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Reviews for The Long Road

By : SinisterMe
  • From ANON - Kapowallace on August 05, 2014
    Ooh! I'm so excited for the next chapter! I love how the timeline moved up so quickly and that the ministry letter was late (of course!). I also appreciate that you didn't put Hermione with Ron. Not going with the obvious Weasley. I like how she still respects Professor Snape even though the boys don't. It's a good contrast, keeps them in character, and I like that Snape can hold a conversation with her better because of it. I also like how he assumes that no one would speak good of him from his old academy, it's classic Snape to assume that everyone thinks the worst of him!
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on July 30, 2014
    I was very excited to read about the visit, and I love that you added Ron and Hermione as a surprise. It seems like something the trio would do. I think you wrote them very true to character for the situation they found themselves in. I'm looking forward to the rest of their visit. Also, I love how attached Teddy has gotten to Severus. It's so sweet, and makes perfect sense for someone so young and abused to distrust such a pushy stranger as Harry and look to the strong adult he has learned to trust for protection. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on July 21, 2014
    Ooh, sexy bath time was great! I love all the tension between these two. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2014
    Beautiful prose, and well-developed characters. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Deelicious on July 17, 2014
    I just want to say, I love this story!!!! I can not wait until its complete. Great Job! !!!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 17, 2014
    Great chapter! They are working unknowingly toward a wonderful family of 3! I hope that the ritual, Harry, or the slave bond thing doesn't bring too much angst.
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  • From ANON - Kat on July 16, 2014
    The chapter ends THERE?? Really???
    All impatience aside - this is fantastic. Beautifully written. There aren't any flaws to distract from the story - no bad grammar, inconsistent characters, weird dialogue, nothing. You have readers, and we want more! :)
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on July 15, 2014
    Another great chapter! I can't wait to see if he gets in the bath! (Not to mention what may happen in said bath!) I think you've captured both characters very well for the situation you've put them in, please continue!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 14, 2014
    Poor little Teddy! Feeling so bad about himself because of something he can't help - being a werewolf.
    Severus life is sure changing so much and in good ways so far.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 07, 2014
    That was a great chapter! Enjoyed reading of Harry's "attack" and that adorable Teddy's hiding under a table...sure wasn't what Harry expected. Looking forward to reading of Harry's next visit (hope he doesn't convince Remus to try to leave Severus)I'm hoping Teddy stays wary of Harry for awhile. Severus' story of Teddy's dragon not having to eat often & he had fed him when he was a boy was hysterical. I'm not sure I understand about the bonding (Sev & Remus & Teddy) but I think I'm looking forward to that.
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on July 07, 2014
    Another great chapter! Keep it up! I'm loving how their relationship is slowly evolving!
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on July 02, 2014
    This. Story. Is. Awesome. You're obviously a very talented writer, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! Everything is so well done, I wouldn't change a thing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 02, 2014
    I love this story. Keep it up!! Cant wait for more.
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  • From serialcabbit78 on July 02, 2014
    I think this twist is funny, but I must say I expected better of Harry.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 02, 2014
    Haha Harry Potter blasting his way in before just asking to come in. That whole thing was a surprise! Remus could be a little more protective of Severus after all he has done for Teddy and him. He didn't need to do any of it.
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