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By : Desert_Sea
  • From OracleObscured on May 02, 2016
    Great start to a new story. I personally like fucked-up Hermione. She sounds much less uptight . . . but still ready to fight. Plus I need some sarcastic Hermione in my life now (mine's going through a lot).
    So many great lines in this.
    "long echoing strides like a study in supercilious self-possession."--Great image and alliteration
    "he still held with all of the tension of someone trying not to fart."--Hahaha. Irreverent perfection.
    "his voice rang out like some morose bell with a particularly large clapper. Her hungover brain shrank away from her ears in protest."--Yes these are two totally different things, but I liked them both; so they get mentioned.
    "conducting an orchestra with his prominent beak.conducting an orchestra with his prominent beak."--Great comparison.
    "jiggling around her bellybutton like some sort of arrhythmic jellyfish."--Excellent.
    "galleon stallion"--hahahahaha!
    Of course the big mystery is why did Snape destroy the book? But I'm also wondering why Hermione is drunk all the time. Escapism? And obviously I want them to re-write the book. Hermione needs a little "tab A in slot B."
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2016
    Thankyou!! This breaks the drought- there's been a serious lack of HG/SS stories lately!! Keep going and put some great stuff in that book! Looking forward to reading more as soon as its posted!
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  • From staar on May 01, 2016
    ok that meeting was so funny !!!! loved it , let;s see what happens next with them !!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lin on May 01, 2016
    I'm so glad to see you're starting another story. :)
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  • From ANON - MzPearlz on May 01, 2016
    This seems to have a little bit of a plot missy x3 but all is well, please continue xD maybe we can get some elaboration on why our Hermione is wasted off her ass at work? :3
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