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By : ochiteirutenshi
  • From ANON - Firestorm17 on November 25, 2003
    Since this fic is post-OotP, why is Umbra sending a message to Sirius? It tends to be somewhat difficult to get mail to the living-impaired. Or has Umbra taken more drastic measures in that matter? mlol
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  • From ANON - Lupusdragon on November 24, 2003
    Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to get ahead of you or steal your thunder or anything... wait, Harry wants to control all three custom wands? So who is the third? Or does someone already have it and he just doesn't know it yet?

    Right, shutting up now.

    I know what you mean about Hermione, and Gryffindors in general, they can really get on a person's nerves. But you didn't seem to dislike Ron... in fact you painted a rather flattering picture of him... no... he isn't the third wand is he?

    Sorry, I know, too many questions.

    OMG! I love Harry's new look *drools* Harry and Draco are so hot together *passes out* I can't wait to see what everyone at Hogwarts is going to think of Harry, or if they'll even recognize him. And what are the Slytherins going to think of Draco? Will they even acknowledge him? Gah! I am just so excited about this!!

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  • From ANON - Linis on November 24, 2003
    wow... this is quite dark. I love the new look for harry and this should be very interesting. hope you update soon and if you are one of these people who sends out emails to let people know that you've updated then could you please send one to the address above.

    A brill story and I can't wait to read more.

    LINIS
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  • From ANON - Confused on November 24, 2003
    I am confused about Draco's unnaming: Granted I understand that your story needs Draco in the position that he is in, but to me it just doesn't make sense. I guess it is the lawyer in me:

    Narcissa is not a true malfoy at birth, she married into the family so how can she unname him? Maybe she could take away the black family connection but how can she take away him being a Malfoy.

    Also at the moment of Lucius' death Draco would have went from heir to Patriarch of the Malfoy family, iitiniting everything from the money to the magic. The magic would know, I think! I mean pureblood especially would ensure that something like this did not occur because what would be the point of having an Heir? If your non-blood spouse could kill you, then unname your heir and take your money?

    Now, I would believe that beause Draco is underage his mother would have been put in charge of the estate until he became of age. And during that time she cut Draco off while bleeding the estate dry. I could buy that the wizard world had no protection legal or whatever potection against that.

    But even assuming that during Lucius' life she had the power to unname Draco, (mostlike she would have needed Lucius' consent) she would have lost the power to un-name him when Lucius died.
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  • From ANON - Lanch on November 22, 2003
    Oh my good lord up there in heaven!
    You just can't stop there! Please write the next chapter ASAP!

    I've read a few 'Harry goes all dark and being the rebel boy or next Dark Lord'
    storys but yours have a really interesting start. I'm also curious about Dracos
    wand. So please don't let me wait !

    !

    ^^

    Greets, Lanch
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  • From ANON - lupusdragon on November 22, 2003
    Good fucking lord. This ROCKS! Except, I though Harry could not tell anyone about the custom wands? Or was that only about the room? *shrugs* Oh well, I am probably just getting myself confused.

    The writing is excellent and the plot is intriguing. I have a weakness for Slytherin Harry and this is pushing all of the right buttons. I bow down and worship at your feet. I actually liked the part about the custom wand selection. I mean, connecting Harry's custom wand twice to Riddle is big important stuff, I imagine. So is Harry more powerful than Voldemort now, now that he has a wand that is a PERFECT match?

    I eagerly await the rise of the Ghost Lord ^_^ This is amazing!
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  • From ANON - Hyperbole on November 22, 2003
    Hmm, interesting so far.
    Harry's got two wands now doen't he? his original one and the new custom-made one so he can hide the new one and use his old one if need be.
    I find myself wondering what Harry will do with the information of Draco's unnaming, I'm also curious as to why he got unnamed.

    Update soon please?
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  • From ANON - Selenamoon on November 21, 2003
    Wow!

    I love this new image you are creating for Harry *grinz* I like the 'Darker' Harry Potter fictions more anyways.

    You live in Alaska, that is cool, and I wont ask you if you live in an igloo either (as misrepresented by most media) Because I live just next door in the Yukon, Canada, and in all honesty Ive had some person from Ottawa ask me if I could send them a box of snow, and an Austrailian ask if I knew what the word 'summer' meant, how stupid can you get?

    well please continue with this fic its getting good and I'm sure to read any future postings, have fun

    ;)
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  • From ANON - emmy on November 20, 2003
    I really like this story so far- I do hope you continue soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Dose on November 20, 2003
    this story is realy good please update soon.
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  • From ANON - jenn on November 20, 2003
    i loved the begining of your story and i could only hope for more! i don't normally reveiw because i read a lot of stories a day between work and 'sleep' but i enjoyed the begining to yours and would love to read more so keep on writing and what ever gave you the idea for this fic "hopefully its nothing to bad" i hope you keep getting more insperation!!! well good luck and if you need any ideas i've got lots so feel free to ask for me as a muse!!!!
    jenn
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