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Reviews for A Winter Tale

By : Bylle
  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 10, 2004
    I really love this story. It's sad to think that Albus will die in the end. But I can see his not wanting to let Harry die.
    The thought of another story about HG & AD sounds great. Are all your stories on AFF? If not, let me know where they are. Want to read more of your fabulous writing.
    More of this great story soon please.

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  • From ANON - Lucyferina on June 10, 2004
    interesting chapters!!! well i must admit that the kiss btw sev and herms was i d i don't know ... i mean i like them better than herm/albus but it didn't feel right, knowing that he was still alive, let's say that i noticed how much hermione thinks and talks about severus, and it really makes you aware that there is a strong connection btw the two, and still what herms and albus got it's too beautiful to be spoiled with her wanting someone else, it's good that she broke the kiss by saying that she loves albus and i understand that they were both 'emotionally' on a rollercoaster ... thinking about albus and the vampires... so i guess it has to start somewhere btw them but still please no more herms/severus until after ablus (or at least that's what i hope) but i like your story no matter the direction you will take, just one question: have you already written it all? just wondering :) well keep up the good work, sorry about the length but i really like thinking and talking about your story :)
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  • From ANON - Alyssa on June 10, 2004
    Oh no! Don't do this! I had just gotten used to the Hermione/Albus pairing!!!

    I started out looking at this fic thinking "Yay, another Hermione/Severus fic! My favorite!" Then reading along, I realize that it WASN'T a HG/SS fic and I was about to turn around from the seemingly "icky" factor, but I read on. I am SO glad I did! You changed my mind about this pairing and you are a WONDERFUL writer! I don't even want Hermione to end up with Severus anymore and hope that she and Albus would live happily ever after!

    Well, anyway, WONDERFUL fic, WONDERFUL work, and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep up the HG/AD pairing! There arent' enough of them and your work is one of the rarest jems there are!
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 09, 2004
    Great chapter. And what was that kiss at the end? I read the paragraph several times but pretty tired right now. She did kiss him didn't she? More soon please, I need to know what I read...what you meant.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 09, 2004
    Great chapter. And what was that kiss at the end? I read the paragraph several s bus but pretty tired right now. She did kiss him didn't she? More soon please, I need to know what I read...what you meant.
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  • From ANON - trinaa on June 09, 2004
    I have really enjoyed this story so far. Think you've done a great job writting it. It seems to me that Albus is pushing Sev/Her together. Maybe Albus wants them together when he is gone?? Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mary Snape on June 09, 2004
    I really liked the light, happy mood of this chapter. It left me so happy :)
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  • From ANON - Mary Snape on June 08, 2004
    Brilliant chapters...I really like the way everything goes so far. And it warms my heart to see Sevvie so out of charachter. It suits him :)

    your faithful reader
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  • From ANON - snapey poo on June 08, 2004
    Great story i really love it but i think it is really sad that dumbledore will die can't you find a way for him to live or at least get to see his baby before he dies
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  • From ANON - lucy on June 08, 2004
    very interesting new cjapters, i like how you develop the relationship btw sev and herms and how much they love albus, i'm going to miss him too :(
    well keep up the good job :) can't wait for more :)))
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  • From ANON - Li on June 08, 2004
    I never thought I would like this pairing, but you proved me wrong, it's so well written and realistic......... keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Li on June 08, 2004
    I never thought I would like this pairing, but you proved me wrong, itso wso well written and realistic......... keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Lucyferina on June 07, 2004
    Fantastic, 3 chapters all for me to read :) thanks and update soon!!! as usual iookeooked to your story :)))
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  • From ANON - Paprika on June 07, 2004
    This story is truly amazing. I would never usually be into this pairing, but something drew me to this story. I love that you constantly update, i love the fact that your chapters are huge. I've read a lot of fanfiction, and i can easily sais iis is one of the best stories. I hope that once you are finished this story you will continue to write more stories. Looking forward to your next update, Paprika.
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  • From ANON - Claribel on June 07, 2004
    The plot thickens! Please, please, if it's not too late (I know you've written many chapters ahead), don't let Hermione get measles whilst pregnant. Too much tragedy, dear Max, you'd make me weep! Feel so sad about the thought that Albus will die, and sadder still at how it must feel to bring a child into being but knowing that you would never see it born. Still, I must stop predicting what will happen, and wait to read your next chapter. Still a lovely story - thank you.


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