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By : Lomonaaeren

From BAFan on July 28, 2014
Ch. 43

So...are you planning a sequel? 'Cause even though the ending put a sappy smile on my face, it still really doesn't feel complete - well, not to me anyway. Regardless, it was a fantastic story! One of your best.
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From ANON - chelseaplume on July 23, 2014
Oh, wow! Somehow I didn't expect that it would end there. That there would be more and that Harry would truly begin to know that he had nothing to fear from Severus and Draco and what they'd found together. I guess I'm glad that he has the beginnings of that, though, and that he knows now that he can trust them. Thanks so much for laying a long and treacherous path to get to this place. It may have started out with a bit of a trope, but it really made itself into an involved and complicated story of relationships and trust. I have enjoyed it all the way along, no matter that it may have sometimes frustrated me. Well done. You've a wonderful touch with these characters.
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From ANON - SP777 on July 21, 2014
about the end...

Well, the ending was unexpected, I kinda hoped they would have talked a little more about
what might happen between them & how they would work thru it, but I guess it went as far as
you felt.

Good story tho', despite my occasional need to strangle Harry.
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From ANON - SP777 on July 16, 2014
about #42...

1. Are you talking about a smushname or portmanteau name like Drarry for Harry/Draco? I
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From BAFan on July 16, 2014
Ch. 42

Whew, that's a relief! Very interesting interruption to the ritual. I hadn't expected Draco to place that question above knowing whether or not Voldemort had returned. Really looking forward to the next update!
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From ANON - chelseaplume on July 11, 2014
Wow, nicely done. You've got them all kind of tip-toeing around each other feeling out their way. Draco was way more forward than I'd have ever given him credit for, and Harry far more open to the idea than I would have thought. That means that now he'll be thinking about those things while they're apart, and I wonder just what thoughts he's going to have? lol I was also glad to see that Severus had put aside his snarkiness to answer Harry honestly when he asked about their continuing relationship. That was very mature of all of them.
Thanks for the update. I truly enjoyed reading it.
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From ANON - SP777 on July 10, 2014
about 41..

Okay, now u got me curious...what name would be considered a good one for this triad?
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From moodysavage on July 09, 2014
lol poor Harry the former virgin who doesn't realize why being held against a wall is sexy. I liked how Severus caught Draco's reaction to that and how Draco caught Severus' reaction when Harry mentioned being equal with them. Of course they can't point everything out to Harry at once about what they want... but it's going to be fun watching Draco work for that closeness goal... and Severus too :)
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From ANON - Naughty_megs on July 09, 2014
Love this story! You are def one of my favourite authors on here! Keep up the great work.
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From ANON - SP777 on July 04, 2014
about #40...

Well it just got complicated. Understatement much?
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From BAFan on July 03, 2014
Ch. 40

Wow. So relieved that the Golden Trio are still friends. That conversation had me holding my breath. Actually, both of them did. I suspect Draco is also feeling especially vulnerable right now because of the way Harry moved away from his touch in Tarriash's office.

Eager to see what comes next....
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From ANON - SP777 on June 30, 2014
about #39...

In other words, Draco was trying to imply something here, like in the
last chapter...he wants to be close to Harry and it doesn't seem to be in
a platonic way.
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From ANON - ChelseaPlume on June 29, 2014
Wow! Incredible! The ways and means the men used to get the information they needed were striking and difficult, and yet they did it as a united front, and as one unit, standing strong even when they took the time to question and restrain each other. They really are becoming a fearsome force amongst them, one that will soon be able to overcome anything I think. You've done a brilliant job reconstructing their bond to each other. Only now you've done it voluntarily, and on a level that will someday be just as deep as the original, but in a completely different way. Well done. I'm looking forwards to seeing what comes next.
Oh, and Severus' spell? Very imaginatively wicked, that one!
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From pittwitch on June 28, 2014
Now, I love Severus. :D Thanks for sharing. The progression thus far has been a marvelous treat.
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From ANON - Chris on June 27, 2014
I think they should go back and kill Tarriash later on, once she's no longer protected by the hospital wards.

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