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  • From ajgordon on May 26, 2009
    I don't normally read x-overs but all the warnings on this one made me reconsider just this once ;) I have no idea who Anita Blake is but I must say that fhis story is hot! Thank you for sharing. I'm up to Ch 12 but must go to sleep cause it's 2am. Can't wait to read more tommorrow.

    With love, MeToo
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  • From danawarner on May 25, 2009
    Could Harry bomb the British ministry?
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  • From CariMarie on May 25, 2009
    I'm really enjoying your story. I think it is a wonderful betrayal of a true Dom/Sub relationship. So many authors either have no idea or don't care that this relationship extends far beyond the bedroom. I have to confess that I have never read the Anita Blake series. I was impressed with how easy this story was to follow, anyways. A definite kudos to you!

    Update Soonish,
    Cari Marie
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  • From yamiyugi23 on May 18, 2009
    yay, Harry hasn't forgoten about cute little Natey at all!
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  • From sanda on May 14, 2009
    good story
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  • From chriswiz on April 25, 2009
    The smut was not great but not bad. The whole interlude actually moved the story along as far as adding Asher and indicating Severus' and Richard's lrvrl of trust with Harry. As you have pointed out, trust is different from friendship so it needed to be defined for these people. Harry showing possessiveness for Asher is a progression and not unnecessary. Thank you for writing this story, there are not enough out there.
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on April 22, 2009
    i love the chapter it shows the emotion that Harry is starting to feel for the once broken Asher
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  • From rayvenfire2007 on April 09, 2009
    I like the interlude, I think you should keep it. It's a good way to add Asher to the mix; and Sev needed to get laid!>P
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  • From storylistener on April 02, 2009
    I think the Interlude shows Harry taking care of Asher, with Nathanial helping. It proves that he cares for the vampire. GOOD JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!!!
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  • From on March 30, 2009
    i love it
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  • From fairytopian on March 30, 2009
    Some questions to consider.(This isn't a flame, just bringing you a diferent perspective.)

    I'm not really sure where you got the idea that god had anything to do with having magic, especially considering the history religion has with "witchcraft" in the past (aka witch hunts/burnings and the like)it would seem highly unlikely god would give people magic only to have writing in the bible saying that users of magic arent soposed to live or something along those lines.
    Also, as far as the bringing muggleborns into the wizarding world at birth idea, what about the muggle families that can't accept that their children have magic? The fact that underage wizards cant do any magic to protect themselves while at home creates the perfect situation for parents to harass or abuse their children because they can't defend themselves. Like you said, Harry can be used as the perfect case and point of this very thing happening. Im sure he is not the only one. Even if the parents of muggleborns accepted it, it would put incredible pressure and strain not only on their relationship, but the ability to keep to such a secret from their friends and family.

    ;:fairytopian:;
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  • From LadySilver on March 29, 2009
    I LOVE IT!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP IT!!!!
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  • From on March 27, 2009
    i love it
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  • From danawarner on March 25, 2009
    That was an intense card game at the end.
    BTW (petra-naturals) is supposed to be preternaturals. There's a site for all things Anita Blake (http://www.timber-wolf.net/blake/index.html)
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  • From Jan on March 25, 2009
    Bloody hell!!!! What hell was that game truly about?!

    Please, please update chapter 15 ASAP ^_^

    Jan
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