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From Ch3rry on May 25, 2012
Great chapter love the sexy times ;) can't wait to see what happens next.
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From bloodshound on May 12, 2012
*blinks. har was surprisingly accepting of the mass of technically murders he committed. though, in reality it might be more considered putting down sick animals. when you think about it, the odds are if they had been tried and sent to prison they would have ended up dead anyway... apparently, inmates don't like child predators and nasty things tend to happen to them. Har just saved the state a lot of time and energy, though it's a pity any of the others of their kid haven't been identified and pulled down. no child deserves that. Ah, well, that's for later, when they have W.W. sorted. i imagine they'll come down hard on pedos and their ilk then. har was pretty creative with those blood knives. I look forward to seeing what he thinks is appropriate for those remaining. Maybe something involving the shadows? after all, V have experience but the shadows have had eons to pick things up. ^^. right now they have more important fish to fry.

i can feel sorry for snape though, traded like meat, with neither really fussed about his pain or fate, though at least he'll likely live through it. So, were the shadows promises of peace to him made up of hole cloth or were they presenting a rose coloured version of things to snag him? Either way, he's got no escape now and no one to fall back on. he may as well do himself a favour and surrender.

Dolohov is interesting - I wonder how he'll take it when he learns that har is a true and equal mate, no merely a seduced pet.

I'm glad V remembered their time limits. Har can only stomp off on his tanty for so long before ppl are going to start looking or calling for him, though theres nothing to say they can't have fun in the mean time. I wonder what they'll make of Millie up and vanishing... well, i don't suppose there'll be all that many who care though Blaise, all alone now, is probably going to be more stressed than ever. they had misery, and a sort of death row comradery happening and now there's no one to share the load. i doubt he'll last long.
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From Ch3rry on May 11, 2012
Was not expecting harry to handle the aftermath killing those fools that way, but it was nice surprise. But I'm totally booooing the cut off on the Harry/ voldie sexy times in this chapter :P

All in all it was a great chapter, update soon plz.
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From bloodshound on May 02, 2012
i was thinking about that Q i asked about why V is seemingly content to sacrifice some of his minions, cause i remember him saying that none of his minions are forgotten when that werewolf got caught. But then i remembered that the dementors are serving him so unless they get killed outright in the fight or during interrogation, they'd just be stuffed in a cell and shoved somewhere out of the way, yeah? so, looking at it from V's point of view, they're not really lost, just sort of, being put into storage until he can get around to taking whatever facility they're at, and considering he'll eventually have the ministry anyway, it's not really a loss... did that make sense?

also, side question, construct Har, innocent shell, pseudo har... whatever u want to call him, is he still in effect or has he been swallowed whole and obliterated by har's building rage?
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From bloodshound on April 29, 2012
hmmm, i had a thought. its probably to late to work this in now, but could har say some of the rogue shadows obey V cause he has har's blood and therefore a touch of is power. i imagine it'd be like moths being attracted to a candle and then dawn comes and they forget the candle for the sun.
just a thought anyway. after har got parceltongue from V so what did V get, neh?
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From dime on April 29, 2012
Thanks for the review replies. ^^
I started reading this fic here, then moved over to FFN since that has the update notifications by mail; it's just more practical. But I guess I'll come back over to AFF from now on for every update.
Harry's response to Millie's apology was worth waiting for. As so often with this fic, I'm torn between amusement and disgust. It's really well-written! You're pretty creative, both with the plot and with torture methods.
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From twilitdragoneye on April 27, 2012
I love this, my God I love this. The chapter was so dark, I can't even describe my reaction; speechless is a good word for it. I love angry dark Harry! Though as much as I love his growth which I really do, I want to know more about the werewolves and what Sirius is up to. Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Pen
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From bloodshound on April 26, 2012
Thats useful to know. anytime he wants Fawks out of his head, he just has to let the rage rise.
hoolie d loolie. Talk about making your point with a mallet. *cues the dead bodies every music again. that blade and cock punishment was rather creative.
I'm glad V's there for him. Knowing you've killed and in rage is going to be hard for him but with v and the shadows help, he will accept it or at least come to terms with it. I wonder what will happen to dear Millie now.
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From Leania07 on April 26, 2012
Woah... Just, wow! Vicious little Harry we have here in his vengeance. I take it the Dursleys still have more torment to be put through and that's why they were vanished? Oh and that other guy to, the one who first suggested it to Vernon. Well, Millicent will not be going back to Hogwarts any time soon, girl is probably scared witless. Only destroy rocks and such, indeed! So glad to know Dumbledore is so oblivious; for all that Harry is supposed to kill the Dark Lord, yet he'd never go out and harm someone. So casual too, 'woe be to the Death Eaters who cross his way.' Now the healing can slowly begin; got the bulk of it out of the way with that display. Wonderfully done, and I can't wait to read what you have in store next!

