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Reviews for Don't Let The Whirlwind Pass By

By : starstruck86
  • From ANON - Sheree on October 08, 2009
    Cheesecake galore - just get them a vat (what could you do with that scene?).

    I lament over Ron's heart felt hopelessness. He just doesn't seem to see anything beyond his own bleakness.
    I like Severus wanting to do the right thing and having it conflict with the uncaring man he used to be.

    It's coming right along and I can't wait to read more.

    Oh and Peter Petigrew and seeing Ron's bits - had me rolling.

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  • From talley on October 07, 2009
    Interesting chapter. I liked yet was a bit scared finding more about the brothel. Do not like the head lady. *hiss* A different set of emotions like you said, light dark back to light and dark again. I love Ron helping everyone and I have a feeling he's helping not just because of how he feels about suffering but because he's a good guy deep down. Any way, I enjoyed that and the look into a whole different side of Ron and getting more from Severus.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on October 06, 2009
    Both of them are in dire need of a shrink, I
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  • From ANON - kai on October 06, 2009
    YAY!! you continued!! is very happy!! I have to say i want a happy ending, his family doesn't have to find out he's alive or anything like that, i just want a happy ending. but i'm not sure that could be done with how broken ron is, hmmmm...

    you should know that no one-shot will never be a one shot. we just like your work to much to settle for less. we're just greedy bastards and we want more!!!

    so only about 5 chapters, i can live with that especially since your chapters are always so long and full of awesomness. XDD
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  • From badkittyuno on October 06, 2009
    Wonderful!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on October 06, 2009
    Beautiful - their pain and anxieties are coming out all over each other and they have no choice but to deal with it. They're both wrought with internal conflict while they go about helping others and each other while depriving themselves of comfort.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!!!


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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on October 04, 2009
    OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!

    Or as Ron would say, EEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This was simply amazing!!!

    I was all choked up as I read this and I just felt so much for both of them and it just blew me away and well, eeeeeee!!!!!!!

    Please tell me you won't leave it a one shot, please, please, please!!!!!

    Did I mention, EEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From talley on October 03, 2009
    Damn it my original thoughts got lost when I hit enter before finishing the password. So at this point I lost my thoughts. But this much I do remember. I do like angsty Ron and really enjoy a good rent!boy story. Poor Ron very lost. You really know how to make the atmoshpere relate to the story. I could feel the gritty underworld of the whorehouse as I read. I liked the legal aspects that were brought up especially the calling card. I sure hopw this one shot doesn't stay so. Not just because I adore your writing and this pairing, but Ron needs to be rescued and Severus needs some happiness and well worth respect. Well both of them do. Again you made a story fit your universe yet keep them canon. Oh I'd like to learn more about that place and what Ron has gone through. It would be interesting to know who these experienced "select" men were.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on October 03, 2009
    I usually avoid whore!fics and drug!fics (I can stomach holiday!fics if well-written, but these two are *huge* squicks of mine). I must be the only woman in existence who *doesn
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  • From ANON - kai on October 03, 2009
    you should know that anything you do with snape & ron should never be a one-shot! i demand more!!!
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  • From ANON - Sheree on October 03, 2009
    That was the longest foreplay I think I have ever read - The way the danced around each other was so interesting. And then to have Ron know exactly what Snape wanted without Snape himself knowing was captivating.

    It's such a shame this is a one shot - I would like to see Snape's return (and Ron's salvation) - the sign of an excellent story.

    Cudos!
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