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Reviews for The Guile and Devotion of a Black Heir

By : StarLightMassacre

From ANON - Kat on October 22, 2014
Awesome sauce!!!!! Luc is gonna be pissed!!!!!! So is Narcissa and Xeres. I hope Harry and Rabastan can work thru it.
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From ANON - autumngold on October 22, 2014
Your story is absolutely amazing! I love how you are making Harry grow up to be a strong, independent adult. I just hope, with Lucius finding out Harry's story, that Dumbledore will be brought to account for his abusive actions. Please keep Harry safe from Dumbledore at Hogwarts. I just hope he is smart enough not to go to a meeting alone with that manipulative old man. Fabulous update! Thank you so much for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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From ANON - InuChan on October 22, 2014
Auuugh! So great! Please update soon. Want to say more but would violate the spoiler ban.
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From ANON - djaddict on October 22, 2014
This is such a fantastic story! I can't wait for more!
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From ANON - Dominique 1 on October 22, 2014
I think severus said the best albus raised Harry as a lamb to the slaughter my son loves albus I can't stand him pansy and Daphne having sex with her sister's soon to be husband that's sad I kinda would love to see Astoria kick her sister Ass for it as well as draco and pansy slits and I hope theo has a mistress on the side can you imagine your future spouse have sexual relation with friends the had her first I couldn't imagine pure bloods allowing that as far as ron and Hermione looking forward to. Them losing their power base from being jealous and stupid love the moment that Harry went off on his ex friends you captured pretty much what the book hinted at love the way it came across selfish people exposed but I kinda hope that remus and the twins as well as Luna and Neville stand by Harry it also makes me wonder did molly and bill go to the TWT for harry as family but as away to get notice I mean there a site that say the richest Hogwarts people and harry had like 2million from parents more from Sirius but the malfoys where in the billions and lestrange. Had more than them will I do hope harry has back up but he will not be safe and any house now
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From Lady_Arachne on October 22, 2014
Loved the chapter!
I love how closer Harry is getting to Rabastan, and I'm so glad that Harry wants to marry Rabastan; his reasoning for wanting to do so left me squealing in joy! And I loved the confrontation between Harry and Hermione and Ron, so glad that Harry isn't going to be friends with, I wonder how Dumbledore will react to this. And I am looking forward to seeing all of Dumbledore's 'damage control' plans for Harry fail right in front of his eyes! I can imagine the strong outburst that'll come from Harry when Dumbledore tries to put the blame on Sirius! And I'm glad that you're going with book!Voldemort, I can only imagine an intelligent Voldemort in this story when he's trying to get Harry on his side. :)

I wonder if Rhadamanthus will be a problem in future chapters, I hope that Harry comes up with a brilliant plan to bring that man down for all the insults Rhadamanthus had thrown at him! Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
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From ANON - Outlawgal on October 22, 2014
I am in LOVE with this story. Heck with all of you stories. I always get excited to see an update from you.
I like that Harry and Rabastan are getting along so well. I also like how much stronger Harry has become. I just hope the Dumbledore doesn't do something stupid and ruins it all. All the hard work that everyone has put into making Harry better. I like that you are making Voldemort more like the books then movies. Are you going to have Harry join the dark or stay neutral? Will Voldemort demand Harry's presence so he can kill him and will Rabastan stand up and save Harry from the love that is growing between them.
Oh so many questions and thoughts running through my head. Can't wait for more :)
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From ANON - MillenniumE on October 10, 2014
I'm so stoked for this story! I fallow several of your stories and I'm always excited to see which one I get to read next. :D
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From ANON - Mirtha on October 06, 2014
Dear Star,
First things first, I want to say that I am a huge fan of your many stories and thoroughly enjoyed reading RotD,the Scaled Bits, Dracken Memoirs, Tribulation of the Blue Moon, and Damaged Bodies. I want to apologize for not taking the time to review before but there is something about this story that has compelled me to leave a note. It is your amazing writing style that has me hooked on your stories. The fact that you research your characters and their stories so in depth shows your complete devotion to the story and that is shown throughout the plot. I'll be honest and say I was a bit concerned about the pairing in this story since the only mention of Rabastan Lestrange in the HP books is not a positive one. However, the scene between Harry and Rabastan interacting for the first time in this chapter is beautiful. There are so many emotions captivated and yet you still don't give too much away. We get a small glimpse into what Rabastan thinks but it only makes us want to find out more. You have created a version of Rabastan that I am dying to get to know and understand. I want to thank you for the amount of work that you devote to each and one of your stories. I follow your Facebook page and from that I understand how busy you are and some of the hardships that you have been through this year with your personal life; in spite of those bumps in life, you still manage to produce excellent literary work. Thank you Star :)
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From ANON - Lexi on October 05, 2014
So, I've read some of your other stories like "Tribulations of a Blue Moon" which was fantastic. Love Harry/Fenrir pairing when it's done well, which that one definitely was. I'm reading "Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives, Building Families" with Harry and Clint since I can't avoid reading good Avengers/HP fanfics. I've also read the one with Harry and Nick Fury which I found entertaining. You just have a wonderful way with words and making canon characters still be in character while exploring the "what ifs" that we sometimes don't think about because we think we know this characters so well. I've read plenty of manipulative Dumbledore stories and Harry actually acting intelligent like he always was, but this one is very different and refreshingly original. I love how some stranger tells Harry about the Lordship and how it's Lucius Malfoy who helps Harry. I hadn't expected Lucius to adopt Harry, but I definitely approve because Harry needs to know how to properly behave as a Lord and being away from the abuse and neglect will do him good. I love how Harry wants to help Rabastan, because in a way both of them have similar scars: Harry with the Dursleys' abuse and neglect leaving him feeling unloved, unwanted, and constantly beaten and then Rabastan who suffered from his time in Azkaban. The two of them will definitely be good for each other, especially with how receptive they were during their first meeting. Keep up the amazing work.
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From ANON - ccarson89 on October 04, 2014
Brilliant as always, my dear. I love the characterization of the Lestranges and how Harry gets to see just how close Pureblood families are considered. Realistic and wonderful.

I cannot wait to see how those two little knuckleheads start getting along later in the story, it will be so much fun!
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From cullengal101 on October 02, 2014
hey
loved the chapter please keep updating
I am glad that they are at least receptive to each other already
I must admit curiosity concerning Bellatrix and rodolphus and whether harry will do anything as Bellatrix is disrespecting not only the contract, but her husband and her head of house by not producing children for the lestrange line.
so I was wondering whether harry will null the contract, or give Bellatrix a year to turn her act around and get along with her husband enough to actually produce an heir or there will be consequences. also stop being a harlot and going after voldemort in affections but not showing any to her husband.
cullengal101
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From Librarat on October 02, 2014
Oh my I truly adore your fanfiction. They're always so wonderfully written. I especially love Rise of the Drackens along with Draken memoirs and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter for the latter story. Along with this one as well, it's just so wonderful, I never would have thought someone would pair Harry and Rabastan but they look so cute! Oh I really can't wait! Thank you for taking such time and care to write such wonderful stories!
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From ANON - Nicole Barru on October 02, 2014
Another chapter! And a great one at that, thanks Star.
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From ANON - lola on October 02, 2014

I love your stories :) Starting to read it, I thought - this relationship does not work out. I was wrong, so far it is brilliant. Waiting for more;)
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