Leania
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From Leania07 on April 25, 2012
So things are starting to become challenging enough for Voldie, hmm? Is that Ministry worker (don't remember the name...the "stamper") going to send out that letter write that journal? So Ginny may not be with Harry after all, hmm? She believes she loves him, but perhaps its not really love of the kind she wants, but more of admiration. Hermione I still see as a challenge to bring to Harry's side, her own beliefs and obedience of authority will make 'recruiting' her a challenge. So is Sev going to answer the 'call' or will the Shadow's intervene? Or will he accept the Shadow's offer before he is summoned? I await for the next chapter!

Leania
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From bloodshound on April 24, 2012
again, lots of forebodings *cues Korn's 'dead bodies everywhere' as background music... and cranks it at the good bits.

hah, V doesn't seem to value his troops that much, or is that just the 'foot soldiers'. Kinda makes you wonder why they join if they're so 'throw away item'. At least, the ones who didn't have fear as their motivator.

nods to Gin Gin, i wonder if she'd be so willing to live/die for har now that's she's getting to know the reality. The end of the chappie says she really doesn't know him very well, or at least hasn't come fully to terms that he's human, despite all the crazy events that happen around him and his power. Humans, like he said, hate, love, hurt, crave vengeance, FEEL. har is no saint, not to desire such things [even the saints had to lean on God for that as they can't do it in their own strength, it's in fallen human nature to lash out at those who hurt us. it takes a higher being, or leaving behind of human frailties as you move closer to nirvana (depending on your philosophy/beliefs)to swing forgiveness without a desire for vengeance, intense rage etc.]

It's awesome that har is willing to stand by his friends even with all that rage simmering away back there. pity he can't arrange for Xeo to have a little accident. >>

heh, poor amelia. i can understand her frustration a bit. 8 aurors dead means 8 that have to be replaced, trained etc, with their resources already stretched, as well as the personal level pain of losing subordinates, its troublesome. Not to mention of having their 'dead-to-rights' (well, sort of anyway) target ditch them. Still, V's not a D.L. for nothing neh?
on a side point, oh, the Goblins are sooooooo very toast, burnt and extra charcoal y.

For a D.L. V has a very up beat attitude. don't see things as problems, see them a challenges. Very power of positive thinking. *once again cue's the 'dead bodies everywhere' music on behalf of the goblins. wow, sucks to be them. They're going to get dead either way, it's just this has stepped up the time table.

Will V be angsty over the shadows snagging Snape? Will Fawks be able to pick it up? I know snape can Occuld with the best of them, but surely theres a difference between shadow minion and a regular pleb?

awwwww, it's sweet that he misses har. V is probably the only person har knows who completely understands his pain and once har has recovered some, vice versa. Har still has a lot of stages to go through on the recovery trail.

shakes my head at the wizarding world. i can't believe they don't take into account mental damage. seriously, this 'there's no physical evidence so no harm, no foul' thing has got to go. V and Har are in for a crap ton of headaches legislation wise when they take over... good thing they'll likely have Mio to help.

won't har going berserk and killy, killy, bring dumble doubt down on them though? well, i suppose it's how he goes about it (and if there are any witnesses) that will say how that plays, that and the events leading up to it. Har's been relatively calm to date. He's due for an emotional explosion of some kind or other.

looking forward to the V on Har action next. They both seriously need it. It's seeing how they manage it that'll be the fun thing.

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From dominique1 on April 23, 2012
so good
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From dominique1 on April 23, 2012
i kind of feel bad for bliase and Millicent i hope that they suffer but do i really draco was the prince i think that if they give harry loyalty maybe they might save them self
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From Leania07 on April 20, 2012
Interesting chapter; so Milli is looking for forgiveness now? Wonder how that'll pan out. Very good on the fight scene between Voldie and the Aurors. I wonder what the Dementors and the Shadows are going to do, I don't see how they can heal, and unless they "Shadow-walk" a healer there... Guess I'll just have to wait and see, hmm? Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.

Leania
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From bloodshound on April 19, 2012
blinks... well, that's a rather foreboding chappie.
for shadowing all over the place.
the auror's have seriously got gall attacking voldi straight up like that and i can't see him just letting it lay. Still, he's not invulnerable and it's probably time for him to stop acting like he is.
As for Ollie... where DOES har fall in that? i mean sure his alter form is pure blood tenshi but he's also straight human...
well, now we know what the journals were for. nice. so i doesn't matter whose bit of soul is stuffed back into what bod as long as there's a bit of soul in there to twist?
i can feel sorry for blaise and millie, they were following orders... mind you they were stupid orders but still. I hope har will be contented to vent on them and not go after younger siblings and such.
I know she's desperate and what she's about to do is not quite bright, but waiting for the other shoe to drop has got to be one of the worst feelings in the world. you're turned into this small cauldron of bubbling dread and nothing distracts you. At least when you know the consequences of your actions you can adjust to them (though i think in her case, she'll be dead)
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