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Reviews for The Children of Atum

By : ajgordon
  • From yuiop12345 on July 11, 2009
    thanks so much for writing this story, I love it!
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  • From yuiop12345 on July 11, 2009
    great work
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  • From yuiop12345 on July 11, 2009
    This is great!
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  • From yuiop12345 on July 11, 2009
    I love this
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  • From alwaysabrat on July 06, 2009
    This is a good story! :D...and THANK YOU for explaining how a good healthy BDSM relationship should be! some poeple just dont get it and it annoys me sometimes. >.< they think its just about pain and dominance and that the submisives are weak when they really arnt. they also dont realize there are differnct levels and the first thing they think of is the most extream stuff (such as the whips, branding and blood play) oh well i guess such is life... keep up hte good work and i cant wait for your next chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - sable_silverrain on June 22, 2009
    I've been checking a LOT recently, but I see no updates... Will we get more soon??
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  • From Jealousy on June 19, 2009
    Hun, not sure if someone else has mentioned it to you but there is such thing as Neko-gin, though I think it's Neko-jin. Hmm, not sure. Anyway, it's from beyblade and probably a few other things also. Rei/Ray Kon is a Neko-jin and so are the White Tiger's, his old team.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2009
    Also I would love to see Lucius come "play" with Sev and Harry... that would be delicious.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2009
    AAAAHHHH!!! you have no idea how much I LOVE your story! HPSS is my OTP and this story is truly out of this world! I love a dom!Sev and your writing is beautifully done. I am on pins and needles waiting for your next update- I do hope Sev will continue "marking" Harry with his seed, cum dripping down his pretty face... hint hint LOL. Well you are my new idol dear metoo and i can't wait for more!
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  • From mikunikuetu on June 08, 2009
    The story is pretty nice so far, to think I finished reading all of the chapters in just one day, normally it takes me only a few hours when it is a story that has 10+ chapters in it so far, I guess I read smut more slowly then, although I would like to ask about when will Harry tell Snape of his unique condition, and will there be a threesome/moresome coming soon, I was also wondering if there will be any chances of Harry ever having sex with those in his current age group besides Draco, I mean I don't mind that Harry gets so much from older guys, but he needs to be with his own age group once in a while though... with adult supervision of course... and will there be some one sided relationships here in this story?

    Also another thing is that I wish the chapters were longer, but then in this case quality beats quantity, I really did like what you have done making Harry a nymphomaniac, most people never pull it off very well but you managed.

    Anyways I hope to see the next chapter soon,

    mikunikuetu
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  • From mrequecky on June 03, 2009
    Yay!!! Loooved :D
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  • From gigglefaries101 on June 01, 2009
    i have just read threw all of what you have wrote so far and can now say i really like this at first i struggled with the concept but the excillant writing kept me reading also knowing harry was a creature made it easier at the begining i had to see him as a miniture adult to get to grips with it if im making anysense the inhanced inteligence and magical ability but now hes well a little older ;-) i am quite intralled i do love harry&snape stories i thought there first time together was very good
    i love the others who have appeared
    i do have one question i am not to aware of sub dom relationships and have read in your story harry is snapes sub and harry is to only be with snape unless given permission would the same apply to snape, would he be exclusive to harry or will he still be allowed to shag about ???
    keep going i love this
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  • From haileybeth on June 01, 2009
    I find this story very intresting and the last chapter where Harry and Severus first get together, at least to me, wans't a rape scene, trust me on that, have done several rape scenes. I rather liked that chapter and hope that Remus and Sirius take Harry decision well. Keep going, :D
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  • From ValheruYaoi on May 31, 2009
    Great story, be careful with the contract part though, Written down it could easily become a magical binding thing and that takes away the freewill of Harry to wander to Sirius and Remus when he goes back home.
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  • From Dracoroxmaisox on May 30, 2009
    Hey, I've been reading this for a while (sry i havent reviewed b4) but its such a great story.
    I love your Harry and how he fits into the world that you've altered
    This description of BDSM was really well written and it was really interesting.
    I havent read a really good BDSM story in a while, and i'm glad my newest one is yours.
    The smexi scenes you write are just AMAZING and i can't wait for more!!!
    Great chapter
    Great story
    Can't wait for the next one!!!
    -Kyle
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