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Reviews for The Children of Atum

By : ajgordon
  • From RyaResshi on August 31, 2009
    I really like the story so far. Is Harry ever going to tell Severus about the curse? I think he should. Also, are Remus and Sirius going to find out about the pet thing? That would be interesting. Do you think Harry could ask Severus to invite Draco? That would be interesting. Please post more soon!
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  • From WolfPup5683 on August 25, 2009
    Great story, SableSilverain suggested that I read this and I am really glad she had me read this, love the collar bit btw.
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  • From davidtennantismyman on August 13, 2009
    love
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  • From TobiIsMyGoodBoy on August 11, 2009
    that was an amazing chapter but when will snape find out about harry? PLease I got to know even if its just chapter wise.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on August 11, 2009
    Writing all the details can be difficult, I had just assumed that Harry was not in Quidditch because of being Severus' pet. I mean why would Severus want his apprentice to be away for Quidditch when he has other more interesting persuits for the boy? We knew this was AU from the beginning so don't worry about the flying thing. I do enjoy this story, it's different and refreshing and I love the needy Harry with the grown up and child mixed together.
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  • From sailermoon01 on August 11, 2009
    I really love this story so far and I have to say... even if it does make me seem like a perv (oh well :) ) I find the idea of Harry sucking Sev's thumb and suckling his cock through the night so hot and I just don't know why I don't read it more in fics. Anyway, can't wait to read more

    xoxo
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  • From Elphaba on August 11, 2009
    good chapter lol at the oral fixation
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  • From Hambares on August 06, 2009
    excited to see an update! Thank you kindly, dear author!
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  • From ladyedgecombe on August 05, 2009
    I was so happy to see an update. My father had surgery and I have been playing nurse the last two weeks and when I came back I got to read three chapters. I really loved you explaination of what was expected from Harry and Severus. I don't often see that and really believe more authors should go into detail too. Thanks for the updates and don't be a stranger.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on August 05, 2009
    Great story and I hope Harry tells Snape soon about his problem.
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  • From Elphaba on August 05, 2009
    Ok I withhold the rotten fruit since that was a good chapter. Thanks for it. I am sorry RL was sucking for you!
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  • From wolfcathope on August 04, 2009
    Thank god for the heavenly food and bondage. I'm glad your back and writing How is Snape going to take it when he finds out what Harry is and How is Harry going to take it? I think Snape should thank Lucius. love that you are back
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  • From Harcopotfoy on July 31, 2009
    Damn, I didn't realise this was a WIP, and I never read WIPs coz the I get to the end of whats written and I want more and I can't have it yet :(. Overall I like it a lot. However I wasn't so sure about chapter 14. I didn't find it GeminiCancer but I felt that everything went a little fast and I found it hard to see Snape going from not even telling Harry about wanting him to completely dominating him, and I kinda thought the same about this chapter, that I prefer a gentle easing into a full time BDSM relationship, but, well... how it gets there I'm happy once its there :). Can't wair for Severus to find out about Harry being a whats-it-called and Remus/Sirius finding out about Snape and visa versa (can we please still have some HP/RL/SB(maybe/SS) action? I'd hate for that to just be cut out.
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  • From yuiop12345 on July 11, 2009
    i love this please continue and update soon!!!!
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  • From yuiop12345 on July 11, 2009
    this was great
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