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By : evil-minded
  • From moodysavage on August 12, 2012
    oh my gosh I loved loved loved this chapter! well not the end... Ron is horrible and Snape better hurry up and get there to rescue Harry... but everything else! I love that Snape loves Harry... maybe lol. That was so perfect. And I love how he is studying and watching Harry so carefully and working to gain his trust while still being determined to find out what he needs to know. I look forward to when Snape goes to Harry's uncle's house. Snape is truly going to protect and take care of Harry. He is going to be furious when he sees what Ron is doing to Harry. I can't wait!
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  • From bloodshound on August 11, 2012
    sigh, ron should really know better. what a close minded DICK! I can't see snape letting this lay.
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  • From ANON - PandaGaara on August 11, 2012
    Aww Harry and Snapes little scene was cute! And Ron not only needs an ass whooping but suspension for beating a fellow student and discrimination! I hope someone helps Harry and Ron doesn't get away with this.
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  • From ANON - Kate on August 11, 2012
    Great chapter!! part with Sev was very good and i'm happy for Harry. Later in dorm.. grrr I want kill Ron, really what a moron. I hope that Snape will come and help Harry. I look forward to a new chapter :)) good luck
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  • From ANON - jonas on August 04, 2012
    I recognized you from over on ff.net. :D I love your stories very much. They are extremely captivating. At least I don't get bored of them. I have read twenty-one days, the sequel and I just wanted to ask. I liked them all. Thank you for being an amazing writer, willing to take the risk of sharing your work with 100's of thousands of people. It is much appreciated.
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  • From SteveSettler on July 23, 2012
    uhm, somehow the review I've made just a moment ago is gone - and it's been such a good one :D
    I've just written something along the lines that it's good your story has a plot line and not just sex while at the same time I can't wait for future chapters finally *lol*
    great story

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  • From JeanMcIory on July 21, 2012
    hm, I think, it's surely been a shock for Severus. if you learn about your boy-friend being abused, it has to be horrible and you really have me thinking. strange, how you manage it, making people think with your stories, maybe that's the reason I love them so very much
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  • From ANON - draechaeli on July 20, 2012
    Interesting so far, I'll keep reading. I like how the story is building slowly. There was a couple little grammer mistakes in this chapter I thought I would point out to you (if you don't want me to in the future just tell me to piss off):

    it is 'in' or 'at' a Boarding School not 'on a boarding school'

    you said "for the third time during not even three minutes." You should say: 'During the last three minutes he sighed three times' or 'He sighed for the third time, in less than three minutes' or 'He sighed for the third time, it hadn't even been three minutes'

    you said "it definitely was one of such times" you do not need the 'of' or the 's' on time it should read: 'it definitely was one such time'

    you said "go under your skin" this is fine, the turn of phrase is 'get under your skin'

    You also had a couple sentences that were a bit confusing because of comma usage but I am also not very good with commas so I am not going to try and help with that.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From moodysavage on July 20, 2012
    I'm glad Snape made it a rule about Harry eating something at every meal. I look forward to Harry getting used to Snape too. Right now he can't even reach out to Harry without him flinching so it will be really nice when Harry is able to react differently because he trusts Snape enough to not be hurt.
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  • From bloodshound on July 20, 2012
    I'm glad Snapes finally getting a handle on that. How do they expect har to do ANYTHING, with a two thirds starved body.
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  • From ANON - Kate on July 20, 2012
    really, i don't know if your English is bad, because English is not my first lenguage too. :) So, for me your story is good, interesting and i'm wainting for next chapter :)
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  • From JeanMcIory on July 20, 2012
    absolutly grat story, evil, great chapter
    your story is not just about sex but has a plot behind it, and information, I just love it
    Gryffindor!
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  • From SteveSettler on July 20, 2012
    I'm glad that you had this going slowly, and I also like it that you had both, Severus and Harry, being unsure about the entire thing, but I also like it how you have handled their different unsureness
    loved the chapter again very much
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  • From Markhal on July 14, 2012
    Great chapter. I am very impressed with your descriptions of BDSM relationship. It is very well written and it really explains that it IS consensual and safe and sane. I hope Harry will gather the strength to tell Severus his past and fears. And I loved the hug at the end of the chapter. Thank you for the update!
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  • From bloodshound on July 13, 2012
    i like that snape is taking it slow. As messed up as har is he needs someone to go at a snails pace with him. The fact that snape was a spy and is able to read a lot form non verbal cues says a lot as well. This chappie flowed pretty smoothly. Kudos.
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