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Reviews for White Flag

By : bittsweetmis
  • From kati on May 01, 2009
    Hmm... I didn't like the whole "moving in" bit where they had to do all the shopping and stuff, but I suppose it's necessary to the rest of the story. It felt like a bit of a filler to me, but I did enjoy reading it. I am just so excited to read the rest of the story that the chapters which set up events are kinda frustrating for me. *blush* Sorry. I'm just really impatient. I like the little details you give about Harry, like his routine and stuff. And the fleeting glimpse of the Cullens whet my thirst for more! I was intrigued by the President guy, he talked like we're going to see more of him... Or perhaps that's just me reading too much into it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

    ~Kati-chan
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  • From Irishangel2 on April 30, 2009
    I love twilight so much!!! So when I saw this story I was so excited!! My two fav together!! Your writing is great. Descriptive and easy to understand!. I am enjoying it very much! Looking foward to the next chapter... where harry and edward will meet??? :)
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  • From ANON - Alicia on April 25, 2009
    update soon
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  • From elyn on April 14, 2009
    Very interesting! :) I hope to see more of it sometime. Here is my e-mail address since AFF sometimes hides it: tainted_love214@yahoo.com. I'd like to receive updates on the story, please! I like your writing. The story is flowing smoothly, though I can't wait until the Cullens make an appearance!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2009
    wonderful start......im so excited to read whats going to happen next....keep up the hard work :)
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  • From Vally on April 09, 2009
    I like the build up so far and I'm itching to see how things turn out. I'm particularly curious to see what you do with the wolves of Forks and if you make them a large part at all. I'm also curious as to when exactly in the Twilight timeline are the HP group coming in? I'm not to picky about timeline but I also get confused easily by it during crossovers. If all else fails I'll shug and go with it though, so no worries! ^^ Update soon and add me to your update mailing list please!
    Email: LuvinShadows@gmail.com
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  • From Ikippiki on April 07, 2009
    I can't wait to read more! Will Sirius reappear in this story? I just can't wait for them to go to washigton!!
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  • From dracoharry4life on April 04, 2009
    Just re reading this. I hope we get more soon.
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  • From on March 27, 2009
    I love it i can't wait to see what happen next
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  • From spooksies on March 27, 2009
    this is a good and awesome fic. keep going with your work!

    laters! ~_^

    miko
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  • From kati on March 27, 2009
    Thank you for the nice long chapter! Um, but are you using a beta? I ask only because, although the vast majority of this has perfect punctuation and grammar, I have noticed a few mistakes that I'm pretty sure a beta would pick up on. For instance, "Sound's like..." should be "Sounds like" (I think that was Bill talking). Cause the former means "Sound is like" which I don't think is what you mean. Anyway, there are a few others, including in the first chapter, but it's nothing major. I loved seeing things from Neville's POV; sometimes writers forget that Harry and/or his spouse aren't the only ones with problems. It gives the story some credibility. Plus Neville is just so lovely! And Harry isn't overdramatic either -- more brownie points for you. :D I can't wait for things to unfold even further! Thank you for the email notifiying me of the update.

    ~Kati-chan
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  • From dracoharry4life on March 27, 2009
    Iforgot to say in the other review, I hope since Harry has the Potter and Black money, he and Neville get a better car then that ugly red truck from the book. ...Nice jeep, truck, or car
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  • From dracoharry4life on March 27, 2009
    Man I dislike Dumbles!
    Love the crossover, especially Edward/Harry. Thanks for that! Will it be Neville/Jacob?
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  • From Jan on March 26, 2009
    Gotta love Neville ^_^ poor Harry, he's always getting hurt .

    Please update chapter 4 soon ^_^

    Jan


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  • From ANON - Hello on March 26, 2009
    Great so far. I hope you update another chapter soon. :)
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