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Reviews for Hidden Family

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  • From ANON - Laesk on August 22, 2014
    a good story, I am glad that I found this and completed my reading of it even if it took some time it is well worth it. thank you for sharing this with us all and allowing us the chance to read your story
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  • From Arithmancer on May 11, 2014
    Brilliant, your portrayal of Biggles and co took me back to reading the books as a child.
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  • From Jan on May 14, 2013
    You may be right, I did like this ending, quick and to the point ^_~
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  • From ANON - TirlaTirla on February 12, 2013
    Congratulations on a well written story. This was better than JK's version.
    Thank you so much for writing such a riveting, enthraulling and thoughtful story and sharing it with us.
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  • From ANON - beate on November 15, 2012
    Hi, I enjoyed your story very much. You adressed many details and logical "holes" in the original books that make an adult shake his head in dismay. I really liked your version of Dumbledore as lieing manipulator. Seeing Snape fired for his incompetent teaching was great. Harry getting to keep Sirius as godfather as well as a loving grandfather was even better. And Draco as best friend instead of Ron was a really nice twist, as well as all the changes to wizarding society that followed.

    So, thanks for a great story, I had much fun reading.
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  • From ANON - abc on September 19, 2012
    A perfect story. Thank you
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  • From ANON - Nequicia on September 18, 2012
    Thank you for the inspiring story. Your storyline was much better than some I have read in last years and this to be crossover... congratulations. You did very very well and I am happy I had the honour to read it. Good luck with your future stories. I will look out for them ^-^
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  • From AbbyRose on September 18, 2012
    So over all, i think it was really great. I love the new take; However, i do kinda feel as if part of the story is missing. Im sure others as well as myself would love a sequel in which Harry gets a significant other... But it was a great story, and i am totally hoping for a sequel
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  • From ANON - unneeded on September 17, 2012
    meh, dumbles still got off lightly ya know. anyway, thanks for an interesting and unusual cross over. wow, har ousted Voldie quite easily didn't he. no epic final battles required. Still with the British WW being a much more equal place, i'm sure that the relations with foreign ministries would go quite well. may the WW always stay on so even a keel and i hope the ministry did, indeed, give serious compo to Sirius.









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  • From Sampdoria on September 17, 2012
    Such a smashingly entertaining story this has been to follow,I loved it!!! Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
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  • From ChaosLady on September 17, 2012
    Thank you for sharing that lovely story with us!
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  • From ANON - Bill on September 17, 2012
    I am anew reader on Adult Fan fiction,I congratulate you on the story "Hidden Family" With its connections to Biggles and co. I have read most of Biggles books. Although it was about 50 to 55 years ago I still have fond memories of his adventures and to my aunt and uncle who supplied themas they where birthday and Christmas gifts.
    Please continue in this vain, I look forward to reading the conclusion to the above mentioned story
    Your with my sincere regards Bill
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  • From TalisRuadair on September 17, 2012
    I have to admit that I found this story recently and went on a marathon read. I finished reading it this morning and then came on tonight to see that you've updated. I do really like what your doing here though I have to admit that I've never heard of the Biggles series, but that could be attributed to the fact that I'm American. I will have to look into it in the future though as I like your portrayal of those characters. I can't help but wonder if Sirius will be staying with Harry's Grandfather to recover after everything is said and done and he is cleared as innocent. Harry will not likely want to live with Sirius, but I'm sure he would enjoy getting to know the man. Also, I can't help but think that Sirius might just need a proper father figure to overcome both his own childhood and the horrors of Azkaban. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ChaosLady on September 17, 2012
    After days of this website being down, I'm so glad that the first story I got to read was this one! Eight, long, juicy chapters, most excellent.
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  • From ANON - unneeded on September 16, 2012
    sorry for the delay but my compy wouldn't let me review after the site came back sooo here's two days worth.

    I wondered how you were going to work that. out of curiosity, what punishment did har get? I know it would have been a loss of privileges one.
    I'm also glad those kids got punished... i mean that was just stupid. If dumbles wanted to influence har 'towards the light', he sure chose badly.
    I'm glad luc managed to block the idea of direct contact with Dementors... I've always felt having them near the kids was stupid AND dangerous. I'm amazed he let Mooney back though the rest of the staff changes have the thumbs up.
    Good idea with the classes too. if they all know where each other is coming from there will be far less opportunity for misunderstands. You'll always have die hards but at least they can't claim ignorance.
    Oh, My, the introduction of siri to har's life will be like a big stone in a small puddle. Logical, the man is not. He can't argue with the care har is getting at home though. I imagine he'll find har a bit of a disappointment but I'm sure he'll cope.

    shock horror, luc malfoy is being... le gasp, REASONABLE. :p no wonder siri fainted. I do hope they have a plan to compensate siri cause hells bells do they owe him. Just think, if ron had gone to Hagrid instead, it would never have happened. Still, Jr is headed back to Azkaban were he belongs and now so is senior. maybe they can give them adjoined cells. >>

    I like the idea of making good use of the press since the mindless sheep of the wizarding world seem to believe whatever they read in the paper.

    well, fears are irrational and har did come from an environment that would have fueled that fear at least a little, even after he learned better.
    As for dumbles... wow, losing that pristine rep is really damaging for him neh. Yay, fudge did something useful! :P Nice to see that even the utterly incompetent can get it right once or twice.
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