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Reviews for Carefully Tangled Webs of Darkness

By : Ladygreychaton
  • From OfStoriesTold on January 02, 2016
    This is quite a well written story. i love seeing the differences in harry here and seeing the dursely's change in their treatment of him. I think out of the lot he'll probably have a good relationship with Dudley in the future, petunia a close second.

    even if it was forced, i'm glad they've changed how they treated him, as even with it not being as terrible as before it was still wrong, though it did give him a power beyond anyone's wildest dreams.

    the colours harry sees are odd, i'm going to take a guess and gander that it has something to do with the person's magical strength? some of the children show up brighter then their parents, perhaps this means their magic still hasn't picked a power level yet and that's why? it'll be interesting to see what the colours all mean later

    i'm happy with the friendships harry is building here, and can't wait to see how they stand the test of time and other's opinions, more so with dumbledore, as already he must be upset with the abrupt change in plans

    brilliant story, thank you so much for writing this tale!

    p.s. i'm new to adultfanfiction, is there any way to save the story so that i'm alerted for each update, or can i only put in in rec reading? thank you and hope your day is well :)
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  • From ANON - David on December 20, 2015
    Please Please Please don't abandon us love the story but tend to be a lurker and rarely comment or review but love this story so much but beginning to get worried
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  • From Tesgura on November 19, 2015
    I am so super glad Harry gets to room with Draco and Blaise and that they took everything in stride! I kinda figured Blaise would, since it seemed he already believed Harry was some form of vampire, but I'm really glad about Draco, especially as young as he acts on occasion. I'm a bit surprised Snape didn't call Harry out, though I can't wait to see how he behaves in classes, if he's nice or just ignores Harry altogether. Once again, a marvelous chapter!
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  • From CDGaymer on November 16, 2015
    Good Chapter, so liked how Blaise helped Harry to get over his fear of them finding out of his spider friends. Kinda cool that Hermione went to Ravenclaw and Harry went to Slytherin.
    im wonder ho w the first day of classes will go, and if Sev will pick on Harry. Plus im wondering if Blaise and Dray have any secrets of their own to share with Harry.
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on November 10, 2015
    Spider kid, spider kid, friendly neighbourhood spider kid,
    spins a web any size, catches minds just like flies
    watch out! here comes the spider kiiiiiid!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2015
    In the top 5 of the stories that i have ever read.
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  • From ANON - starr on November 09, 2015
    good god you stopped there !!!!!!!!! now the wait :(:(:(:( Thanks !!!!
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  • From CDGaymer on November 09, 2015
    good story so far, so cant wait to find out where Harry goes and the rest of the trio, plus Sue Li.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on November 08, 2015
    I am so enjoying this story. It's just so unique.
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  • From Tesgura on November 08, 2015
    Ooh I hadn't even thought of Harry getting scared by the hat. Everyone else just glosses over it by going on that he can't tell their secrets but the students hardly know that before they put it on, do they? I look forward to seeing where Harry goes, though I can't really see him anywhere but Ravenslaw or Slytherin.
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  • From ANON - rebekahalana on November 05, 2015
    Sorry to hear about the death in your family & your illness. I hope that things will look up for you in the future.
    Loving this story!It's a vary different take on Harry Potter. It's not often that I come across a truly unique storyline , but talking to spiders & being able to integrate their corpses into his body is definitely original.
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  • From Calixandria_420 on November 04, 2015
    I really love this story! It has plenty of details and the plot is awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - starr on November 03, 2015
    well the fun begins !!!! things at school are never going to be the same again !!!!!!!
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  • From Tesgura on November 02, 2015
    Oh dear god, is Draco going to behave like the moon shines out Harry's arse like he did in cannon over his father? If so this will be beyond hysterical. And I can't believe Blaise thinks Harry is a vampire! And Harry is doing nothing to dissuade him either!
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  • From CDGaymer on November 02, 2015
    Hope u feel better soon

    Good chapter, im curios how blaise knows a little bit about harry's friends, but not what they are. Kinda nice to see those 3 make a nice trio (aka silver trio, instead of the golden trio)
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