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Reviews for The Wages of Going On

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on January 27, 2014
    Wow! *breathes out a sigh of relief^ I'm so glad to see some common sense ruling urges in this wonderful menage a trois you've cooked up. They are all going to need each other in order to live and thrive...and to have a chance to find and defeat all of those that wanted to destroy them. This seems to be the tip of the conspiracy, and I think that there is much more to come. Let Severus and Harry finally find some ground they can agree upon, and let Draco be that mitigating factor that gets it done. I was so glad to see Severus rein in his pride and use that formidable brain of his, and for Harry to finally be thinking with something other than he resentment. After all, it wasn't Draco and Severus' idea to do that to him...it was Harry's own.
    Thanks for another interesting, awesome chapter! I was so happy to see them doing something right for a change.
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on January 19, 2014
    Whew! Thanks for a chapter were they all at least stood in a room without coming to blows. And thanks for Severus finally finding that man of control that he'd been for so much of his life. These three men are not going to be able to make any progress with any part of this if they don't act together, and I'm glad that they're all starting to see and accept this. Harry in particular. Now that they have some answers, they at least have a place to start from, and avenues to investigate, and by working together they'll find out more and faster than if they were working separately.
    I enjoyed reading this chapter, and seeing some form of detente forming. I know already that it won't be permanent, but they've taken the first step and that's good.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 18, 2014
    about #15?

    I have to ask..the poem this story is based on, does it have to do with Harry?
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  • From BAFan on January 18, 2014
    Ch. 14 & 15

    *snort* I should have known this would quickly become even more complicated; after all, it's one of your fics! Is Snape ever going to admit that he feels guilty about the rape even though logically he knows there was nothing he could have done to prevent it? Of course, guilt can be highly illogical. Maybe he feels that he should have been able to do SOMETHING, especially since Harry was able to twist the ritual to keep them alive.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 17, 2014
    about #14....

    Well I'm caught up. Though it's too early to judge, the more I read these stories
    of yours with the three of them, the more you make me slooowly see the appeal of them together.
    Though as of right now, Ashborn has that appeal, with the way they're fighting here, I wonder if
    this bond will EVER work.

    By the way, which pairing do you like...Harry/Draco, Harry/Severus or all three together?
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on January 10, 2014
    I'm really glad they solved part of the problem. This chapter I found myself thinking 'Oh, Draco' rather than about Harry. It's nice to see that Severus is growing up a little bit too and that they all confronted their feelings in some way during the chapter.
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on January 10, 2014
    Oh oh. I do hope Harry gets the help he needs, especially since the bond has gotten worse.
    I'm glad Malfoy was able to man up and pull up his big boy pants and take responsibility. Even if his apology broke Harry. It was really the first thing Snape and he should have done instead of blaming Harry.
    I can't wait to see what happens next.
    Excellent chapter.
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on January 10, 2014
    I'm still in 'Oh, Harry' mode. It sucks that the bond is turning on him and that Snape's being an arse when Harry was the only one to do something to help them all at sacrifice to himself.
    I do hope that things start looking up for them soon and that they find a way to come to agreement even if they can't break the bond.
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  • From ANON - writeaddict on January 10, 2014
    Oh, Harry. This chapter made me sad.
    It was very well written but I have a feeling the bond isn't completely gone.
    It'll be interesting to see what will happen.
    Excellent chapter.
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  • From pittwitch on January 06, 2014
    I really enjoy the counteracting between the three bondmates: Harry's stubborn, just plain Gryffindor-ness, Draco trying to negotiate between the two, and Snape's churlishness - now seen vented in masterful dueling fashion. Well done!
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on January 03, 2014
    Ah, Hermione isn't often limited by what she initially sees. Usually she digs deeper and discovers all that she can about the disadvantages and benefits of a thing. The fact that she hasn't done that with this bond is a little disappointing. I'm hoping that she'll expand her horizons and see just what could be accomplished with the bond were it to allowed to develop. You, yourself, mentioned the sharing of power. The linking of minds, and the ability to travel quickly and accurately. Those are rather obvious advantages. Of course, that would mean that these disparate personalities would have to work together, and that seems unlikely.
    Though...you've certainly set up a situation where it might but Severus and Draco coming to the rescue now. LOL And I think that qualifies as marvelously drastic.
    Thanks for another chapter. I enjoyed reading it, and seeing some miniscule progress made. That was very nice, indeed.
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 02, 2014
    Great, thanks.
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  • From BAFan on January 01, 2014
    Ch. 12

    Oh shit. I had a feeling that Harry was being a bit too reckless with his spying. And now the plot thickens.
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  • From pittwitch on January 01, 2014
    Not Notte!

    This isn't going to go well for anyone, is it?
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on December 23, 2013
    Boy, oh boy, if these three ever get together to really talk and not rip at each other like rabid dogs, they might find they actually agree on something and then the world might end! LOL Draco's about the only one showing any common sense...so you know that the world might just be ending already, for me to have said something like that. Both Severus and Harry are acting very much like each other and are to alike to be of any use, and until something terribly drastic happens that smacks them all back into reality, I fear we're just going to see an endless repeat of what we've already seen.
    I like to say that common sense isn't...and that has certainly been proven true here. Harry accuses Snape of carrying on a grudge while he does the exact same thing. Severus resents being controlled yet again...and Draco's clear intelligence comes from a self-concern so powerful he'd do anything to make sure that he was safe. All in all it looks like SNAFU all over again!
    Thanks for another chapter in which I wanted to slap them all silly. Including Hermione, which usually doesn't happen. For a smart witch she's missing out on the true advantage of this bond, something that she doesn't normally do.
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