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Reviews for The Long Road

By : SinisterMe
  • From Ciara_D on May 03, 2014
    I felt you hit a good balance in this chapter. Watching it from Snape's perspective, with his revolution, helped me get through it as a reader. Lupin get's very silly on that potion, btw ^_^
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 29, 2014
    A cliffhanger about Snape rumaging in Remus mind? Really? You couldn't go just 3 or 4 more paragraphs? Just kidding...liking the story very much.
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  • From Ciara_D on April 29, 2014
    The background on how the slavery took place answered a lot of questions I was having about the set up of this world. Horrible, but understandable. But now I'm completely angry at the Ministry, again. I don't know if its within to purview of your story, but knocking that apart would be wonderful! It deserves to be burned.
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  • From JezeBelDK on April 29, 2014
    This just keeps getting better and better! Great job with the history of the werewolf legislation and how they ended up as slaves - I had wondered if you would go into all that.
    Can I just say that I really enjoy the way you slip from Remus' to Severus' POV - it seems so natural :o)
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2014
    Thanks for another wonderful chapter. I would like to see Severus take on the ministry, it could be amusing to see him go up against the warewolf laws that are too explicit. Remus seems to be starting to understand. Finally. I wonder what McNair knows about Severus that has not been revealed yet. It would be interesting to see a flashback to why he expects Severus to be so harsh. Or an introspection into Severus's struggle to be a good person.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 18, 2014
    Continuing to be a entertaining story. Like how Snape is confounding Remus with his kindness and is certainly winning Teddy over. More please. Surely Remus will see that there is only peace and caring for them with Snape. Will Harry come looking for Remus & Teddy...Harry was the godfather after all.
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  • From Ciara_D on April 18, 2014
    Love how you handled this last conversation, even dealing with the Potter bit. You're really digging into this characters and it's a pleasure to read.
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  • From ANON - mrequecky on April 14, 2014
    yippy, awesome udates! your details abotu the potion making process are brilliant!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2014
    not what I was expecting from the summary. Totally awesome though. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. I love how Severus's backstory has been hinted at, but not explained. I am curious to know what Remus's reaction will be to what Severus was doing with werewolves after Albus died. And of course the first full moon
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  • From Ciara_D on April 10, 2014
    Bubbles!!!! I was laughing to ^_^
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  • From TheFrenchGirl on April 07, 2014
    Great chapter, I love Remus.
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  • From Ciara_D on April 06, 2014
    Good chapter. It's interesting to get more insight into Snape's past.
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  • From ANON - Gyuchin on April 03, 2014
    Excellent story!
    I find it great so far!
    Hope to read more soon!
    Good Luck!
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  • From Ciara_D on April 03, 2014
    Again, good chapter! I'm really enjoying Teddy's relationship with Severus. The incite into how Teddy sees his father and Severus in relationship to himself was surprising and yet perfect when I thought it over. Excellent story telling.
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on April 02, 2014
    I love this story but i wish you would update quicker.
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