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Reviews for Don't Let The Whirlwind Pass By

By : starstruck86
  • From tambrathegreat on February 03, 2010
    I think this is my sixth or seventh time to read this story. May I please have another? I love the chemistry you build between these two.


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  • From lemonade8 on January 11, 2010
    I think this was really engrossing, very good. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From tambrathegreat on November 11, 2009
    I am so sorry. I meant to reveiw every chapter, but found myself hitting the forward buttont ot see how this would end. Thanks so much for their happy ending. The entire story was haunting and beautiful.
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  • From tambrathegreat on November 11, 2009
    That was an achingly beautiful first chaper. I'm sorry I missed this story from the beginning. Do you do an update list? If so, my email is;

    tambrathegreat@gmail.com.
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  • From VenusOfHeaven on October 24, 2009
    I can
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  • From abbicee on October 23, 2009
    I'm running behind again. I have to say the end had me a bit worried. Severus' thoughts seemed so down I was sure something bad had happened. Luckily he was just being morbid, good thing Ron came in to cheer him up. While I always thought Ron would eventually tell his family, or at least one of his brothers about his life during his time away I never expected it come out the way it did. Poor Ron, he must have been so mortified. Thank God for Severus. And now it's over. But, I noticed you have a new story out so I think I'll hop over and start a new adventure. :-)
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  • From ANON - hairsprayX12 on October 20, 2009
    Oh my goodness!!!

    I cried, I laughed,I blushed repeatedly and I fell in love with Ron and Severus all over again!!!

    Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us :)

    Can't wait to see what you come up with next, though I must confess, you've made me curious to see what you could come up with as far as a Sirius/Severus storyline (even though I have always thought Sirius is a bit of a spoiled brat and Severus should have kicked his ass)or maybe even a Charlie/Remus storyline (love Remus and Charlie too)

    But anyway, did I mention, I loved this, sure both Ron and Severus were broken and a bit battered but they fit perfectly with each other. And as always you did such an amazing job with all the swirl of emotions they were feeling and once again your wonderful humor came shining through. Waiting with bated breath for your next extraordinary fic :)




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  • From badkittyuno on October 19, 2009
    Loved it! What a wonderfully written story. Definitely my favorite versions of these characters.
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  • From SeraphimeRising on October 18, 2009
    Absolutely beautiful. I loved how you ended it, especially that Ron had to deal with everyone knowing what he was prior to his return. I can not wait until your next Ron/Snape story!
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  • From LadyZombie on October 18, 2009
    Whew! No one died. You did have me a bit worried there after that gut squeezing chappie. Yes, you squeezed them again, but it was a good squeeze.

    Peacocks and over compensating Malfoys....hehehehe!

    To imagine Ron living with Severus, doting over a cat, and bringing his old bat cups of tea, makes me smile.


    If awards ever go out for Ron/Snape shippers, you must have it!


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  • From ANON - morganabythesea on October 18, 2009
    Sorry I haven't reviewed for this one, but as always, it was fantastic! :-)

    RL has been bad, but this story gave me something to look forward to. I read all of your stories after "Invitation" (my first) and loved them all. I knew you almost always have happy endings and needed that, so again I am thrilled.

    I have to say (maybe again) that there is something not only to the content, but the language, and flow of your stories that interests me and soothes me somehow. Even the sad ending of "Invitation" obviously left me wanting to read more of your style and stories. So thank you for sharing them and for being an incredibley talented writer!

    My pc died and I finally was able to buy a lap-top, love the capabilities, hate the keyboard! :-) It is so hard to get used to, I keep dragging my wrist over the scroll. LOL

    Looking forward to the next story as always. :-)

    Morgana


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  • From talley on October 18, 2009
    The last chapter was a wonderful opening of the two. Ron so honest and sincere. Severus finally letting himself love again fully. Surprised by Harry's visit but loved his message. I adore your Weasleys. Miffed we never learn of the horrendous client who beat our poor Ron forcing the end of this story. I had a few of the things Severus said and the felt but I lost them before I could safely put them here, but you had some magnificent insights and sayings that really put this relationship for me as true and core to the what makes these two work when put in the right hands. I'd be interested to see a few more years down the road after the aftermath of his past hopefully more behind him and the public and his family and friends. The epilogue had me wondering what the hell you were going to do, yet I trusted and you delievered . . . a wedding. *sighs of great relief*

    Looking forward to more from you.
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  • From ANON - Sheree on October 18, 2009
    Sob-by slopply smiles -

    It looks like they have a future full of ups and downs ahead, but all in all a happy lot.

    Thank you for the journey - it wasn't the happiest ride but it was truly fulfilling in the end.
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  • From ANON - kai on October 18, 2009
    it ended, i'm sad and happy about this.
    i really did love this story. i liked how you played how everyone found out ron was a whore, i guess you wanted more angst there, making it not their choice that they found out. if ron told, it wouldn't have been as bad as them finding out themselves and not just the family found out the whole wizarding community found out, thats harsh but it all worked out in the end and that's all that matters.

    great job & i can't wait for the next one!!
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  • From talley on October 16, 2009
    What a lovely chapter. Joy to see feisty Albus. Who knew a portrait could put Snape in his place? I loved the Weasley reunions. Poor Harry but he knows whats best for Ron. I loved the ending. I teared up quite a bit and sniffed a few times. *will not admit to actual tears following Ron's tears* The poem was poignant and great way for Severus to explain himself. Loved loved the ending with Ron wanting to now to want to save Severus. I know it's not going to be pretty rainbows and cute kitties and puppies but looking forward to the wrap up of this very psychological story.
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