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Reviews for The Wages of Going On

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From moodysavage on April 05, 2014
    ah... do I sense a crack... a tiny little chink... Harry is seeing and recognizing how Draco would try to sincerely protect him... and Snape! Does he see a spot of genuine care for his safety from Harry? ah yes... the hard-headed ones just might have to see the error of their own thought processes and acknowledge that they COULD be wrong in only seeing the value of their own feelings and point of view. *snicker* Poor Draco... what you have to put up with... and the worry that they have to work together to rescue you... well they better shape up! lol
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  • From moodysavage on March 30, 2014
    Doesn't Harry get that his rage is counter-productive? It will cause him to make mistakes.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 26, 2014
    about #25...

    You call THAT doing better??? Potter is like a dog with a bone! He needs some kind of
    perspective that I thought he would have found on his own. At this point, I'm willing to
    see Hermione step in & help him see clearly, because he's TOO damn volatile right now.

    NO, I don't expect friendship, but I would expect a trained Auror to be able to put
    feelings aside at this point, so he can get away from the mess that was created from no fault
    of their own. It looks like Draco is the referee to make it happen.

    I just feel like he reverted back to being a fourteen year old boy, with anger issues.

    Other than that, it was a hair pulling chapter. O. M. G.
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  • From BAFan on March 24, 2014
    Ch. 25

    Damn! What a maelstrom of emotions from Harry. He's going to give himself an ulcer, at the very least. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on March 23, 2014
    Harry is still driving me insane. Really, I just want to turn him over my knee and give him a proper spanking for being soooo concerned only about himself. I understand where his rage is coming from, but it is long past time he grew up and pushed his way out of it because it will not do any of them any good, least of all him. I was very impressed by how Severus kept his cool and didn't rise to the bait. It's about time. He's a smart man, and he'd worked long and hard to get to where he is now. Letting petulance and impulse rule him is not one of his major character traits.
    Finally, though, they are making some progress in dealing with this bond. *sighs* That's so good to see. I can't wait to find out how this progresses. Thank you for a new chapter. It was well written, and nicely thought out, and I appreciated every word of it.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on March 18, 2014
    about #24..

    After reading #23 [where I have to say BRAVO to Draco], I'm starting to side with Draco, even to an extent
    SEverus, on this. I understand Harry is hurt, BUT it would be different IF Draco & Severus took it upon themselves
    to do such an horrendous act..and were in their right minds.

    They weren't. They were victims of a spell put upon them by a couple of twisted Death Eaters who wanted to harm to ALL
    three of them. It's not Harry's fault, it isn't Severus' and it isn't Draco's.

    SO, to constantly call the two men rapists, when they weren't in their right minds, isn't fair to them at this point. Because
    that is a harsh word. No matter Severus' feelings of Harry, he wouldn't lower himself to that level to do that to Harry and Draco
    would rather beat the snot out of Harry, IF Harry did something to piss him off.

    ..and I was under the impression that the three men were on neutral grounds with each other, while Harry was protecting them.

    With that said, when is Harry going to have that thought slapped into his head, that he needs to back off from those two and see to
    the real heart of the matter of where the blame should REALLY lay?
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on March 16, 2014
    I'm glad to see that they're getting along better and that Snape is working with Harry rather than against him now.
    I think he gave Harry good advice when he told him to tell his friends.
    I'm excited to see what will happen next.
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on March 14, 2014
    An even keel! Sort of.
    I'm glad Harry is dealing with his pain. Malfoy and Snape were rocks in this chapter, I'm glad that they were there for Harry while he was spiraling.
    I can't imagine a situation like the one they're in and what would happen.
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on March 14, 2014
    Dum dum dum...
    Voldemort. Wow. I definitely didn't see that coming. I can't wait to see how the rest of this unfolds and everyone's roles in it.
    I'd also like to see how they clean up the mess of all the people in the manor and covering up that they've kidnapped them.
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on March 14, 2014
    Interesting chapter. I liked that you included the consequences of Harry's actions.
    And who knows? Maybe now the boys will get a small chance to get a bit closer...
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on March 14, 2014
    This chapter was awesome and very aptly named.
    The pendulum spell was pretty cool. Harry did seem to be very dark and enjoying things just a little too much.
    I'm starting to feel bad for Snape. He seems very stuck.
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on March 14, 2014
    I feel bad for all of them since they haven't really worked it out amongst themselves yet.
    Harry's resolve is breath-taking and devastating all at once.
    I'm not sure if I reviewed this chapter already but I don't think I have, it's been a while. I'm pleased that I have all these chapters to look forward to though.
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  • From BAFan on March 12, 2014
    Ch. 23

    Damn. This is one tangled mess. I feel for all of them.
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on March 11, 2014
    Better! So much better now that Harry has the truth to confront and worry over like a dog with a bone. He's had his head up his own arse so far that he can't see or hear anything outside of his own thoughts, so it's good that he has to listen to others and understand their feelings, too. Maybe now something progressive will come of this and they will get their proper revenge.
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  • From Ciara_D on March 11, 2014
    When you come down to it, weren't Draco and Severus raped? They had intimate relations with someone without the ability to give or take consent. Harry made the decision for all of them. I understand how this story is playing out, but the thought keeps coming back and I wonder if that's affecting Severus.

    Looking forward to seeing how they figure this out. Right now its still a mess! Thank you for writing ^_^
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