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From Yaoilover816 on July 24, 2012
This is soo good. I can't wait for more, to see what happens, keep up the good work.
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From bloodshound on July 14, 2012
wow, she's got a sort of gallows serenity going on there. I'm glad Millie has made her peace. I hope Blaise comes to be equally accepting. what else can they do, neh? Fortunately har doesn't have time for them right now, so if they stay small and quiet they may actually get to see how the war ends before they die.

ooooh, interesting. I can't wait to see what plans you have for that wand. ^^ Har is so far above them now mentally, it's sort of like having an adult surrounded by children... but he's a benevolent adult. He's not being condescending... at least not deliberately, but he truly wants to guide those around him (at least in quiddich :P )them to doing better.

now THAT is a very good question. where did har pull the 'Solmemorate,'spell from? was it Voldi knowledge or shadow knowledge.
*snickers. Drackie wakie didn't even realize he'd been hexed? And he has the gall to witter on about the obliviousness in his school mates. Wizarding World up and coming Elite, indeed.

Wow, Snape MUST have been distracted to tune out all those warning signs. Still, this at least explains how he gets out to the teaching gig. I wondered how you were going to swing that. dumbles is going to be irritated in having to find another potions proff... unless he's finally willing to send Har to let the shadows play.

Interesting... i didn't realize Har had left that blood ice as a memento. I mean, it's not like he's going to forget the incident in a hurry.

Most interesting. Will the Shadows 'rescue' Snape or will V present Snape stripped and re programed to his beloved as a gift. would re programing him crush his innovative and creative spark that lets Snape do his potions genius thing?

oh no chika, V won't be the one losing. While he doesn't know of the strike on Siri Shadow Agent, he will soon enough. Hmmm, i wonder if there's a way to strip her of her knowledge before she's wiped out. a pity to lose all the secrets in that ancient brain.

heh, snape is that master of the understatement. 'not going to end well' indeed. ^^ It will amuse me to think of the looks on their faces when both vampire 'masters' realize they've been screwed over. *smirk.

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From bloodshound on July 01, 2012
this probably won't be up to my usual standards of review since i have the flu. Never the less, on we go.
*hums "The truth is out there, somewhere between two fairytales...' well, if anyone deserved to comment on the truth it would be Luna.
That's right har, you play to that phoenix crowd. Tell them what they want to hear and they generally fail to look any further.

Of course he's a lot calmer, he got to vent... and screw his beloved into oblivion. Anyone would be calmer after that. Poor Gin Gin. Is she a master of self delusion, harry and epic actor or both?

How the hellkirky is she holding basalisks captive. Is there no way they can get word out.
Oh, Cissa x 3. She's just getting more and more delusional... and she doesn't even realize it. Yeah, you're not getting any backers cause they realize you haven't a chance lovey.... well, dah! Oh dear, Cissa is plotting again and this plot may actually do some damage. The sooner she gets crushed the better.

Well, that's one problem on the way to being dealt with... He's not going with Har's 'germ warfare' idea? I thought it would rather solve things neatly and it couldn't be traced to him.

Does it count as correspondence if he doesn't write back?
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From twilitdragoneye on June 28, 2012
Gods above Narcissa lives up to her namesake in this. Like come on she's beyond delusional it's pathetic. I liked the interaction between Harry and Luna though, it was great. I can't wait to read the next update!
~Pen
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From Arctic1906 on June 20, 2012
This is by far one of the best fanfictions uve ever read. thats sayin something since I been readin fanfiction since I was 12 and im now 23. I was sad to have finally caught up even though I only been readin for 3 weeks. I read poession and weapon in that time. I just want to say great story I absolutly love the shadows!. o and can u send me the link to the other site that has all of thr story with no left out tibits. I was kinda sad I had to skip over them and keep reading. lol my email is smartin1906@gmail.com thanks for providing suck a great read. im already startin to reread the series. happy writing! o and ur grammer and use of words is really helpin me learn new words for my asvab test. tHanks!!!

P.S. I made an account Just so i could leave you an review. Wow i must really like your story!
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From twilitdragoneye on June 18, 2012
Please can't we just kill Bellatrix? It's not like she's useful for anything other than as an insane berserker. In otheran news Sirius is badass and I kept smirking over Ollivander's dilemma. Also I'm working on my patience so I expect to be rewarded with an awesome chapter! Hopefully one full of growls, barks, and howling. See you next update!
~Pen
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From ladilyndi on June 18, 2012
Well, I just finished reading Possession and Weapon for the first time. You are a wonderful writer. You have kept me enthralled for most of this epic (I do admit to skimming over some of the necessary slower parts). It will be interesting to see everyone's reactions when they realize they all made assumptions about Harry and his path rather than speaking with him honestly about it all. You have so much going on and yet it hasn't been convoluted like other epics, you've kept a firm hand on the story.

