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Reviews for The Guile and Devotion of a Black Heir

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Skittles on October 01, 2014
    This is the fourth or fifth story of yours I'm reading and it's shaping up to be another good one. One of the things I've noticed in your stories is that you used a good deal of commas where periods or semi colons would better serve. I mention it only because it tends to give the story a run-on, stream of consciousness feel. Also, you don't need to keep spelling out details such as "He didn
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  • From ANON - Cicci on October 01, 2014
    I am sooo in love with this fic! the way you write harry and rabastan! I so hope to see harry helping rabastan back to health, but I completely trust you, and I look forward to see were you'll take this fanfic!
    hugs!
    // Excited Fan!
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  • From ANON - Dominique 1 on October 01, 2014
    Awesome amazing chapter but I can't see Harry being so prejudice that is the one thing that through me mushroom and him being happy with bella and PeterI would be the one's he wanted killed off as well as the father in law
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  • From ANON - rcleberg on October 01, 2014
    I've read your Dracken stories already and you've snared me again. And I don't even really like the Lestranges in a romantic light, so that's saying something. Is there any way you can send update alerts to us? I'd loved to know when this gets updated again so I'm not going crazy.
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  • From Lady_Arachne on October 01, 2014
    Loved the chapter!
    I love how things went, and the thing I love most about your stories is that each chapter is deliciously long. When Lucius had told Harry that he would have to be betrothed to keep him safe, I thought you were going to make Harry choose who he wanted to be betrothed to, and I was crossing my fingers that he would choose Luna because they were friends and she wouldn't hold it against Harry when he falls in love with Rabastan; imagine Luna and her quirky personality around the Malfoys, I couldn't stop grinning! But I love how you took the betrothal and I love how you made Rabastan!

    The interactions Rabastan and Harry had were amazing, and I love the little moment they had at the end. I'm really looking forward to more moments between them and I'm absolutely looking forward to when Harry goes back to Hogwarts; from the letters he's been getting from Hermione and Ron it ought to be an interesting school year! I hope Harry uses his silver tongue to put those who are trying to control him in their places! Really looking forward to the next chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - Elsie on October 01, 2014
    I have enjoyed reading this fic so far. I love the writing style. It is clear, grammatically correct, and vivid with emotion. I appreciate the depiction of Harry and the Malfoys'. The familial interactions are sweet but not over the top. The interaction with Rabastian was heartwarming and I look forward to reading more about them. I really appreciate how cannon is represented in that you don't stray too far off.
    I do however have a bone to pick. Dumbledore was a manipulative bastard. In the cannon, he allows and even encourages Harry to get into situations where he could die. That being said, I am a little hesitant to agree with your representation of Dumbledore. I feel, in this case, he has painted him as bumbling, scheming, and power-hungry. I have no problem with the latter two, but I take issue with former. Dumbledore, in my mind at least, is intelligent. I am a little concerned he might be set up as a one-dimensional stooge.
    As for future posts, I have a few hopes and queries. I am curious about how you will deal with the Voldemort issue. I wonder if one of the Weasley family turn out to be genuine friends to Harry. For my vote, I hope the twins and Ginny are on Harry's side and that Hermione will do enough research to realize that Harry was being neglected and taken advantage of.
    My next step is to read more from StarLight_Massacre.
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  • From ANON - lovelycrazy on September 30, 2014
    This is a compelling read. I look forward to more of this
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  • From ANON - djaddict on September 30, 2014
    *Pets Rabastan*

    I hate the whole "proper pureblood behavior" thing (although I get it as part of the story) but it's funny when Narcissa corrects Harry, even while comforting him.

    Pretty please, let Harry kill Bellatrix!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 30, 2014
    Harry is certainly different but has hints of his "usual" personality poking through. I was looking for Harry/Draco but Rabastan sounds like he could be a fun match as he gets healthier. Love to read what Ginny, Ron, Hermione, the parent Weasleys etc think. Also Dumbledore and Severus (my absolute favorite mate for Harry).
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 30, 2014
    Awesome!!! So many stories have the ones that were in prison for a long time except Bellatrix as sane as when they went in. I like that they are a little less sane. Rab and Harry are cute!!!!! More soon please!!! 😻😻😻😻
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  • From ANON - autumngold on September 30, 2014
    Incredible new chapter! I am so glad that Harry is finally learning, and becoming better, with his interactions with the Malfoy family. It's funny how they don't even realize how they rescued him from the Dursleys. Thank you also for having Harry be receptive to the younger LeStrange brother. It would be so nice if he was able to help him get over his time in Azkaban. I just wonder how Voldemort will feel about the report he receives from the LeStranges? I hope he realizes that Harry no longer wants to be his enemy! I also hope that Harry won't have to go back to Griffindor. His friends will never accept the new Harry, and still expect him to be Dumbledore's man. Thank you for your wonderful update! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - easyreader on September 30, 2014
    okay, I was very skeptical of this pairing. You proved me wrong. Loved the chapter and the honest reactions from Harry and the brothers. Their father truly did come off creepy and if I was Harry I wouldn't have been able to control the reaction to a slimy hand kiss. Looking forward to the continuation of this one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2014
    I quite enjoyed this chapter, although I do wonder what the betrothal to Rabastan will do to his relationship with Neville. I don't see him taking that well.
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  • From ANON - Samantha on September 29, 2014
    Love this story like your other harry potter stories! I'm a big fan!! I hope you're also still writing your other shoot off from Rise of the Drakens (seriously one of the best fanfictions ever!) Hope you're having a good vacation!
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  • From Sparrowhawk on September 25, 2014
    Yay! I'm so happy to see another story from you. You're one of my absolute favorite authors here, especially when it comes to Harry Potter fanfiction. Looking forward to reading more and seeing how things develop and what explanation there is for Lucius' reaction to Draco's behavior and the discrepancy Harry's seeing between this Lucius Malfoy and the one he saw in the Department of Mysteries. You're stories always have these little twists and turns in the plot line that I can't predict, and I love it when I can't predict the plot of the story I'm reading. Thanks for putting so much time and effort into your writing. I am totally addicted ^_^
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