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Reviews for Carefully Tangled Webs of Darkness

By : Ladygreychaton
  • From lolol on September 24, 2015
    I'm so happy to see you back, love the new chapter and am interested how Renerets opinions of Vernon will shape Harry, you foreshadowed already very well that Harry will get more independent for Ren and I like it. As for relocating the story, I think before you do ask a mod to be on the safe side but I understand AU/AR means a story where you don't just change some aspects and follow the canonline but use something like a different school than Hogwarts or a world without magic or something alike so your story should be totally acceptable in the normal section and I agree your story has to get more recognition
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  • From BBWulf on September 24, 2015
    I'm not a fan of 'slash' pairings, but I'll be damned if this isn't a good read. I do hope, however, that you won't be too offended if I skip over any 'lemons' that may pop up in the future.
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  • From Marcus-Flints_Girl on July 09, 2015
    Hey I love this so far but question?
    I was wondering what would happen if Mr. Malfoy was the person that was coming over.
    Its just an Idea. Cause can u imagine what would happen because he is a Wizard and the fact Harry is Using so much magic he could since it.
    And can then tell that his Uncle is using the boy.
    Oh and very well done I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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  • From ANON - Sweet Wisteria on May 26, 2015
    Also, I have a suggestion.

    Your hits and and review count are a lot lower than they should be for a story that's written this well and has such an interesting plotline. I know that this is technically AU/AR, but I have seen fics that are much more AU in the normal HP section. You may want to consider relocating this.
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  • From ANON - Sweet Wisteria on May 26, 2015
    I think this is one of the most fascinating pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. I hope you'll continue. I love your Harry and his spiders and animals. Your Voldemort (or at least the piece of him that's in Harry) is pretty interesting too- he seems almost afraid of Harry, despite the fact that he's teaching him more about magic. I think V's curiosity about Harry's powers will come back to bite him, one day.
    It's still early, but do you know who Harry will eventually end up with? When I first started this story I was thinking you were pursuing some sort of Slytherin Harry who might have ended up with Draco or something, but the more I read the more I feel like your Harry- when he's older- would need someone closer to his power level, like Voldemort. Although, I still hope Harry ends up in Slytherin (I'm a slytherin too!)but I guess Ravenclaw would make sense- Hecate is a raven, after all.

    Anyway, I don't normally leave reviews, but I wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying your story! Thanks!
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  • From SlythindorMalfoy on May 08, 2015
    Love this story! It's extremely interesting and a very unique plot. Waiting to see what happens next. :D
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  • From CDGaymer on May 08, 2015
    Good story so far, cant wait to see what Harry does to the client or Vernon.
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  • From wicked on April 25, 2015
    It I think it different

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  • From lolol on April 25, 2015
    Even if you see him lazy it doesn't really show and in canon all the wizardborn were really lazy so I think Laziness and ambition are not antonyms, I would moreover say Harry is very cunning and when someone is cunning and ambitious enough he very well may reach his dreams without doing much, let others work for you kind of thing so I can see Harry in Slytherin, but yeah Ravenclaw would be okay too, but you described how Harry wants to leave the role Vernon gave him with the Dursleys, the canon sentence "you could be great" comes to mind^^
    Loved the new chapter thanks for the Harry POV really interesting, I love his interactions with the animals even though I'm arachnophobic.
    I liked the short sentence which alludes to a distinction between Harry as his magic made him and Harry the still 6 year old child with childish hopes/dreams/wishes but I think with animals who will be smarter in the future who support him and more years with being the odd child out Harry will lose his insecurities and be what he wants to be, so I'm eager to see if you characterize him the same in the future
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  • From CDGaymer on April 24, 2015
    Relly good story so far, i can already see him going into slytherin. I hope it continues.
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  • From lolol on April 24, 2015
    I'm quite flabbergasted how fast you update and thanks for your response, I think it's totally okay that you don't give away part of the plot and I love the foreshadowing in the third chapter, and I like your idea how magic works with its sentience but do you think magic is a interconnected thing and every wizard has a connection to it, or has every wizard his type of magic like a core or something similar and every "core" is sentient?
    If you think long enough about it the first type would open up a whole lot of possibilities and explain fanfics with things like soulmates.
    I hope now that Harry seems to have his own plans you give us more insights in his character which is developing at the moment, at the moment most of the things you've written was more of Vernon's POV and that's perfect for the introduction you gave but I would love some more Harry POV
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  • From lolol on April 24, 2015
    I like this story so far, I'm quite eager to see what is with Harry there seem to be a bleeding of Tom's memories if I got it right and he seemed robotic like in the first chapter like Vernon programmed him and I want to see what consequenzes his comment about the shadow will have, at the moment it seems Harry is quite submissive but you forshadowed that this will change and I'm eager to see how. At last I want to thank you for your view of magic, I love authors who write magic as something limitless which only got its limits because the wizards and witches think it has limits and I love a Harry who practises early on and because of that learns magic which should be "impossible".
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