I look forward to see all future updates. Thank you for a wonderful read.
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From SailorSol on June 15, 2012
If I haven't said it recently, my dear, I love this story. I first caught it on FanFiction, and then moved here. I've followed it RELIGIOUSLY. I can't wait to see where you take it next.
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From bloodshound on June 15, 2012
whoa... i knew kisha was powerful but seriously... I hope har can take her. Where's her entourage btw? I thought her two guards never left her? Meh, gloat while you can lovey, it won't last long.
I'm glad Siri got outta there with his bits in tact. does that mean he's going to have to go back and have another shot later?
Looking forward to watching(figuratively speaking) Mooney do his thing.

Heh, poor Olli is completely barking up the wrong tree. I'm betting har didn't even know he'd dropped a feather. ^^
Still, this will stir the Tenchi up and draw their attention. Will that make it easier or harder for har to attract a dark tenchi?

well, that's one being they can check off the list. Still, malfoy jr (if he wasn't already) is toast, burnt, ashy and crumbly when they learn he and his dear ma are responsible. I don't think he'll get to die easily.

neh, what can they do with a Fawks feather?

Whoa, whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, hang on, wait, what?! BELLA is losing confidence in her master?! *waits for the world to tilt the right way up again. I though she was so fanatical (and homicidal and completely mad) that she wouldn't dare question her lords motives over anything... ever. oh wow, if things go pair shaped involving her, i can see them doing it hard core... and rather messily. If she tries for har though, she's going to get pinned like a butterfly and crushed like a bug.

and so the diary set comes into play and bigotry and racism? speciescism? are put to productive use. nasty, petty little creature that he is, i wonder how he'll feel if he ever learns he helped the dark win the war.

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From bloodshound on June 11, 2012
hmmm, if har wasn't the mate of the soon to be ruler of the world, he'd have a wonderful career in acting. Is that one of the missing basalisk found and rescued?
Well, just a little bit more and they'll snag their snape.
ooooooh, i am soooo looking forward to the Fen verse Remi grudge match. *chats 'Kill x 3) in the background.
I'm glad har's made peace with such killing as will need to be done. It's war. He can't afford to fall apart with each death.
Dumbles is naive believing har will just forgive them. After his childhood, perpetrating the same thing on him won't be forgiven so easily.
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From twilitdragoneye on June 07, 2012
I really feel for Severus, he's trying so hard to fight only for it to be hopeless in the end... I understand that Ginny serves a purpose and I'm sure she does it well but I still don't like her. And you are just teasing me with my wolves! They were barely in there this chapter *pout* This was a good update anyway. Can't wait for the next one!
~Pen
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From Ch3rry on June 07, 2012
Oh thank god a great fanfic has been update, after the horrible influx of shitty stories... Off to read :D
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From bloodshound on May 27, 2012
first off, let me just say. kudos for getting this done and up with RL distractions carrying on around you.

and so the first hints of har's less than light alliances come to light. you tell 'em gin gin.

heh, har may have been well taught but now at least he has a worthy subject to work his will and whiles on. Is some of that stamina coming from his alt form or is it mostly teen hormones and a serious lust build up?

heh, i suppose you need to think out side the box a bit for that one. neh, instead of flooding a room with light to keep the shadows out, would utter darkness work as well? i mean, once they adjust to hars total purity light, other lights would become shrug worthy neh?

germ warfare huh? Har, you're brilliant. AND V doesn't even have to get his hands dirty. ^^

ooooh, how long before har gets to get killy, killy on the poor little DE's. Man it sucks to be rank and file huh. :D

wow, a most impressive display of power there. So, the old shadow fist around the heart trick huh? *in my best 'get smart' voice. haven't seen that one in play since book 3 (i think) of david eddings Belgariad. and Har left his in place. its undetectable I assume?
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From Kayrox133 on May 26, 2012
I sat down a month or so ago and read this story. What an amazing trip. I just finished ch 73 I think. I like how you pointed out how the blood was everywhere...soaking into Millicent's robes, on Harry's feet, and spread out over the floor. Those two Death Eaters were either very foolish or very loyal to come in after being ejected from the throne room like that. I also imagine that the Shadows will get quiet a feast from Harry when they eat his shadows from his light. The parting threat to Millicent seemed to be an incentive I believe. :)
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From twilitdragoneye on May 25, 2012
This was delicious! Great chapter and the smut was wonderful! This entire story gives me chills reading it do wonderfully dark and masterfully written. Though I am still waiting on my wolves to come back into the picture. I did enjoy the scene with Ginny and the rest of them, my personal feelings on her character aside (I dislike her, I find her too easily given to obsession and refusal of reality) she gave them an excellent topic to chew on. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next!
*Pen
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