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Reviews for Carefully Tangled Webs of Darkness

By : Ladygreychaton
  • From CDGaymer on October 14, 2015
    good chapter, wondering how harry will foil dumbledore plans. How will he reply to the Malfoys. I hope Harry befriends the spiders of the forest. I am curios who he will befriends on the express and at Hogwarts. so hope he dont need molly to help him find the entrance to the platform (just strikes me odd that a pureblood would be breaking the statue of secrecy). plus i like his wand core. I bet those robes and cloaks costed a nice fortune.
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on October 13, 2015
    I am so interested to see Harry's reaction to Ron (and the other Weasleys) and Hermione :-)
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  • From ANON - Tami on October 13, 2015
    great chapter. I can't wait for him to finally get to Hogwarts. I think that the wizarding world is in for a surprise when they meet their savior. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - anonymous reader on October 11, 2015
    I can't wait for Harry to meet Aragog since he seems to easily gather spiders to himself. If Harry becomes the Dark Lord's Black Widow/lover and they are supposed to be so similar and so different then they could have allegiance from two equally, yet opposite terrifying creatures, the Dark Lord gets the Basilisk and Harry gets the spiders. I can just imagine the spiders secretly constructing a web in the Forbidden Forest to surround the school so no one could escape when the dark lord takes over, no where would be safe. Anyway I enjoy this unique story and look forward to finding out what house Harry will be sorted into. I would guess you've changed the course enough that he wont go into Gryffindor, but Slytherin seems to obvious. I might say Ravenclaw, but really I put my bet on Hufflepuff. Everyone underestimates the puffs so no one would see his underlying darkness and he is loyal to his spiders and then everyone could be confused about why Draco would be careful around him, 'since he'd only be a puff', but he could explain that away by Harry having his titles. This is just my wishful thinking, but so far I enjoy this story and plan to enjoy it more no matter what happens next. Thanks.
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  • From CDGaymer on October 11, 2015
    it sounds like he will be in Ravenclaw or Slytherin. Interesting way on how the meeting between dray and harry went. very good chapter
    Ravenclaw cause of how much he likes to read and learn
    Slytherin cause of his dark friends
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on October 11, 2015
    now what harry should have done after the first fail was not to tell her how great gunnings was but how bad the other options were thereby making gunnings the lesser of the evils. it's all in the wording, if you tell someone to jump off a cliff to their death they will fight you but if you convince them they are day dreaming about diving into a nice clear pool of water they will in fact jump happily to their death.
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on October 11, 2015
    personally as far as males with harry go i would favor collin and or dennis creevey. i would not think harry would end up with someone he might fear returning him to the role of slave if only in the bedroom. i see this harry wanting to be the boss even in the bedroom and one or both creevey brothers would allow that since they see harry as a walking talking god of sorts or at least a superstar.
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on October 11, 2015
    well as far as a house for harry goes i personally think no true slytherin would be caught dead in that house. they would be smart enough to try at least into talking the hat into any other house. it is much better to be king of hufflepuff by the end of fourth year then just a flunky in slytherin for seven years.
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on October 06, 2015
    I am really enjoying this story. I wonder what Harry will think of Draco and Ron. I can't wait until he meets Snape :-)
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  • From CDGaymer on October 05, 2015
    what gona be his wand core? something from an Acromantula maybe. Good chapter
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  • From CDGaymer on October 03, 2015
    it will be curious if he gets the same wand as in the books, or a different want all together. will he meet dray in the robe shop. still wondering what house he will go in. very good story so far.
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  • From Aelys_Althea on October 02, 2015
    I'm really liking your story. Not that I don't like romance - and can't wait to see what you come up with - but it's really nice to read one that has a solid plot. It's really interesting! I'm really looking forward to the Hogwarts phase, however long it lasts.
    And thanks for your frequent updates, too. I wasn't sure if you'd dropped it there for a while. So glad you didn't!
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  • From BBWulf on September 29, 2015
    Great, was a little worried. Some authors are offended by the littlest of things. It makes sharing any opinion rather difficult, if not pointless. And I like the more realistic approach, slow buil and experimentation are usually great, as long as the author is at least decent. So you have no worries there. And yeah, I'm pretty sure I'd at least see the more obvious clues being thrown out. Not that it matters a whole lot, I'm not a homophobe, I'm just not interested. :) As for continuing to enjoy things, I'm sure I will. You've already proven to be a great author, and I quite like almost all of what I've read thus far. Haha, anywho, thanks for this chapter, and I'll be sure to check the fic often for an update. :)
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  • From Tesgura on September 27, 2015
    This is a fascinating story and I'm only sorry I didn't see it sooner. You don't get in trouble for changing areas btw, people change the pairing area very often after they realize the pairing in their stories so mods don't even notice it. I can't wait to see Harry in Diagon Alley, possibly telling someone he doesn't need a wand or at least seeing how he deals with all the people and attention.
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  • From ANON - Sweet Wisteria on September 25, 2015
    I enjoyed this chapter- poor Ren. Why was Mrs Applegate so hard to ensnare? Was it her personality, or was she a squib or something else?

    I think I'm most excited to see how Harry will deal with 'traditional' magic. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    As for switching sections, I don't know if you'd get in trouble. That seems a dumb thing to get in trouble for, but what do I know?
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