path out of this darkness. Specifically, if it's a contract, that means that there needs to be some way to break it. If the contract cannot be reversed or cancelled, then I shutter to think what Harry will do in response to the information. I do hope that Snape will do all that's possible to release her without severe harm.

    I'm going to be frank: your story provides a LOT of submersion. So much so that I'm not sure if I'll want to keep reading, lest I not like future events or the ending. I'll keep it bookmarked and trust that this will once again deserve the Harry/Hermione tag it started out with.
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  • From ANON - Emory on August 11, 2014
    It's nice to see Ron being useful! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - d3mystic on August 11, 2014
    Loved the scene with Tracey... I thought I'd never say this but thank god for Snape and Ginny for figuring out about the necklace. Now let's see if Hermione still is the smartest witch of her age and figures out about the necklace and Cormac.
    You said that Hermione both knows and doesn't know about her nature. If that's the case, I think you should write a chapter completely from Hermione's POV in the future , in which she considers her actions with both Harry and McLaggen since the beginning of this story and finally admits her being a submissive.
    Great chapter.. Next one soon please..
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