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Reviews for The Wages of Going On

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From pittwitch on June 21, 2014
    Nice spellwork, :D
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  • From ANON - easyreader on June 21, 2014
    ooooooo I love Sev's truth spell. So Dark and painful hee hee. Don't know how long Harry will allow it though if she's stubborn. Enjoying this story and the slow build towards some kind of triad relationship. Actually loving all your stories right now, insomnia is my friend after all LOL. Can't wait to see what's next.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 19, 2014
    about #37..

    LoL! Wow! Did Severus drop the C word on them? Children! O_O O__O
    Okay I truly enjoyed this one, I think the nitpicking of Harry that
    Draco was doing was equivalent of a boy pulling a girl's pigtails. :-)

    ..and is it just me OR is Draco trying to say to Harry what I think he's
    trying to say, but with few vowels & consonants?
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  • From pittwitch on June 14, 2014
    Looking forward to Snape's modicum of planning. Gotta love a Slytherin State of Mind.
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on June 13, 2014
    Nicely done! You got Severus, Harry and Draco moved into a different plane of understanding in this chapter without a lot of yelling and screaming and disagreeing. They are all acting more maturely, and even striving to get along. I like that they are thinking and planning together, and seemed to have left their egos at the door, as it were. It should only get better as they continue to work together, and I'm looking forwards to that. I particularly liked you delicate explanation of just how Severus and Draco feel about Harry--one that they expressed to him in an admirable way.

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  • From BAFan on June 08, 2014
    Ch. 36

    And the tension begins to build...again. Really hope it's the Healer and not Kingsley, whom I've always liked.
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  • From pittwitch on June 05, 2014
    I can't wait to see how this plays out now!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 31, 2014
    about #35...

    This was the 'Awww...' chapter. :-)

    Severus missed HArry, which is understandable, though I thought for sure
    Harry would have admitted the same thing too. You know for a second...I thought
    a kiss was going to happen, it was an opportune moment in there. Just a simple one...
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on May 31, 2014
    That apology was reluctantly given, but it was given nonetheless. That makes a real change for Severus who probably never would have unbent enough before to even consider such a thing. I really like that all concerned could see that--including Severus, himself. And I liked that they could all kind of understand the reasons for it, too. It's really good to see the three men coming closer together after the bond was broken, and the level of comprehension rising between them. Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on May 30, 2014
    Severus is basically pulling the hair of the little girl he likes even though he doesn't realize that's why he wants the attention. So cute of severus lol.
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  • From pittwitch on May 29, 2014
    Now, this Severus -- I like; Draco even more. :D
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 25, 2014
    about #34..

    Yep, gotta admit, that was harsh. I was with Severus until he started on the buck teeth & freckles. Yikes. O_o
    'Course, he's not going to apologize...directly. More like allude to it, knowing him.

    But, Harry better not try forming an apology in his stead, Severus said the insult, not him. Tho' Severus being an
    older gent should practice decorum at this point in his life, regardless of who wrote the letter. A simple, tasteful
    'f--- off' would have done quite nicely. :-)
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  • From BAFan on May 23, 2014
    Ch. 34

    WTH?? It would serve Snape right if Harry punched his lights out.

    "She simply demanded his recipe for an exquisite potion, and then sat and waited for him to provide it." No, she ASKED if he would be willing to share it. Not the same thing at all.

    "Severus set down to write a letter that would indeed vent his feelings, without hurting Harry or Draco." Is he serious? He thinks Harry won't be upset that he sent such a vicious letter to one of his two best friends? Although, frankly, I was surprised at Harry's reaction. I wonder if the bond is still affecting them somehow?

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  • From BAFan on May 23, 2014
    Ch. 33

    However happy Harry is right now to have regained his freedom, methinks all three of them will have cause to regret losing their mental bond in days to come.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 19, 2014
    About #33..

    Well, as much as it makes my lip stick out, now that the bond is ended. :-(
    I understand the need to be free again..and back in your own skin, so to speak.

    I wish there was another variation of the bond they could have thought of, one that could
    be blocked at will, when three or more people have to be bonded to get 'something' done, but
    have a need for privacy at times.
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