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By : knj4k4
  • From Kiyo_Cub on October 09, 2009
    Oh please can't Draco and London be together (as a couple) AND be Harry's additional pets?? Pretty please?? I know it would be a lot of hard work....
    But if I had to choose I think I would go for Draco, I think the dynamics between him and Nathaniel would be just as good as those between him and Harry so it would be a win-win situation...
    Love the story!!!
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  • From Harpygirl78 on October 08, 2009
    Both!!!Write more soon....
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  • From Ewe on October 03, 2009
    Hello to you,

    i love this story. i have been following it for a while. it is so cool to see this kind of side to harry.
    for your question: who should be harry's next pet: london or draco? If i could choose i would go for both. but since you put it as a either or...my choice is london. you already set this one up in your story and plus draco and harry have a history that would be fun to play with a bit.
    as for draco you can put him with severus or with asher...that is i don't remember if asher is with anyone. who knows even a threesome would be interesting. but any way that is my vote.

    Ewe
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  • From torikillyou on October 01, 2009
    London and Draco... I think that they would all 4 do well together. Plus its so much more fun! ;)
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  • From torikillyou on October 01, 2009
    I recently stumbled on this story and like a good book couldn't put it down. I love the way Harry is portrayed in this story and the sex scene and punishments are simply put arousing. I found myself feeling dispare at the end of chapter 24 and can't wait for you update. It was awseome! :P

    XD


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  • From Sakya on September 30, 2009
    London.

    Draco is too broken already and most likely won't enjoy Harry's attention. Let him be healed and see where he goes from there.
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  • From crazyforkakashi on September 30, 2009
    Thanks you for updating.Please let it be Draco.Thank you I will be looking for more.
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  • From kcgx23 on September 29, 2009
    very good, i like it.
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  • From LadySilver on September 28, 2009
    London!! He would just look so cute with Harry and Nathaniel!
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  • From dracoharry4life on September 28, 2009
    Draco! Please?
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  • From azinine on September 28, 2009
    Ugh... It's better to just let Nathan be the only pet! Draco's just pitiful and I hate him so there! :P Hehehe...Yeah, I'm one of those Draco haters so do excuse me. Though if you really want to create a harem for Harry can you just think of some other people for it? I mean Draco, just yuck... London seems to be as pitiful as Draco is though if their the only choice I'm all up for London. Draco should just have died! Why can't it be LUCIUS! *sobs* *burns Draco on the stake* DIE! DIE YOU SUNOFABIYATCH! *dances around burning stake*
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  • From Reddesquelle on August 14, 2009
    I squee. that is about all that I can say. I adore your premise for the plot, understand that some of the characters are ooc, love the way that they are, and am waiting with inestimable glee for more. Here's to hoping that you update soon.
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  • From TokiMirage on July 06, 2009
    Gawd this story is GOOD! ^^ I know this is an unsatisfactory review for your sheer Brilliance, but it's 4 am and I'm tired. *yawns*
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  • From danawarner on June 17, 2009
    You "command" me to review? I don't see any of your marks on ME!!
    just kidding ;)
    I liked the ritual. Can't wait for the Vamp Council to hit St.Louis.
    Curious to see how it goes.
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  • From sanda on May 30, 2009
    good chapter
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