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Reviews for Secunda Fortuna

By : angelwarrior1
  • From ANON - heartstar on June 19, 2011
    Oh I love this I hope to see more soon! please
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2011
    Just wanted to say I've loved what you've written of this so far - I was so happy to see it updated! Particularly liked how you've described magic in Gotham :D

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  • From CrownofLeaves on June 18, 2011
    wow. when I read the summary, I thought it sounded so crazy it must be good! and indeed it is! Insanely good. Can't wait to read more :)
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  • From ANON - Althydia on June 18, 2011
    I'm not usually very interested in superheroes and crossovers, but I love this story. Granted, Batman is not the typical superhero (since he has no superpower), but I also like the original idea of Harry being pregnant with Tom Riddle and how you portray him. I don't think he's OOC because of the reasons you mentioned and also because I see Harry as being ambiguous enough to go different depending on the context set by the author. See what I mean? I'm also very happy that Harry is still British in language and culture. I was wondering, though: being very far away from home and missing his friends (as you mentioned), wouldn't Harry try and keep in contact with the British wizarding world at least in some small ways? Harry, as I see him, is very attached to magic and to the world that was revealed to him at 11, so shouldn't he feel some more homesickness and need to keep in touch with the magical world (if just through keeping some magical artifacts and family belongings at home), while still in hiding?
    Anyway, I think the chapter was quite easy to read too. The only thing that could be a bit uncomfortable for readers is how you sometimes switch tenses in the same paragraphs.
    Now I really look forward to Harry's reaction to Bruce Wayne. It also seems a bit strange that Harry wouldn't have heard of at least Batman, particularly after being saved by him (shouldn't that make him curious about his saviour? A man in a strange costume like that?). Even without seeking the information himself, couldn't he have heard people talking or seen some news titles in passing in the streets? Some information must be very hard to miss, and I see Harry as naturally curious too. But maybe you have a reason for that too? And I like how Harry is getting closer to 'David' by feeling that his 'spark' is safe. That will probably lead to some confusion since David's spark leads him to Bruce Wayne... Particularly when Bruce is already interested in and intrigued by 'Harleen'. Also, when Tom is born, Harry will be able to do magic again and Tom might do accidental magic too, which will make it harder to keep their cover. Will parseltongue also play a role? I hope that Harry can still use it and might use it as a secret language with Tom... :)
    Both Harry and Bruce are definitely people with many secrets, but that could also play in their favour, couldn't it? After all, they both know how important it is to keep secrets sometimes and can respect that about the other.
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  • From SenNightShade on June 18, 2011
    Ok, I admit that I was confused about David Forrestor. I had to re-read a few times before I finally got it. Seriously I was like, "Oh! I get it now. It's Bruce in disguise. Duh! -hits self on the forehead-".

    But I do like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter, Harry's gonna be surprised to see that the "homeless guy" was actually some rich guy. =] But here's a question, when Harry gives birth; is he really gonna name the reincarnated Tom "Tom"? Or will he name the baby something different, give him a new chance to be someone completely different in his new life?
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  • From bloodshound on June 18, 2011
    is harry going to br girly for keeps now or is this just pregnanncy induced? I would think, if tom was naturally selfish, raising him with another like Teddy from the get go would be good... I can also see how thats unlikely to happen.
    Does Hary get to keep his bits? If he does Bats is going to be in for a bit of a shock when he finds out:P
    Wonder if he gets go learn about the whole wizard thing too.
    Also, is HARRY really gonna call the kid Tom Riddle? Hell, if (more likely when) the kid turns out to be magical, thats gunna come back to bite them.
    Then again, how many knew Riddles real name?
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  • From ANON - Hazel on June 06, 2011
    woo-hoo, this is a totally new brand of story line for me. I never would have thought of combining Batman with Harry Potter, but you sure make it flow nicely. I do hope that you will continue to update. I have been having the worst of luck in finding a well written, that the author intends to indeed finish. And or, having the author stops posting altogether, and just leaving us readers hanging with a perpetual cliffhanger.
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  • From Aedynava on June 06, 2011
    BAAAAAAAAWWWWWWW!! NYUU!!! D: B-But... I need moooore! DX Please update soon oh awesome one!! D:
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  • From ANON - NickyNakole on May 22, 2011
    I love this story so far! I can't wait till Tom is born and Harry meets Bruce. :) Hopefully you can bring to life another chapter soon!
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  • From george4bob2 on April 16, 2011
    loooove the story so far cant wait 4 the next chapter
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  • From SunnyGerty on April 12, 2011
    XD
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  • From MissiYoung on March 29, 2011
    i wasn't sure about this but it's really cool. am glad i read it!
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  • From SilentMercy on March 27, 2011
    Love the story so far, hope there will be more coming soon.
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  • From ANON - morri on March 04, 2011
    Thank you..a wonderful story and I hope to read more soon.

    I smiled because of the image batman would have made, picking up lost grocery
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  • From ANON - Negami on February 28, 2011
    Oii, u can't just leave us hanging like that!!! I want more!!! can't wait to see where u are going with this story, but I
    already like the beginning!!! so please keep up the good work and update as soon as possible!!
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