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Reviews for The Wages of Going On

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - jujukitty on December 13, 2013
    stupid stubborn boys, it's bad when draco is being the reasonable one lmao. keep up teh good work :D
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on December 13, 2013
    At least there's more of a simmering rage now, rather than an outright fury, between the three men. At last they are starting to use their heads and not just let the heat in their blood control them. I'm sure that Severus is smart enough to eventually come around and accept the truth...he wouldn't have been a very successful spy if he couldn't bend to the situation. As for Draco, he's already smart enough to see to the preservation of his own life if nothing else...and that means he'll try to help the others too.
    Revenge though...revenge is good. On that point all three of the men agree, and they might just find a common ground in the destruction of their enemies.
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  • From Genuka on December 12, 2013
    He found it? This is going to be a problem isn't it...
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on December 05, 2013
    Oof, so much to say and to guess at what's going on. Snape is mass of confusion and emotion, trying to figure out what is going on--wanting to be a part of it, and yet also wanting to stay out of it. If I were to guess I'd say he doesn't understand himself right now, and just why he's reacting the way that he is. Thanks for another update...I'm enjoying trying to winkle out the details of what is happening, and in trying to figure out just where you're going with this. It's very intriguing.
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  • From BAFan on December 03, 2013
    Ch. 9

    Unexpected twist there. Which, considering it's one of your stories, ought to be expected! *g* I really don't know what to say about this chapter, except it was certainly dramatic.
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  • From Jan on November 27, 2013
    Please update chapter 9 soon.
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  • From Genuka on November 21, 2013
    Harry! Damnit man! You know it would serve you right if the bond apparated you, Draco, or Severus straight to each other! Bloody stubborn Gryfindor!
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  • From BAFan on November 19, 2013
    Ch. 8

    God. Harry's stubbornness might very well kill him. Surely Draco and Snape are feeling *something* that will alert them to this crisis! Waiting not quite as patiently as usual for the next update.
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  • From Genuka on November 11, 2013
    Harry, you're being an idiot and if you don't wise up or Snape and Draco don't loose their tempers with you soon then you'll all be dead. *shakes head* I'm starting to think that your bondmates ought to just kidnap you until you've all sorted it.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on November 11, 2013
    Oh no. Poor Harry. But I can understand why he might not want to see Snape and Draco right now. But if the bond is starting to react then I guess he won't have a choice whether he's ready or not.

    Great story so far.
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  • From Genuka on November 11, 2013
    Unless there's more communication, true communication between the three the bond's reaction is going to be vicious and try to force the issue(s).
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on November 07, 2013
    Those two! What a couple of idiots they are. Harry making assumptions about Severus, and Severus making assumptions about Harry...they'll never get along at this rate. They've got to figure out what's happening with this bond, for it will not be so simple or so kind as to just exist as it does. Life is not that kind or easy for either of them. And, if Draco isn't going to be of any help, it's going to be up to Harry, Hermione and Snape to suss it out. Pride is going to break the both of them if they aren't any smarter. Pride, and bad feelings on both sides.
    Thanks for another difficult chapter, and for exposing yet more of the boy-who-lived's and the master spy's blind spots. I wanted to shake the snot out of both of them, but that only means that you did a good job.
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  • From moodysavage on November 05, 2013
    I like how they sense Harry as a steel mountain. It's a good symbol of Harry's will and determination and it will be a great way of showing how the bond changes along with his opinion of his bondmates. And the contempt he feels is perfect. Much better than if he felt guilty or focused on feeling like a victim.
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on October 27, 2013
    I worry that Harry is putting his stubbornness before his good sense. I think that Hermione is feeling the same way. His emotions, despite his assertation that he's dealing with it, are driving him to ignore his common sense, and I hope that Hermione will be able to help him see that. As for Severus, his own pride is eating at him now, and that doesn't bode well...he'll probably end up doing something very stupid. I know that he refuses to feel guilt for what he did, but I know that he does, and that he regrets being made to loose control and hurt another in that way.
    All in all, you have a very complicated story here, full of pain and possibilities. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Genuka on October 27, 2013
    *sigh* Stubborn men. The bond isn't going to leave the situation alone. They're essentially pretending that it doesn't exist, there's too much magic involved in the essence of the bond its self. It will force the issue until its satisfied as to the outcome and then it will enforce and re-enforce the bindings. Its still to volatile and could react... badly.
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