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Reviews for Don't Let The Whirlwind Pass By

By : starstruck86
  • From ANON - Sheree on October 14, 2009
    Is Draco going to go home and think about the voice he heard? Malfoy's shock was great.

    The drinking game was a hoot, but I really wanted Sev to admit Ron was his unrequited love...but I suppose he doesn't know that yet. Hmm?

    I hope I have fingernails to last thru 2 more chapters...will they or won't they?
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  • From pittwitch on October 14, 2009
    Whoooooooaaaaa! Great work!
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on October 12, 2009
    Damn, that Ron is extra stubborn!!! He's in love with Severus, he just won't admit it!!! And Severus is such a great big bundle of sweetness beneath the hard candy shell exterior!!! Love that man!!!

    Wasn't expecting Harry as a ghost but...it works. Wonder if we get to see a little more of how Ron's family is doing soon?
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  • From LadyZombie on October 12, 2009
    Got through Chapters 2-4. Ron's certainly a mess, isn't he? Still, it's to be expected considering what he's been through. Great job with describing the awkward icky situation of Severus bumping into Weasley's everywhere knowing they were missing Ron.

    What a situation to be in, eh? On the one hand, wanting to comfort them by telling them their son and brother was alive and close by, but at the same time not being able to lest Ron flees and hides himself even better.



    Now, let's just see if Ron will pull his head out of his arse and let Severus help him.


    CAPTCHAS are a real pain. I swear all I get are smudges.
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  • From talley on October 12, 2009
    Hard chapter but so good. I love a story that's psychological as well. Yes! Glad you add a few details and uhm images to that cheesecake foray. Weird what Ron is doing. I'm a bit perplexed. My heart stopped when Ron muttered out to Harry, yet you had Snape feeling a presence. So I feel much better about that. Hate whoever the client was who hurt Ron. Snape didn't recognize the name alas he could be using an alias, but still I was a bit worried as to who that client MIGHT have been. I like how you weave in the pets of the owners into your story. Looking forward to more on this. btw I absolutely adore a snarky Draco. Go team Fire and Ice. But do continue with the this lovely pairing.
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  • From abbicee on October 11, 2009
    It's nice to think that Harry is looking out for Ron. If only Harry could convince Ron that this self destructive lifestyle is not what he would want for him. Where's that resurrection stone when it's needed? At least Ron and Severus came to some kind of truce, however fragile it might be. I was worried that Ron would leave immediately and Severus wouldn't be able to find him. Still, nothing's settled and there's still time for things to get worse. (nibbles at a fingernail)
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  • From LadyZombie on October 11, 2009
    Chapter 1.

    Well, it's official. Thanks to you, I'm now totally a Snape/Ron junky. I was setting about reading your first story when this one caught my attention. Out of all the pairings, Snape/Ron is highly unusual but you work wonders with them.

    Poor Ron working as a prostitute and the reasons why. Although Snape would make a good sugar daddy for him.


    Bf walks into the room. "Whatcha reading?"

    Me: *indecipherable mumbling*

    Bf: What?

    Me: Something. Uh...go someplace else for a few minutes.

    Bf: *shrugs and goes someplace else*



    Now, onto chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on October 11, 2009
    Such woe! Physically Ron's been saved, but its wrenching to know that he's mentally still in the same place.

    Severus has a job ahead of him - that's for sure, but maybe Harry can help.

    Waiting for the next chapter w/ a bit of fear. ;)
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  • From ANON - kai on October 11, 2009
    OMG! that rescue attempt! awesome! i actually thought he was going to bust him out not have it go the way it did, with the mistress actually firing him and all that.

    also that bit about harry maybe haunting ron, that was a great part. ron and severus convo near the end, was so sad and yet so hopeful. i loved it.

    update soon!! ^_^
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  • From abbicee on October 09, 2009
    Well I'm quite behind on things, we're moving into the twentyfirst century at work and now we have to re-tag every blessed item. On the other hand, at least we're no longer adding up the days totals with just pen, ink and calculater anymore. So, I have to admit I never thought your next story would feature Ron as a prostitute, but I'm intrigued with finding out how he got there and why. What happpened to make Ron take take such a self destructive step? Was it just losing his best friends or something else? I can see Severus and Ron growing closer and the potential for disaster is so great I keep waiting for a bomb to go off. It's only three chapters but the suspense has me barely blinking as I read. I can't wait to see what happens on Christmas.
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  • From talley on October 08, 2009
    That was different but I liked it. You sure got me wondering who that last client was. I feel so sad for Ron and it hurts so much to see him so set on self destruction. Sides with Severus. Liked how you changed the patronus and again you got me wondering about what memory Ron was worrying to use. It was nice to see regular life outside of the whorehouse, except Ron's seemed dreary indeed. Again I'm a big Ron/Draco fan but understands when people hate him. Can't wait for more. And what the heck ending there with the Cheesecake sex?!
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  • From ANON - daisyplayer on October 08, 2009
    the story is so beautiful.

    eagerly awaiting the next chapter so that i see how the whole covering each other in cheesecake thing works out for sev & ron
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  • From SeraphimeRising on October 08, 2009
    So good. I'm so glad you are working on another Ron/Snape piece. I swear you have me addicted.
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on October 08, 2009
    OMG!!!! I can't believe I missed chapter 2!!!! well that is like the complete suckage!!!! :(

    But on the other hand...I got to read two fabulous chapters one right after the other but still...

    God I don't know who is more stubborn, Ron or Severus, I guess both.

    I knew Ron hadn't lost all capability to feel something, he still cares about people and Severus, well Severus cares too.

    Oh god bless America, I want cheesecake!!!!

    As always wonderful job, amazing sex, and even more wonderful characters full of humor, quirks,non perfections and genuine emotions. Le sigh!!!
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  • From ANON - kai on October 08, 2009
    i gotta say i like the contrast of severus inside and outside the brothel, it makes an interesting twist in the plot line. but i can understand why he's different in either situation. i really enjoyed it, and to throw in draco in there, awesome! loved it!!

    i don't really care how you end it but i don't want it ending like Invitation did. while i liked that story VERY MUCH i'm still saddened by how that one ended. ;_;

    update soon!!
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