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By : SaitouLover
  • From ANON - Steph on May 15, 2013
    The formatting of your story is odd--the font is impossibly small and I can't enlarge it as the text dissapears off the right edge of my screen. (and no, clicking on 'enlarge font' does not help) I can barely read yor story. Is it posted at another archive? For some reason this archive (only this archive, and only some of the stories) seems to be incompatible with my iPod.
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  • From RachaelRose on May 12, 2013
    Hey, I am really enjoying your story it is excellent. The story line is good, plot is good. It is just great and I cannot wait to read more please update soon! Also I'm new to this website and I can't see any function to follow the stories, does it not have this feature? If it does can you please tell me where to find it.
    Rachael
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  • From ANON - Gina Marie on May 07, 2013
    Thank you for updating. This is one of my favorite stories. Can't wait to see how their relationship progresses. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Shirlisa on April 25, 2013
    Please, please, please write another chapter, I love this story, the character of Snape is written so perfectly I find myself wishing I knew you and could just
    listen to your mannerisms for a day, maybe a bit of Snape's mannerisms are in you as well? This is a beautiful story, and written so wonderfully, I wish you would self-publish a book. You never once go out of character and for that I am grateful and really wish for more chapters. I had thought you had abandoned this story, and was so happy when I found out a new chapter was posted. Please keep writing, and I hope we can talk someday, because I am literally just mindblown after every chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2013
    Really enjoyed Snape with an accent! I'm also loved everything you've written so far about the Old Ways and Stewards and the conversation Harry had with Dobby about it and the history of the castle. Very nice :) Excited for an update! Keep up the good work.
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  • From jules3677 on April 14, 2013
    Just finished reading the 12 chapters you have posted so far in this story. Wow! Got another fan here. Totally fascinated with the magical old ways & the Stewards. A potion for each person who could interfere with Snape's guardianship of Harry. Brilliant! Even better he has neutered Voldie & Dumbldore's manipulations. I did so like how you wrote Minevra's HoH neglect too. I am impressed with how you have written Snape grooming Harry. Its been an enthralling read & I hope that more of this is forthcoming. Thankyou.
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  • From ANON - Aya on April 13, 2013
    I really like the story. I've never seen anything like it itsvery original. I just wanted to let you know that chapter 10 is really difficult to read because of the formatting.
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  • From chrissy on March 31, 2013
    just wondering if your could add me to list for updates please! thanks
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  • From ANON - chrissy on March 31, 2013
    Cool story! Look forward to the next Update.
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  • From NinaSweets on March 24, 2013
    Feed the hungry hungry author with reviews. I'm so glad you updated :)
    I'm loving this story, I love a little plot with my smut and you're giving a lot of plot but I'm liking it :) interesting concept though I can't say I'd be unhappy if it was just Snape torturing Harry sexually for the rest of the story lol. I hope there's more information on the Old Ones and their ways, I find myself a little lost I hope I'm meant to be and it all becomes clearer in time.
    Can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - tkykitty on March 19, 2013
    So freaking HOT!!!! I loved...well everything about this chapter. I am soooooo happy that you are updating again. Love it! Man I mind is still blown by the sheer sexiness of those two that I can't even review correctly. lol. Thanks for blowing my mind! Till the next chapter ;-)
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  • From SpeedyTomato on March 18, 2013
    First of all, the premise for this is quite good. There just aren't many stories out here dealing with this subject that have it in more than one chapter. For that, I applaud you. However, in doing a quick read-through of the thing, I've noticed a couple problems I'd like to point out.

    The first thing that became readily apparent to me is that you have very little knowledge of the human body, specifically the intestinal tract, and what can/can't be done with it. Now, even taking into consideration that these are wizards we're dealing with, the reality is they are human and would be subject to the same laws of nature when it comes to the digestive system as muggles, thus things functioning the same. Keeping that in mind, there is no possible way to have them doing some of the things you are.

    One of the first things I noticed was the 'holding' of the water for extended periods of time. This isn't possible at all. If you tried, the water would absorb itself into the body through the walls of the large intestine. Considering the volume of water your talking here, Harry would probably then die from what is called water intoxication. Yes, that is very real. Just a few years ago a woman died in a very public way from such a thing during a contest to win a video game console during a radio show. The human body can only absorb so much water before it becomes imbalanced, throwing everything off, then causing death. A link to explain that is here; http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Water_intoxication Though you don't have him drinking it, the result can be the same as the large intestine can absorb water just as easily as one can drink it.

    The second thing is the use of the 'butt plug' for hours on end. Unlike with females, the rectum has no natural lubricants. Thus, anything used has to be lubricated and that lubricant doesn't last for hours on end or overnight. If you tried, the pain you would be in when things were removed would be something you wouldn't want to deal with. It would be agonizing.

    These are just two issues with the story and the 'realism' of it. There are other things you're mentioned as well that throw the whole thing off in making it believable. While, on the face, it does sound good, the suspension of belief on what's done rather dims the enjoyment for anyone that has more than a little passing knowledge of the intestinal tract. Just a little research, or asking for help in places like the forum, would make this story so much better, and believable.

    Just my thoughts on the matter...
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  • From ANON - aperyder on March 17, 2013
    Cannot wait for the next chapter. Really enjoyed so far.
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on March 17, 2013
    A wonderful story. One I've been waiting to come back for a long time. From it's initial beginnings, it's grown into something much deeper and more special under your steady hand. I like the backstory of the "Old Ways" and the magical mythology you've created for it. I hope that this update means you've come back to this and we'll be able to see more of this original plot. Thanks so much.
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  • From djaddict on March 17, 2013
    Very, very nice.
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